Entering an Official Position from a Poor Family, Ascending to the Emperor's Palace in the Morning and Becoming a Free Official in the Evening

I want to give it five stars, but I can give it two stars for the fifth chapter. I blindly guessed that there will be scenes of four small homeless people in the future, focusing on repaying evil with kindness. Um, I hope I guessed wrong. Don't be so outrageous. Modern laws for the protection of minors have begun to be improved. In ancient times, don't do what the Holy Mother did.

I just read the previous ideas and I think it's pretty good. I'm looking forward to the author's next plot.

The storyline is pretty good and the writing is pretty good too!

Please give it a bad review. When you read Chapter 7, there are huge mistakes in the book. If you can correct it, you should correct it as soon as possible. 1 It is understandable that the original protagonist Xiaoshan's IQ is not high enough: 200 copper coins are hidden in the insole of the shoe, and more than 10 copper coins are held in his mouth without opening, and he is chased and beaten by 4 young homeless people. 2 The author should write clearly 2 points: ① Why did the young protagonist go to the town and earn more than 200 copper coins by selling something? Why didn't he go? For example, he explained that he was not feeling well. ② Key point: Is he a homeless person or a beggar? 3. The protagonist's shoes and clothes should actually be taken away, which means that 200 copper coins will also be taken away. The refugees are short of clothes and shoes. Therefore, the author needs to revise how to write it reasonably. Reasonability is the first focus of a good novel.

It's not too much to support your own book [exploration][exploration]

You can do business and take scientific exams, but you can offend people everywhere and participate in the court at a young age without getting any fame. There are also games with soldiers at the age of 10. The physical games are very fake. He is just a kid who doesn't know how to fight. For more extreme things, after seeing the bad things done by Butler Liao, he is really not prepared at all. Is this a mature person?

It's funny, the writing is really good, and the emotional description is very delicate. I'm looking forward to the next plot, come on!

My writing skills need to be improved...

Good looking, not bad

Author, can you put 200 copper coins in your shoes?

Why did the author just inherit the body of the original owner when he left with the wind instead of helping me get revenge? Why don't you give the original owner an explanation so clearly? He is him... You are whoring for nothing.

In fact, I don't understand that a county magistrate accused of collaborating with the enemy and treason would not be strictly guarded and could be killed so easily, and even under the eyes of the imperial envoy [laughter]

It's really awesome. The original person was beaten to death. You can wear it because the original person is dead, so you won't take revenge. It's really a shame.

It's beautiful, I've been following it

The next day is not a vertical day [laughing]

What's this farce about a small family in the countryside?

Not bad, not bad!

Good looking, recommended.

I don't usually talk about it, it's still unfinished

Nice. . . .