Traveling Through the World of Martial Arts: the Saint at the Beginning Fell in Love with Me

Give yourself a kiss [blow a kiss][blow a kiss][blow a kiss] I wish my current and future readers a happy New Year's Eve, may my family and country be united, and the world be at peace. [Blowing kiss]

When I read Chapter 120, I felt that there was too much writing about the supporting characters. In the past ten chapters, there was almost no description of the protagonists of the plot, and they were all about supporting characters. It is understandable that the author wants to portray many flesh-and-blood characters, but after all, judging from the previous impression, it is the growth of the protagonist Zhibai. Writing this way will inevitably make me skip the chapter. After all, it does not hurt to not read the story lines of these supporting characters. Also, I have a poor impression of the plot related to the character Xiao Ke. I feel that setting him as a barbarian is a bit unconsidered. I don't deny that there are people with great idealism, but he is a barbarian after all. Even if he is really the kind of chivalrous person in the author's article, does the author want him to win? If he wins, it means that the barbarians will overthrow the Han dynasty in the article, and the Han people will be ruled by the barbarians. This is not something that can be avoided by having many Han people serving as officials in the government. At this point the viewer's perception may be affected. But overall, the author's writing style and rhythm control are very good, and it has a martial arts style. I hope the author will continue to work hard [sending heartfelt wishes]

The advantages and disadvantages are very obvious. Traditional martial arts is very rare. One thing is that the characters are well created. The disadvantages are that there is no priority, too many unnecessary plots, and the main plot is too slow.

After reading it, it doesn't feel like writing a book for the first time, and there are a lot of foreshadowings. The rivers and lakes are just a corner of the country, the fate of the characters, the feelings of family and country, love and hatred. The disadvantage is that the division of force value is blurred, and the emotional line is not that delicate. It is worth watching.

The writing style alone is worth reading, and the logic is acceptable. This is already rare in Tomato. It's just that the length is a bit short now.

There are so many beauties in the country that it attracts countless heroes to bow down. Although the story is about the protagonist's experiences, the talents, experiences, love and hatred of the main supporting characters are all first-class human beings, almost better than the protagonist. It's such a well-thought-out piece of work. Even the second-hand behavior is generally reasonable. The ability to create characters has exceeded the needs of web writing. After watching the supporting characters' heroic heroics for their family and country, I was really overwhelmed by the protagonist's awkward little family spirit. Wishing you a great fire.

The problem with literary youth literature is that these days, people are too impetuous, and they are destined to be niche literature.

It feels like the author wants to spread out the plot to extend the line, and also sees some fantasy elements, making an old book look like new again, a bit like the fantasy TV series that have been popular in recent years.

I read quietly, I don't curse, I don't make rash comments, I like to read, this book is well written, I hope the author insists, and does not want eunuchs, I have seen too many eunuch books, I think this is a good book for martial arts, and the writing is solid. Keep at it, doing what you like is a happy thing, and it has nothing to do with rewards. Come on! Come on! Come on!

The writing is smooth and a rare good book from Tomato

No, if you write so well, why do you get such a low score? Is this subject not popular now?

The author's writing skills are good, and his worldview and characters are consistent with the normal background of the story of nomads invading the Central Plains, and also incorporates the appeal of advanced Han culture to nomads. The only weakness is that the author cannot use the word "qian" correctly. The righteous saint cannot open her mouth and call herself "concubine". This word is used more often by the saints of the devil's sect. Most of the righteous saints call themselves "little sisters".

It's okay, but the relationship is a bit inexplicably poisonous. We fell in love so deeply in just a few days. We can cling to each other and have feelings for each other, deliberately creating the feeling of a Shura field.

A good book, worth reading

It's pretty cool, let's keep chasing it.

Come on, don't play mindless cool articles [Chigua]

It's really good-looking, but I skipped the group portrait part.

I don't think martial arts are very good in online articles. But this book is surprisingly good

Five stars. The characters are interesting and flesh-and-blood. No one appreciates this masterpiece. [Shy][Please update]

Nice. I just discovered it too early and it's not enough to watch.

There is something new in the opening chapter, and the writing is also good.

It's good to read, I feel like I used to read martial arts novels [Like][Like]

Super good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking! ! ! ! It's a masterpiece, keep it up! ! !

Great book, I hope the author finishes it. It's not an invincible novel. Why write about group portraits? The protagonist has too few roles and his growth is too slow.

The story is quite good, Xiaoyu reminds the author: if it is a traditional martial arts novel, the realm should not be too detailed, it is better to be vague.

Quite a martial arts atmosphere!

Good looking, come on

Affectionate, good-looking.

The writing is pretty good

At least it seems to be fine from the front.