Naruto: the Yandere Hikaru Wants to Monopolize Me

Children, when you come up with this title, you have already won half the battle. If you keep telling your children that their writing skills will be better, you will win [smirk]

The writing style is average, but his subject matter is rare, extremely rare, and he always wins.

The subject matter is okay, and there are indeed a lot of small flaws, but it can be read. For example, Chapter 11 talks about bullying the Bai Yang trio, and Chapter 12 talks about Bai Yang being called a genius like Kakashi. Isn't this contradictory [face covering]

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It's embarrassing. Needless to say, the encounter between the protagonist and the light is a bit far-fetched. It would be better to change it according to the plot in the ultimate storm and find the seal by chance during the mission (but the meeting time will be later)

It's really good. Although some parts are unreasonable, it doesn't affect the plot very much. In summary, people have shown it to you for free, so what else do you need about a bicycle?

As long as you don't mess up this plot and keep updating it, it's guaranteed to be a hit, and it's a sure thing [face covering] [OK]

In the introduction, the heroine seems to be the same, and Xiao Qingmei was specially marked. It is not clear when I create a character. The author did not click all the likes and comments. I saw three comments about supporting a single heroine, but I did not see a single like about dual heroines (maybe it is just me who didn't see it). I am currently reading these to see if there are dual heroines in the end. If it is a fan novel, it will be the whole loser. Let's take a look at it first, and then change the score later [Thinking]

It's pretty good-looking, although, I think Tsunade is also the heroine, plus Hikaru and Nayuki, three of them are enough.

The subject matter is very good and the logic is also good, but sometimes some words seem very abrupt, as if they are suddenly inserted. It can be appropriately foreshadowed in the front to make the subsequent plot not so abrupt.

It's so good. I've been looking for yandere stories about Naruto before. Some of them are either about harems or only have a few thousand words, but this book is different. I hope the author can stick to it.

It's more exciting than the new game (but not as exciting as the color chakra) [laughing]

The subject matter is novel, and it can be regarded as a rare yandere novel among Naruto themes. The writing style is relatively ordinary, but it can be easily understood. But it would be more perfect if the omitted parts were written out (just kidding [eat melon]). I highly recommend reading it. The update speed is also okay.

I have seen chapter 49 so far, which is also my latest chapter. I don't know what will happen in the following chapters, but from what I have seen, this is not consistent with the protagonist's disappearance in the Battle of Shenwubi Bridge mentioned in the introduction, so I chose four stars. Of course, if it changes later, then follow the later ones. After all, my latest chapter is only chapter 49.

The main reason is that the characterization of the characters is more detailed, and the yandere part is handled very well. I think the plot progress is relatively slow. Coupled with Uchiha Hikaru, I think the overall feeling is very good

Good news, so good news. Now that Bai Yang is dead, the light is going to be darkened [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] The plot is also relatively new in the Naruto novels. You can take a look. There are no poisonous points so far.

The score for the subject matter is too high. Although the early stage is a bit dull, the writing style has obviously improved. I suggest the author to optimize the early stage. It is still very good. I hope to continue to update it.

Why? Why so few? But I still like Qingmei😋

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Although the writing style is a bit unsatisfactory, it is awesome

Reminds me of a book about Naruto. Uchiha Kaoru is not a girl. Although the plot is a bit broken at the end and the update is discontinued, it is still relatively good.

I don't see any poisonous points, the writing style is slightly poor but can be ignored, the subject matter is novel, overall evaluation: A

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Come on, the author is great, it's a very good book

There is nothing to comment on. I can only say that the author understands us. I can only give you this [like].

What I want to see is this mouth. Author, you must not stop updating. I want to see the Shura Field behind it.

It's so shameless. I just hope it's a one-woman show.

As long as I've been reading books, it's okay to keep reading fan fiction.

As long as you update more, I will do anything [crazy] [crazy] [crazy]