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Can anyone enter the archaeological site?

If you have money, don't give it to Xue Li, but give it to Feng Yu, who you don't know very well. The black silk stockings are also hers. I even doubt whether the author has a crush on her. Although it is said that she is the only one who broadcasts the live broadcast, she is not familiar with her. She is about to write a great novel, but she doesn't spend any money.

Let me give five stars first so that more people can see it, including the author. The writing is okay. Now let's talk about the white jade with slight flaws. First, check more information when writing. Carbon monoxide poisoning is not that fast. I was poisoned twice when I was a child. Either you change ten minutes to one hour. (In fact, there is a high possibility of being rescued in one hour.) Or you can save the life. Generally, there is no need for rescue for half an hour. It will heal on its own with ventilation and exercise. The second is that buddy from high altitude. If you can't make a call, will 110 know? Does your ambiguous girlfriend talk to the organizer of the competition if she talks to you at the scene? Wouldn't this save her? Don't write female videos, conflict for the sake of conflict, write like a fool like Zhen Huan

Thank you very much. I've seen the latest 80 chapters or so, and here's a little comment: 1. It is written in the form of a person who pays attention to it. The difference is that it is not just a matter of fact but an archeology. To be honest, this hole was not well buried. As for the world structure, there is currently no poison and no power that oppresses people. It's just that the plot is a bit cliche. 2. It can be said that the problem lies in the characters. I suggested it more than 40 chapters ago. There seems to be some progress now, but not much. The protagonist is still at three o'clock and one line every day. As for the heroine, the classic vase lady is not very sweet, at least it is not poisonous. Suggestions: Establishing a sense of authority and trust takes a long time. Don't just go to work and get off work every day. You can tolerate it in the early stage, but you have to have some restraint.

All I can say is that this Sydney is very unnecessary. Still pretending

Old fashioned tactics

It's a novel that you can read. The very old subject matter should have been aesthetically tired for a long time. I can't enjoy reading this novel, but it won't make people disgusted. It can barely pass the time. It's just that the dead anchors are too intellectual. The protagonist has millions of fans and has been on the hot search countless times. I can understand that those anchors don't know them, but it's too outrageous that the agents don't know them. They can't even recognize them.

The topic of e-sports goddesses has always been around. In the process of contact with women, there will always be cliché and unexpected close encounters. The heroine has not made it clear whether it is a stud novel. The theme content focuses on the prediction of death, and the daily content is sloppy. In order to get together with a girl, meet a new female character, and kiss her all by accident within ten chapters.

Daily writing will do. Write more happy things and less official things.

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