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There are 78 novels in 78 games, and the content descriptions are pretty good. It's a mercenary novel with a delta background.

To be honest, this book is quite good. The writing style can be said to be very delicate. You can't tell that it is a work for a novice. I am also an experienced Delta player. The settings of the operators here are quite consistent with the characters. I just feel that it is written about our shepherds. It's too honest and honest. This is the only thing that I feel is different from my own personality. The story of the protagonist Jiang Ye from entering and exiting the dark alley to blowing up the Tower of Babel is quite coherent. To be honest, the plot in the early chapters 1 to 10 can only be considered average. It is not until later that it starts to show its strength from the three brothers in Chapter 1. Wang Chen's sense of madness, who disappeared until the end, can be said to be quite consistent with the character. Jiang Ye's life hangs by a thread, and there is no mention of the brainless protagonist, the invincible Long Aotian. I look forward to Long Yang's performance in the future. If this book really becomes big, maybe it will be officially included in the book by Delta.

It has not left the Delta, and has its own complete plot. Although there are many loopholes in the international situation, overall the flaws are not concealed, and it is much better than other novels in the Delta series. Characterization★★★★ Plot description ★★★☆ Refreshing feeling★★★☆ Recommendation index for the same series ★★★★★

Yes, the plot refers to the game, and the opening words are also suitable for the battlefield. It is very friendly to those who play the game. The appearance of the characters and the origin of the skins (including new characters) are all carefully considered. It is the best among similar articles. It is understandable that the update speed is slower. After all, the game has only been out for a long time [Chigua]

Just a review (I've read half of it now) Let's talk about the highlights first 1: In terms of plot, the three protagonists, the three brothers, and the three forces are great in describing their respective development, but the plot between them is a bit awkward. The story line was slow at the beginning, but suddenly accelerated after Huffman's brick, which caused the story to be a bit fragmented, which is a bit regretful. (As soon as the protagonist's mentality changed in the dark alley, and Blitzcrank merged into this world, I became interested in reading it) 2: The protagonist's own emotional line is a bit confusing (but it fits perfectly with the character design of Crazy Batch) The supporting role brothers were overshadowed by the protagonist. Ah Chen's performance is actually not consistent with the description in the book (because in my opinion, the brothers can be written well from three perspectives) The description of the protagonist's character is perfect, and the crazy criticism is deeply rooted in the hearts of the people. At first, it may be awkward to accept this setting, and then it is very enjoyable to watch the fight. 3: The supporting character Reis is actually one of the highlights of the book, and he is also a crazy critic. He is a superficial brother to the protagonist, which makes this supporting character difficult to hate, and his existence will not be ignored. The characters of other supporting characters are also very distinctive (the author is really good at writing in this aspect, at least in terms of character description in Tomato, it is the best I have ever seen) Disadvantages 1: The description of the operator is actually a little disappointing. After all, in fan fiction, in addition to telling the background story of the game, the characters we can control in the game are also one of the aspects that attract fan readers. However, the character description of the entire team is too mixed with the author's self-setting (it does not mean that the author cannot write like this, but I feel that like writing Reis, he can first pave the way for this character setting, and then lead to conflicts between different people and the protagonist) The presence of the operators in the plot is actually not big, they are more like tools to promote the plot. The emotional line is a bit deliberately dull. My impression of them is not even as good as that of Lao Sai later. 2: As mentioned before, the development of the plot suddenly accelerated and fragmented. This book could actually be written a little more (Hun Quanqin's word count is good 😂) The development of the protagonist's power and the description of the brother's situation could be written more slowly, but it is too fast now. The story of this game is not too big to be honest. If you write it too fast, you will not have to write it later. Moreover, Zoya's foreshadowing plot line can easily collapse due to the current writing method. If the details of the previous and subsequent story plots are not connected, it will cause a very big disconnect. I don't know if anyone has read it, but thank you for reading and commenting. To sum up: (Personal opinion) This book can be rated 4.5 Points. It is a very good work among Delta fans. With the crazy character design of the protagonist and the smooth and smooth plot, it is a good book worth reading [Note]

Although there are currently very few Tomato Delta books, yours is indeed the highest quality fanfic.

I have to say, this book is one of the best characterizations I have ever seen. All the characters are flesh and blood, although there are a bit too many knives. Of course, I hope everyone can have a good ending, including the super hero old lady, but I think this will only appear in the extra chapter at most.

It's very good-looking. The fighting scenes and emotional scenes are all very well written. I enjoyed watching the fighting scenes and also enjoyed the emotional scenes. It's very good. I suspect that the author put something into this book. It's too slow. I feel uncomfortable if I don't read it for a day!

The author must be a veteran of time travel novels. I have been reading novels for 20 years. This book has a very high level of character and plot creation. The logic is clear and the emotional lines are decisive and clear without confusion. The overall background and framework are applied to the game, and it connects various game activities, such as adjutants. The second creation is very innovative, and it is very well integrated with the game background. It is worth reading for fans.

It is different from other books about souls traveling through time travel, which makes this book look good. The descriptions are very detailed and there are many classic plots. It can be said that it is a classic that can be expected in the future.

The writing is very good and restores the plot of the game. It can be seen that the author has paid great attention to the background story. The description of each operator is also relatively restored to the setting. Overall, it is very good. I recommend it to all porridge friends. Leave a 78 expression and wish you a big success [laughter]

The mood is very good, no matter which character you play, you can follow its inner changes. The characters are well-developed. The only drawback is that the update is too 78. I really want to slap him hard with the s12k.

It's really good to watch. After reading it, I felt uneasy for a long time. It was clear that I was once a college student who lived from 8 to 9 in college. In just a few months, he turned into a killing machine. In a different world, he was an alien. His former roommates also left, until I suddenly realized: "I am an alien. I don't belong to this country or this world. All I can do is take revenge before I disappear, even if it means going to die." Until everything burns out

It can be said that it is one of the few Delta books in Tomato. It is the best one, at least it seems to be the most comfortable one for me so far. It is not too awkward and is relatively similar to the settings in the game. There are not too many private settings and some other abstract settings. For example, the other two books are about Veyron. Although the character is quite restored, it is still a little awkward. Not to mention the other one, which is simply named Veyron. Unlike Dragon, it is very abstract. For now, the character setting of this novel is not much different from that of the character in the game. The plot direction and plot ideas are also quite good. The only drawback is that it is too slow and not enough to read. The subject is not very popular on Tomato at the moment, and the popularity of Delta games is not particularly popular. However, the quality of this novel is not bad, and I am very much looking forward to it. As long as the plot and characters are not broken in the future, I guess I will keep following it.

The motion capture and emotional description of the characters are very clever, which may not be the case at the beginning, but as the protagonist gradually becomes stronger, the author's description of the scene is quite sophisticated. I can only say that Ava's psychology is heartfelt. Reis's description is also good, both cunning and careful. The protagonist is also brave and resourceful. Maybe the previous description said that he likes to pick things up. Rubbish, but we are all the same. If you go bankrupt in the game, you can only pick up these things to regain health. But as the strength and vision increase, the protagonist becomes more and more mature. Generally speaking, this book is a rare and good book in the Delta. I will continue to follow up. I hope the author, BYD, can do more. It's not enough. If I don't explode, I will give you the tip of the spear😡 Very good, the foreshadowing is getting more and more loopy without being objectionable

This book is really good, especially the story about Lu Bu fighting for Diao Chan and Sun Wukong. Hundreds of people gathered together in the battle, but Xue Baochai was indeed too strong. If Nuoshou hadn't used an outer ring + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4 six-fold strafing would have killed him. But I am more concerned about what Mai Xiaowen said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguoshan, "Young man is proud, don't show off in front of your sister Mai", which shows Mai Xiaowen's indignation at the monkeys who knocked him to death with three sticks. All in all, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, and many foreshadowings. The fighting scenes are so immersive, and the character descriptions are spot on! There's no Ava in the ending [crying]

A good plot and good battle scenes, overall it is very good. For me, it is also a good choice to read this novel after I was defeated as Red Temperature in the Delta (after the season update, I have defeated almost 20 million in total, I am a real Red Temperature)

Very exciting, the best fanfic in Delta. It is indeed a very good fanfic, with battlefield maps, new operators, new maps, etc., But it has been very frustrating from the middle. In December last year, I said that I had no knives, but it was sweet. Then in July, half a year, it was all about knives. The author did not come out to express my feelings, and the readers had no idea. In the end, almost all the protagonists did not believe it, and they did not know whether they were dead or alive. It can be seen that the author wanted to write something grander and have a larger world view, but you went a bit too far and almost everyone died. How can you be ok with it? ? I wish the author a big hit but can't take it out, and the whole outfit will have his legs trimmed and his handles blocked.

It's a very good book. It's probably a new release. It's not very popular, but the plot and fighting scenes are quite detailed. I was so excited when I read this book [face covering]

This book is the best Delta fanfic I have read so far. The writing is okay, and the character creation is top-notch. It's him at 7 o'clock. This book only focuses on describing the vision of the three protagonists after they travel through time. And their fate. But I didn't write about the exhilarating feeling of touching gold and red. But this is only so far. I hope the author will stop writing about swords. [Smile][smile][smile]

This book is really enjoyable to read. Although the male protagonist's IQ is online throughout the whole process, although he is not a smart protagonist, his character creation is very successful. Rather than being a fan novel, it is more like a growth history of the protagonist with the Delta as the background. Moreover, the author's combat descriptions are full of tension and there are no NT operations (there is one poisonous point that is really poisonous)

I think what attracts me the most is his setting of the world and the description of many characters in it. As a player of three seasons of Delta, it really gives me a very different feeling. The one that stands out to me the most among the fanfics is the five-star

I really have to say that the work written by the author is really good in the delta version. Well, it can highlight the strength of special operations operators and make readers feel how powerful they are. Unlike other Delta novels, which always feel that the operators have little strength, and the protagonist's strength transitions smoothly, it can describe the growth of his strength without feeling inconsistent. Come on!

It is of high quality, worth following, the plot is coherent, and there are basically no bad points. The protagonist is of good quality and the characterization is also good. I added a bookshelf. I came back to read it a month later. It was uncomfortable to read because there were too few chapters. I need to save more and come back to read it in one go. It is now five o'clock in the morning. I was very sleepy. I was so excited to read it that I couldn't sleep. The author should hurry up!

So pretty! ! ! ! ! The characters are flesh and blood, as if they are right in front of you, there are many knives, and you can enjoy eating them. It truly tells a complete story. It is not like other fan novels and games. In short, it is so beautiful.

It's really good-looking, the plot is very compact, the various connections are well written, it's cool enough, and there are hats, and the characters are very full [Sending my heart] [Sending my heart] The disadvantage of writing it like this is that the author really can't do it well, the chapters are too compact, I'm afraid I can't write a million [Thoughts]

Come on, it would be nice if there were more chapters. This is a fanfic I read about Delta. There are no blocking points, and I enjoyed reading it. But when will the male protagonist be able to get rid of that disease? Is it a little bit abusive to the protagonist, but it's okay, I can see the growth of the protagonist! Very nice, come on

Generally speaking, the plot in the early, middle and late stages is good, and every character has flesh and blood. It is a pity that the ending was not handled well. The three brothers were not reunited in the end, Ava's life or death was uncertain, and Jiang Ye's emotional line was not clearly written. I originally hoped that the extra chapter could make up for the regret, but unfortunately I waited for several months and didn't get it. I hope the author can make our dream come true.

Not only as a fan of Delta, but also as a mercenary work, it is at full level. The fight scenes are fantastic. It's not just the old-fashioned meet-and-greet instant kill, it's a turn-based game where you move and I move. But there is really a bit of a game in it. Moreover, the protagonist's growth curve is perfect, and the character transformation is also very stable and does not appear to be abrupt. It is rare that you can watch it from beginning to end without skipping a chapter.

The relationship network and the description of the characters are very consistent with the original setting, and on this basis, some excellent plots of other works are borrowed. The plot is interlocking, with twists and turns. The beginning starts with three college students teaming up to fight against each other, and as the plot progresses, the three brothers compete without knowing it. There is no rigid twist in the emotional line of the female character. At present, a female protagonist has been confirmed. As for the rest, we still have to wait and see, but the author probably focuses on pure love.