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Thank you very much. I've seen the latest 80 chapters or so, and here's a little comment: 1. It is written in the form of a person who pays attention to it. The difference is that it is not just a matter of fact but an archeology. To be honest, this hole was not well buried. As for the world structure, there is currently no poison and no power that oppresses people. It's just that the plot is a bit cliche. 2. It can be said that the problem lies in the characters. I suggested it more than 40 chapters ago. There seems to be some progress now, but not much. The protagonist is still at three o'clock and one line every day. As for the heroine, the classic vase lady is not very sweet, at least it is not poisonous. Suggestions: Establishing a sense of authority and trust takes a long time. Don't just go to work and get off work every day. You can tolerate it in the early stage, but you have to have some restraint.

Daily writing will do. Write more happy things and less official things.

Super beautiful, good luck to the author

Super nice [admiration] Big boost to the author ✊!

Very pretty, not bad, not bad

Red and fiery, in a trance

Not bad, urban relaxed writing

Well written, keep up the good work

Personally I think it's ok

Personally I think it's okay. Come on

Because I like you so much, I feel so hard

Come on, come on, come on, raise your score!

Dear readers, if you have any opinions, you can express them here. If you have suitable materials around you, you can also express them, such as dramatic accidents, sudden deaths, etc.

It's okay for the time being,

Very good and beautiful