Ultra: I Dreamed of Becoming a Street Kid with Fujimiya.

In fact, the plot of Gaia itself is already perfect. My dream has always been very powerful, and I am not confused like other human beings. XIG and Alchemy Star team up to be the strongest among the many defense teams. As long as Aguru does not get sick in the early stage, the difficulty is not high. The next Sky Light will be a simple mode. After all, there are no strong monsters except Zog. Therefore, when writing Gaia plots, one has to either make it a little more difficult, like the one about Moonlight Crew from the Cat Next Door, or wander around and have fun. The author handles it well, but there are a lot of characters that are OOC, which feels a bit inconsistent. Also, Otwen can have more female protagonists, but it's best not to have too many female supporting characters. At least they have to have some effect. Overall, I'd give it an 8.6 Rating.

You don't mind if I give myself a good review [laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

It is not recommended for serious people to read. There are many things in it that are different from the original work, including the timeline and characters.

It's very interesting, a rare world of Gaia. Gaia alone will give you four points, plus the plot, it must be five stars.

I suggest writing about the plot of Atalga arresting three people [laughing evilly]

At most it's an 8.4 Rating, I think it's still okay, it's better than the kind of book that's meant to pass the time.

Just average, with few words and punctuation marks

Well written, my eyes light up

Not bad, cheers for the author

It's very well written, keep it up!