Variety Comics: Time Stops! Moxuluo, Kneel Down for Me

The writing is good, but no, buddy, you are really worth ninety-nine. I didn't say it, but when I think about it carefully, I feel that the more I think about the plot, the weirder it becomes. If you want to kill Fushiguro Megumi, why don't you just kill her at the beginning? You have to do so many things later, and then the plot is so bloody that you kill Jiujiu. I don't understand the meaning of killing her. Is it just to highlight the protagonist's determination to go to heaven? But I think about the six conditions and it doesn't conflict with not killing the character. I thought you can go to heaven without using your own golden finger. You can control your own destiny, but the problem is that the protagonist thinks that Platinum Star is not his golden finger, which makes me laugh. If Platinum Star is not a golden finger, I will take it. You have to know that Fushiguro Megumi and Kujiu are both very popular characters. What's the point of having Jiujiu and the protagonist be so ambiguous? Make it more uncomfortable for the audience to watch? Also, the protagonist was 18 years old before time travel, right? After more than thirty years of time travel, he has not changed at all? Not mature at all? In the early stage, he really looked like a super hero rather than a king. Also, what is the purpose of killing Fushiguro? I went back and rewatched it for a long time, but I still couldn't understand why the protagonist insisted on killing Fushiguro. Is it just because Fushiguro was not at Zenyuan's house? Then if you say that I don't recognize this king as gentle and kind, or do you want ten shadow spells? But the protagonist just said that shadow magic is rubbish and he doesn't need it, so what's the point of killing Fushiguro Megumi? And why do you want to write about Dio but insist on writing about Star Platinum? It is said to be a collection of Jotaro from all timelines, but the protagonist is obviously Dio and not Jotaro. And which king is so immature? Even arrogance and arrogance are not enough to cleanse him. This is completely evil. Also, what about invincibility? Didn't you say this is an invincible article? I'm not going to give it a flat thumbs up, but at least don't be fooled by the fact that Ninety-nine can rely on the gravity brought by its huge mass to stop and move at all times. The main character shown at that time was just like a 🤡. Without platinum, he is nothing. Do you call this a king? You said platinum is not your golden finger? Don't make me laugh. Dio is still the king of vampires without his substitute. Jotaro is still a doctor of oceanography and a rich young man without his substitute. And you, my friend, you are really nothing without your substitute.

Dude. This book is an invincible flow, a spell fan, and jojo ability. Readers who want to read fan fiction basically have a few favorite characters. In your article, you want to kill the popular character Hui Hui at the beginning? Also, it is very difficult to write about Wudiliu without writing about daily life. Besides, the fans know the plot. It's like playing a stand-alone game for two weeks. No leveling, no exploration. Judging from your current plan, buddy, it should be to kill the protagonist after the spell. Let's put it this way, generally the protagonist is not happy if the author weakens him from very strong to strong (weakened from top-level to first-rate) or even stuck. If you want to weaken from invincible to not invincible, it is even more excessive. A supporting character returns the spell with a spell. What happened to Gojo Satoru who was reduced from invincible to second best and was scolded? Also, the spell return battle itself was written as Yigu, but the hang-up was too big to write, so it was replaced by Huzi. The situation of Wudiliu is like this. It can't be cut or suppressed. Wudiwen's only way out now is daily life.

1. Don't use your brain when reading this book. You may feel that the strange plot is trying to filter you out, so don't leave any gaps. 2. I made some patches and self-explanations at the beginning to add rationality and refine the readers again. If you don't have enough time, it is recommended to skip it. 3. The author is very enthusiastic. You can find him in the comments in the article. Please encourage him when you see him.

Fake invincibility, with just a few cards, someone can fight against it, maybe even beat it

Yuki is dead [what] The protagonist is really cruel, I thought Yuki was the heroine [face covering]

Didn't it say at the beginning that we should read Chapter 50? Why did I stop reading Chapter 49? [Angry] Did I win the author's Golden Experience Requiem? So I can't read Chapter 50.

Love watching, the cheats are invincible, the main character is crazy + the second grade + decisive in killing Both men and women are killed, both good and bad, and the ratio of the second period to the second period is 2.5. The more I write, the more boring I become.

At present, this is an invincible novel, and the main plot is to treat the protagonist's mania.

The actual review is surprisingly good (I only watched Conjuration). It feels like watching an anime. The protagonist can do whatever he wants. It's very enjoyable to watch.

Very pretty! It feels really good, but it feels a little weird, I can't put it into words!

In fact, it's quite good-looking, but there are too many characters created by the protagonist inserted in the middle. It's quite interesting to see that in the back, the brain flower occupies Yuta's body, Shika Ziyunichi occupies Kinji's infinite body and uses his ultimate move, and the body occupied by the King of Curses opens up the court area. So disappointed and getting bored

The previous article is very interesting, but I just want to ask after reading this book, but what about the male protagonist? Or two male protagonists? Or something else?

It's a five-star rating, except for the fact that the protagonist is a little unhappy about being plotted against. And I always feel like I'm not that smart

Isn't it the sum of the character's powers in all timelines? Shouldn't it be Platinum Star Beyond Heaven?

Give yourself a five-star review, okay. Don't pay too much attention to negative reviews. Some people don't read it carefully and like to skip chapters. They miss out on key information and say there is a problem. There is no trace of the original plot in this book from beginning to end. In my mind, when the protagonist intervenes, the stronger the power, the greater the change in the world. Everyone will start the plot around the protagonist, not to mention that the protagonist's strength has changed from invincible to even more invincible. It is impossible to follow the original plot. If you read a book based on the plot of the original work, of course you won't understand it if you skip it. However, this is something that fans cannot avoid. Many people just like to brush it off, and the author can't explain anything. There are also deductions for the settings. This is a second creation. The settings of the original work are full of loopholes, so here are the settings for the second creation. I can at least guarantee that the setting of my book has been integrated very reasonably.

Although there are many poisonous points, I still support it.

My ninety-nine Yuki ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.

The author should update it quickly. This kind of cool article should be updated with two chapters a day or three chapters a day. The author is very grateful. Otherwise, it won't be around for a long time.

Good-looking, the protagonist is different from other works, I look forward to his Beyond Paradise Canteen Spicy Sauce

It's very cool and looks good. As a JOJO, I agree.

Haokang, will the protagonist's personality change in the future?

Come on, it's a rare good fan article, the author has his own ideas

The writing is indeed good. The whole book was conceived and written with my mind. It is not like the ordinary roadside routines. The plot is very ups and downs and catches people. If it is not popular, maybe the audience of the subject is a bit niche. I feel that it can be published at the starting point. If the subject is changed to a larger audience, it has the potential to become popular [Chigua] There may be some problems with the details of the plot, but overall the main outline can be seen. In fact, the writing is quite stable. It would be better to polish the details so that no one will complain.

I want to ask, who is the heroine?

A good book, I enjoyed reading it

Nice to watch, love to watch, love to watch

Just watch it for fun

It's really possible, author, don't give up [Like][Like][Like]

Not bad, let's continue watching the follow-up

It's okay. Platinum Star has relatively few novels. Please support me.