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I read the beginning and found it okay. I hope I can continue to do so. However, my suggestion is to just write a heroine novel without cp. It's very good. It's well written. I've been reading it. It's a pity that no one has read such a good book. I hope the author can keep it up. It doesn't matter if it's faster or slower. I just don't stop updating. I'm really scared.

The book is good, and the protagonist is very domineering. HP fans rarely see this kind of female protagonist who lifts the table and works alone. Moreover, the protagonist's thoughts are very mature and her talents are outstanding (I feel better than Lao Fu and Lao Deng). However, the author's pen name scares me a bit (bushi), and I hope this book can be completed smoothly.

The author's writing is very cool. I feel that the parent generation should have more cruel struggles between students, instead of petty fights like the children's generation. Moreover, the heroine's character is great. I like it very much. It feels very real. Great support for the author! By the way, make a wish without cp [send heart][send heart][send heart]

It's very beautiful. The heroine is right. The most indispensable thing in this world is people. If you can't become good friends with this person, it doesn't matter. You don't need to change yourself because of this.

It looks good. I like the setting of the heroine's Gryffindor bloodline. I have only seen the setting of the Slytherin bloodline. It breaks the stereotypes among the houses. It is very fresh. I hope the author will stick to it.

I like the heroine. This book is really different. Unlike other HP books, the heroine really has the shadow of a new era independent strong woman. She just does it when she is in trouble. This kind of life creed is really different.

•The idioms are used appropriately and the writing is coherent. •I like Astrid, she is a very motivated person, but at the same time she has the warmth of family members and the perseverance between friends. She is very good at discovering her own shining points and recognizing her own excellence. One of my favorite words she said is: "Mr. Dumbledore, if I have the ability and the opportunity to become better and more outstanding, why should I not strive for it or seize it? If I fail, it can only be because others are better than me, not because I don't have the ability." •I like the family ties, friendships, teacher-student relationships, etc. In this world. Sometimes it brings tears to my eyes. Oh—Astrid's father is really responsible for the family, and her mother is really good! The teachers in w elementary school are really good. Yes, you cannot use a single standard to evaluate children, such as a fault in one aspect. •If you like it, you just like it. There is no reason why. I hope the author and teacher can update it soon! ! ! ! ! ! Never updated! ! ! ! ! ! !

I'm actually quite surprised that so few people have read this book by the author. In fact, his character portrayal is more delicate and the plot is quite interesting. But I think it's a bit bad in some aspects. Of course, this is just my evaluation. The author shouldn't take it too seriously, but I think it's still good. I should give the author five stars. After all, someone who can persist in writing more than 100,000 words is worthy of admiration. And I think this book is really beautiful. There are not many people who can persist in writing a good book, so I give the five stars sincerely and recommend more people to read this book.

Very nice. If you are scolded, hit him back. The writing style is better than some 9.+ Points that are quite watery.

Do you have CP? (I recommend that the heroine be beautiful alone)

It's super good-looking. Although I have other HP fanfics that are also good-looking, the heroine's character in this one is too good for me. She is planning for her own future. She is refined and self-interested but also has the characteristics of other colleges. However, she is very dissatisfied with those friends. She questions and complains when the female bishop gives them things. It is obviously a dangerous situation to learn something to save your life.

It looks great. I like the character of the heroine very much. She has the temperament of a profiteer. I feel that if there is no fetters of family, the next Dark Lord will definitely be the heroine. Dare to think and act, but she is a Slytherin with Gryffindor blood, which is even more interesting.

The character of the heroine is really attractive. From the beginning, she worked hard for life, to later she was unable to help herself in order to survive. Even though she was obsessed with black magic, she still had a kind heart in her heart. It was really hard not to be attracted to the heroine, but I felt that there would be a lot of knives in the future. . . . . The only drawback is that updates are too slow. . . . Also, I couldn't stand to see the heroine being abused. It was so stressful and she had to bear it all by herself. . . . . (Dark Creepy)

Tied with Lan Shou... It's a wonderful family story, without any clichés of school stories. It's heartbreaking and satisfying to watch the heroine fight to realize her ambitions (but the way she treats her mother's condition really feels like she's been soaked in black magic) (but this unsettling flavor is also very charming.

The writing is pretty good, quite interesting, but the description says that the heroine is very ordinary-looking, which I can't accept. I like super-pretty heroines.

It's super cool, and the heroine is super cool. It's rare to see such a cool heroine in HP novels. Maybe I don't read enough.

Come on, the author is great

It's so beautiful, I really like the heroine.

I want money and power, I like this heroine

This is the second very popular book after "Effort Is Not in vain".

Very beautiful and wonderful

Very nice, I like it very much

Although the heroine seems to be no longer a good person, the description of her is still very real. The author should write more! ! !

It should be a new book. The score is low, but it is very interesting. The author writes very well. I have read so many hps. I am very happy to finish this book! I post a comment specifically to recommend it to my fellow fans.

Good looking, awesome and classy, ​​come on, come on

Awesome, the author's outlook on life is really upright. ๑•́₃•̀๑[Blowing Kiss]

It's really good. The writing is getting better and better. I look forward to it. Come on, come on!

I came in looking at the cover, but I didn't expect to finish it at the first glance. It's really good, and the content is really good [crying][crying][crying][crying][crying][crying][crying][crying]

The writing is very, very good. If it is finished, it will be a rare masterpiece∽

Very good, worth watching