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At the end of the Ming Dynasty and the beginning of the Qing Dynasty, the Ten Days Massacre in Yangzhou killed 800,000 people...
On the eve of February, in Yangzhou, Qin Huai, who can freely travel between the two worlds, arrived and was involved in this period of time. This chapter officially opened, and the wind blew in Huai Yang...
Reader comments
So far it looks okay, the writing is okay, the emotional scenes are pretty good, You Qing is the second chapter, it should be based on "Ten Diaries of Yangzhou". As a Yangzhou native, I was very touched when I saw it. I hope to maintain this style and don't care too much about other people's opinions. You have to know that no matter how good your writing is, it won't satisfy everyone. Stick to your own style, come on! [Sending Hearts]
There's nothing wrong with the plot, but I'd better make some comments.
① I read faster, so I may have overlooked some of the plot. If I am not wrong, the current solution to food is for Qin Huai to transport food from modern times to Yangzhou by crossing two worlds. I feel that this is a bit unreasonable. The author has solved the rationality in the Ming Dynasty, but has not solved the rationality in modern times. Decided, the author can ask Qin Huai's modern friend Ji Yuan to set up a company, and it is unreasonable to carry grain all the time. In fact, it is enough to carry grain once, and the rest can be brought with some advanced varieties or production tools to increase productivity as soon as possible and make Yangzhou economically self-sufficient.
② In addition, the author can keep up with the world events at that time. At that time, new routes to the west have been opened, and Yangzhou is also close to the sea. If it is not possible, he can also capture Songjiang Prefecture. He can implement foreign development trade and buy Western firearms first. After all, there are many restrictions on buying some firearms in the United States. The author can let the people at that time make some advanced firearms themselves.
Develop productivity as soon as possible and let productivity determine production relations. Since the author's goal is to achieve a harmonious society, then productivity must be developed and the methods are the two I mentioned above.
The above are just personal suggestions, you can adopt them or not, I will stick to them [Love][Love]
Ten Days in Yangzhou, this period of history is rarely written, but the writing style is quite good [Like][Like][Like]
You did a great job with this change [Like] The first few chapters were all narration, but now the third chapter is very exciting [Like] [Like]
Ten Days in Yangzhou [Crying] The beginning of the second chapter is really well written.
So far it looks okay, the writing is okay, the emotional scenes are pretty good, You Qing is the second chapter, it should be based on "Ten Diaries of Yangzhou". As a Yangzhou native, I was very touched when I saw it. I hope to maintain this style and don't care too much about other people's opinions. You have to know that no matter how good your writing is, it won't satisfy everyone. Stick to your own style, come on! [Sending Hearts] There's nothing wrong with the plot, but I'd better make some comments. ① I read faster, so I may have overlooked some of the plot. If I am not wrong, the current solution to food is for Qin Huai to transport food from modern times to Yangzhou by crossing two worlds. I feel that this is a bit unreasonable. The author has solved the rationality in the Ming Dynasty, but has not solved the rationality in modern times. Decided, the author can ask Qin Huai's modern friend Ji Yuan to set up a company, and it is unreasonable to carry grain all the time. In fact, it is enough to carry grain once, and the rest can be brought with some advanced varieties or production tools to increase productivity as soon as possible and make Yangzhou economically self-sufficient. ② In addition, the author can keep up with the world events at that time. At that time, new routes to the west have been opened, and Yangzhou is also close to the sea. If it is not possible, he can also capture Songjiang Prefecture. He can implement foreign development trade and buy Western firearms first. After all, there are many restrictions on buying some firearms in the United States. The author can let the people at that time make some advanced firearms themselves. Develop productivity as soon as possible and let productivity determine production relations. Since the author's goal is to achieve a harmonious society, then productivity must be developed and the methods are the two I mentioned above. The above are just personal suggestions, you can adopt them or not, I will stick to them [Love][Love]
Ten Days in Yangzhou, this period of history is rarely written, but the writing style is quite good [Like][Like][Like] You did a great job with this change [Like] The first few chapters were all narration, but now the third chapter is very exciting [Like] [Like]
Ten Days in Yangzhou [Crying] The beginning of the second chapter is really well written.