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There are no vulgar jokes, no bad street time travel methods and systems, and the characterization is also very delicate. Each character is flesh and blood, unlike some things where the protagonist is a time traveler who is full of swear words and vulgar jokes.

I thought it was a funny fanfic that opened up my imagination, but I didn't expect it to be a full-on Warhammer-style novel. It is also very particular about the background setting of LOL. The writing style is comparable to the official Warhammer novel. The title is a bit low, but the content is awesome [Love][Love][Love]

It's great, I love watching it, I hope everyone will travel to Warhammer and become the Emperor's sword

First of all, the concept is new enough, at least it is the only Warhammer + LOL book I have seen now; secondly, the writing is good enough, the various scenes are described very delicately, and the emotional description is also handled very comfortably, and it will not feel like reading a running account; finally, it is recommended that those who read it have a little understanding of the background of Warhammer and LOL. That's it, finished product

Very good Warhammer fic - Love from Slaanesh

It's not right that such a good book has so many points! Excerpts from the content: And Electio just stared blankly at the giant in front of him. It was a figure that was majestic than any warrior he had ever seen, as solid as an eternal glacier, and as indestructible as the oldest rock. In Electio's eyes, Rogal Dorn was like a city wall made of ice, snow and rock, standing tall and guarding them all.

The last chapter I read in the afternoon will be gone in the evening... A moment of silence, I don't know when I will see such a good Warhammer fan next time...

Although I don't understand this IP, but seeing how good the discussion atmosphere is, as an outsider, I wish everyone can be reincarnated into the world of Warhammer 40k [smile]

How can I put it this way? The overall book is good, and the characters are also very delicately drawn. However, when it comes to some battle plots and some scenes such as making decisions, the reading is often either very slow, or is cut off directly, so it is a bit uncomfortable to read. (I am also a Cloud Hammer guy, so I really don't dare to say anything more, but I always feel that as a son of Dorne, is this Emperor's Champion a little too indecisive?)

It's good to read. I love reading it. I hope the author won't be like (Dorn on the Rhine) who was drafted for being too loyal [laughs][laughs]

A good book, but there is a small threshold for reading. I hope to write more about LOL. After all, many people come to Runeterra to stir up trouble in the Astartes. I think most of them are five stars. Why is it only 7.3? But it should be 8.5.

Nice! The best Hammer article on Tomato except "Warhammer Time Travel, But I Couldn't Cry"

"No need for mercy! No need for regret! No fear!

Why is the rating a bit low? I feel pretty good.

Can you bring one or two of the missing primarchs together in the lol world? After all, I'm afraid that the protagonist won't be able to beat him when high-level combat power comes out later.

Very well written. , But I want to see the river of blood! ! !

My God, this is definitely a good book about loyalty!

What does the + number mean? ? ? [What]

Immortal Yao Jin is another Hammer novel that I like, so I'll give it a try first.

If you don't want to be drafted, keep your friends loyal [laughter]

Sharp Sword can't have a female protagonist

For now, we can still look forward to the follow-up, after all, the seedlings of the Warhammer series are still growing.

For the sake of the emperor, please be sure to keep updating and do not interrupt! If you dare to stop updating, I wish you to be reincarnated into Warhammer 40k [laughing]

The protagonist is loyal, but more like he is not an emperor to humans [thinking][punch][eat melon][note]

Can't see it now

For the Emperor, love comes from Mars

Author, I'm here to read your new book

Good, good, good, good, good, good, good! ! ! ! ! ! !

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