The Deck-Building World

It's okay, I can watch it, give it a five-star encouragement. Let me tell you something that makes me uncomfortable but still acceptable↓ 1. First of all, the protagonist's luck is too low. I saw the author said in his reply to others that it will improve in the future, but the improvement is not big. In my opinion, the protagonist has basically nothing to do with things related to probability. 2. In order to save people, I used all the medicine (didn't the protagonist save some as supplies? With the protagonist's ridiculously low luck, wouldn't he be afraid that a particularly strong monster would appear, although it did not appear)? In order to protect the rescued person, he exhausted himself (although he managed to survive later). Saving people is indeed a good thing, but in order to save Is it worth it when someone almost puts themselves on the line? Later, the rescued person is given fruits that the protagonist exchanged for things that can improve his attributes. (Although the fruits are useless to the protagonist, can't they be exchanged for something useful to the protagonist? If you don't exchange good things for useless things, give them to someone you just met) 3. The girl in the drugstore who has a good relationship with the protagonist knows that the first person to liberate the Noble Phantasm can get an opportunity from the sage but does not tell the protagonist. She sells the protagonist a sleeping potion and lets the protagonist sleep for six hours (without fear of the opportunity being taken away). After the protagonist wakes up, the sage himself finds the protagonist first. Really 6

The first echelon of protagonists, growing up quickly and having strong combat effectiveness, not bad. Let's talk about things that may be criticized. When it comes to rescuing the child, some people may think it's better to not have to guard and carry them back to the safe area. As for the two female students, I don't know what their use is for the time being. People who want to see Liu Bei may think that the protagonist Liu Xiahui is the main character. Then there is the boss. Overall, it's very good. After all, I don't think what I said above is poisonous. Come on, author.

Thank you in advance for your viewing and comments. 1. First of all, the core of the book is based on the form of Earth LO, written with the idea that all players will obtain [Personal Panel] and [Monster Fighting Upgrade]. The main content is mainly adventure and combat. 2. The problem that the protagonist's luck value is too low is a necessary weakening to better improve the protagonist's basic strength and talent. It is a patch to avoid becoming a completely cool article. Of course, the protagonist is undoubtedly at the forefront of players in terms of strength, and overall it is still enjoyable. 3. Introduction to attribute levels and growth methods: There are six types of attributes from low to high: F, E, D, C, B, and A. Among them, F is lower than the average human level, and E is the average human level. On this basis, there will be + and - as small dividing lines according to strength. Then there is the growth method: in addition to the rapid growth of all attributes through killing monsters and upgrading, prop cards, daily exercise, natural materials and treasures, potions, system rewards, understanding passive skills, etc. Can permanently improve attributes to a certain extent, so upgrading is not the only way to become stronger, nor do people at the same level have the same value. If you are satisfied with this, please give it a like and support it. If you have any other suggestions, you can also reply to the author in the book review or book circle! ! Thank you all! ! Happy new year to everyone! Have a smooth journey!

(Above average) Excellent +/8.0+ Points, mark,,,,,, The sense of substitution is good, the plug-ins are average, the settings are good, the writing is excellent, the rhythm is excellent, the imagination is good, the characters are good, the main plot is good, and the logic is good. Extra points: none Personal feelings: There are no obvious loopholes and no surprises. The style is relatively old. #Objective evaluation. If you have different opinions, you can evaluate it yourself. 1. Evaluation of the novel (1) First impression: sense of substitution, plug-ins, settings (2) Overall experience: writing style, rhythm, and imagination (3) Detailed description: character, main line, logic (4) Extra deduction points: data, economy, structure, three perspectives, supporting roles, time, geography, knowledge... (5) Evaluation: ① Excellent (+4), ② Excellent (+2), ③ Good (+1), ④ Average (0), ⑤ Unknown (0), ⑤ Poor (-1), ⑥ Extremely poor (-3). Centered on "lower than average/four stars good/7 points", the evaluation criteria are based on the first nine items, and additional points can be deducted for other items. Every +2 evaluation will increase the score by one level, every -1 for middle or lower will decrease the score by one level, and every -2 will decrease the score by one level. 2. Rating of the novel (1) Shangshang (a good book that suits my taste very well, unexpectedly excellent): (24) Five-star quality++/10 points+. (2) Superior (recognized by everyone as a good book, the number of updates exceeds 1,000): (18) five-star excellent +/9.5 Points, (20) five-star excellent/9.5 Points+, (22) five-star excellent +/10 points. (3) Shang Xia (good books with rigorous and self-consistent logic, good books that do not meet taste): (12) Five-star excellent++/8.5 Points, (14) Five-star excellent-/8.5 Points+, (16) Five-star excellent/9 points. (4) Above average (a good book in the conventional sense, without special features): (4) Five-star good++/7.5 Points, (6) Five-star excellent-/7.5 Points+, (8) Five-star excellent/8.0 Points, (10) Five-star excellent+/8.0 Points+. (5) Middle to lower (a work with average performance, no outstanding highlights, and no major problems): (-5) Three-star poor++/5 points, (-4) Three-star average-/5 points+, (-3) Three-star average/6 points, (-2) Four-star average+/6 points, (-1) Four-star good-/6 points+, (0) Four-star good/7 points, (+2) Four-star good+/7 points+. (6) Xia Shang (a novel with major flaws, but there are still some merits): (-13) One star is extremely poor +/1 point, (-11) ② One star is poor -/2 points, (-9) Three stars are poor/3 points, (-7) Three stars are poor +/4 points. (7) Xiaxia (a book with good writing but distorted views) , the content is harmful, seriously affects the reading experience, and makes people physically uncomfortable): (-15) Two-star extreme bad +/-1 point, (-17) Two-star extreme bad/-3 points, (-19) Two-star extremely bad -/-6 points, (-21) Two-star disaster++/-7 points, (-23) Two-star disaster +/-8 points, (-25) Two-star disaster/-9 points, (-27) Two-star disaster -/-10 points. (8) Medium (the reading experience is disappointing, far from expected, personal experience): Unknown three stars/x points. (9) Inferior (a novel that is unattractive to read, no evaluation): 2 stars unknown/0 points. It feels quite boring, ugh~

The writing is good, and the protagonist is one of the few people in the current novel environment who is not so selfish and indifferent. I personally like it quite a lot. But from what I can see, there are many reasons why I personally think this book is not popular. 1. Problem with the protagonist's emotional drama: The protagonist and many female characters have emotional drama. (Although the protagonist has no such feelings for them) However, the protagonist did not confiscate anyone. This is a poisonous point in the eyes of many current readers. (Don't ask why, people complained about this in many books I read) 2. Protagonist character issue: The protagonist's character is still a bit soft in my opinion. Especially when Taimei sneaks up on Xiao Hei and Sage protects that one. Taimei made the first move, and she must have been aiming to kill her with one blow. The protagonist actually didn't want to kill her, but just made a few more holes in her body and made her howl. Isn't that noisy? A sage can protect one person, why can't he protect another person? The rank of Sage is related to the safety of the entire safe zone. In this situation, his conscience cannot be gambled at all. If the protagonist is still beeping, just slap him to death. Afterwards, let the system arrange someone else. If that doesn't work, the best thing the protagonist can do is personally or ask someone to take more care of this safe zone in the future. When I heard this, I felt like I was just happy that I didn't get wiped out by playing useless 2 to increase the speed, but then the other side was speechless while waiting for you to pull 5 and adjust and then smashed a meteorite down. To sum up, I think the protagonist is not decisive and too soft-hearted. Finally, I think the author's writing is good, and I hope he can adopt my suggestions. If there is a change, it should not be too fast or too blunt. I wish this book has a good score and ending. (Don't hand out the knife)

Very good, as long as there is no heroine, it will be perfect. First of all, the protagonist will not kill innocent people indiscriminately and maintain his own principles. He has a sister who is not the heroine. The protagonist has not been ambiguous until now. He is a savior type. There are not many evil characters in this article. The plot is reasonable. The protagonist is decisive in killing and ahead of everyone. He works hard and has a strong will!

It's better than expected. There are few moral protagonists with high morals. It's a bit uncomfortable in the early stage because of the moral contract spirit and so on. It will lose some resources. Although it has little effect on the protagonist, most readers still don't want the protagonist to suffer losses. Especially this kind of giving up on one's own will make the protagonist feel a bit stupid. There is growth later on, the author explains, by letting things teach others to achieve psychological growth.

It's good. He's not the protagonist who only has eyes for women and killing. He can also help others as much as possible without damaging his own interests. This kind of protagonist is really rare nowadays. I just hope there will be more chapters every day.

I feel that the reason why so few people have read this novel is because of the protagonist's personal character. The lead girl is honest and answers whatever others ask her. The distribution system is to kill monsters by yourself or reward everyone with equal points. I feel that it is okay and an ideal character.

Seeing the latest score, the Holy Mother and the Wealth-dispersing Boy have grown up after being betrayed, and the writing is getting better and better.