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A New Fanfic That Really Brings Out the Content of Naruto and Has Excellent Writing Style ~
Is there any new Naruto fanfic on Tomato that has novel, strange, surprising content, smooth writing and connotative content? If the number of words is less than 30w, please avoid it~Please give me some advice~
Naruto + Heartthrob, Please Recommend🥺🥺
Naruto! ! ! Two Men! ! !
I want to read a book similar to "Naruto: Survive to the End and Send Everyone Away".
If You Like Watching Uchiha, Come and Take a Look.
I want to read a book similar to "I, Uchiha, rise from the coffin (Hokage has no regrets)". They are all novels with a rating of 8.0 Or above.
The Heartthrob of Naruto, Everyone Is Interested in It, Regardless of Gender.
The Male Protagonist of Naruto Has No Cp but Is Very Good at Fighting.
I want to read a book like "Naruto: The wrong gender, Madara suffers". There should be no ambiguity with women in it
I Want a Story Where the Protagonist Has a Deep Bond with Obito or a CP Obito Finished Story
I've watched Curse and Hoshino's one, but I want to watch something else.
Are There Any Two Male Protagonists in Naruto?
I Want Two Male Protagonists in Naruto
I want to read a book similar to "Naruto: When the Spell Meets the Twin Kamui". As long as there are two male protagonists🥺🥺🥺Thank you
Those Who Want a Heartthrob, a Male Protagonist, and Naruto
I want to read a book like "Naruto: All the Ninja Masters Want to Be My Boyfriend". Bisexuals are okay, but those who want Naruto don't need to transition.
Want to See Naruto's Twin Male Heartthrobs
I want to read a book like "Naruto: All the Ninja Masters Want to Be My Boyfriend". If you want to see Naruto's twin male heartthrobs, don't do it.
Naruto + Male Heartthrob + No Female Protagonist Underlined: No Female Protagonist
I want to read a book like "My brother dressed as Itachi and I became the favorite of the Hokage group".
Ah Ah Ah, Are There Any Good-Looking Hokage Twins? the Child Is Starving to Death.
If you want to watch something like "Naruto: Facing Tsundere, of course you have to go straight!" Book.














































Fake Konoha succubus: Wearing women's clothes to flirt with little boys and then defecting to become Bai Yueguang The real succubus of Konoha: the sunny and cheerful little sun that talks to you about ideals, friendship, and the future
The writing style is relatively warm, I just like to see the male protagonist instigate rebellion and bring out the people at his core [laughing evilly] The bond between the male channel and the male channel is so frustrating. The Light of Konoha brush is in progress... The Light of the Ninja World has not yet been opened. Turn small love into big love. The strongest beheaded mouth. If you like to watch Redemption, you can enter it.
God! The last Naruto fanfic was Naruto: Undercover's self-cultivation. I thought it was a harem at first, and then shared the story of Metkai and his son, as well as the Ninja Mutual Aid Association, helping Obito cross the hell in his destiny, and the rescue of the root spy, all very exciting. , Don't forget that Obito actually wanted to become Hokage like Naruto, but when he witnessed his best friend stabbing the person he liked, he said, "This is hell!" It's over, what a pity
Teacher teacher! Have you ever thought about turning the protagonist into a Konoha succubus? [Sinister smile]
So far it's pretty good to watch, the characters are not OOC, the daily life is very warm, the gay character is very relatable, and it's good that it doesn't steal the spotlight from other characters. I hope there will be no harem in the future, or the same poisonous points over and over again.
Progress 56 It looks really warm and unconventional. I really like the way the protagonist builds a bond with Konoha through talking. Is the protagonist like Minato? [Eating Melon] The psychological analysis of Sandai and Danzo is very detailed But the protagonist just entered school and ran 500 laps with Kai without any exercise... The flaws are not hidden, it seems very healing.
It's very well written. I hope it continues like this without a female protagonist. It's quite interesting.
@ Diseased Tree Qianchun Although I haven't been reading for a long time, I can see from your book that you want to create a warmer story. My review is that it feels very comfortable, um, that ordinary warm feeling. But he may not be to everyone's liking, and it's hard to avoid. Original content is not undesirable, but the original idea of this book is to build goodwill with other characters (as the introduction says), so there may be some people who want to be closer to the main plot (and the characters in the original work). There's nothing wrong with these branch plots, and I like it. It's fun (unexpected development is also a part of life), but it may become a kind of extra form. Moreover, the current pace is really a bit slow (if you really want to write from a small to a large book, it does take a long time). On this relatively fast-paced book network, this kind of slow-burning book may not have such good data (no one hates brainless and cool books). As for the settings, you have good control over them. At least from what I know about the settings, there is no problem. There may be some timeline issues, such as the age of the characters, but after all, this is a second creation, and there may be changes. It is not the original work [laughter] I still hope that you have some confidence in yourself (the writing is good, and you will not pile up words in abstract places). It is good to take opinions (some voices may be more subjective and direct), but you still have to start based on your actual situation. After all, the person who wrote this book is not someone else, but you. Even if I give more and more suggestions, the person who wrote this book is not me, and the reason why I am here is very simple. I want to see stories shaped by others (no way, you can't write things without this technology). Just write whatever you want, and there will be a group of people who like it and continue to read it. (As long as you keep updating) I also hope that your book will get better and better. (I will definitely review it when I come back later)
It's good, I hope it doesn't have a female protagonist.
It's too late to mourn the great Han Succubus. Next up is the Konoha Succubus [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking]
Someone else's Konoha Succubus, this is Konoha Succubus [Like] Awesome
It's good to watch. The protagonist has some flaws but is not immediately invincible. His abilities gradually increase. I really like the way the protagonist talks and deceives people. The content of the articles is also very novel and not cliche, but there are so few that you will lose it after reading it twice.
Hmm~ It's the flavor I like. Is this Konoha friendship? [Laughing evilly] [Like]
Your book is a bit long-winded, but your writing and plot make up for it very well. (The blood purity section in the book feels like the best one I've ever read in a Naruto fanfic)
[Almost crying] What a pity. I like Konoha very much. As a boy, he is not full of nonsense but he respects others. He has his own thinking. He is confident, strong and humorous. Compared with the loser protagonists in other novels of the same type who only rely on the system and do not think for themselves, Konoha is a character with real personality and charm. The character itself has also stood up. I have no resistance to this kind of ideal and charming protagonist. I really look forward to his story [almost crying] Can I see him again in the future? Did the teacher's second book consider Konoha's peers (that is, Konoha in the parallel world)? Last but not least, if the teacher can write such a Konoha, I believe he is also a person who likes to think and has ideals. Even if he bows his head because of life in the end, I hope the teacher will not lose confidence [almost crying] looking forward to the next book (reluctant to leave Konoha) [almost crying]
I like this type. The last time I saw it was in a certain river. It seemed to be a mouth escape. I like the style very much. ฅ●ω●ฅ
Reading the whole book, it gives people a warm feeling. It is much better than other Naruto fanfics that use Bai Yueguang, which is essentially to deceive feelings and show mercy at all times. Who said it must be love, and the friendship between teenagers is more touching.
Currently I stayed up late to read chapter 139. I scrolled to the end of the table of contents and knew that I was in trouble, but I still planned to read on, but I have to go to bed and have to go to work tomorrow. The writing is very good, I give it five stars. I really hope the author can come back and continue to finish it. I will not delete it from my collection.
Does the protagonist have a CP? Who could it be? If not, that's great too, the group portraits look great too! ! Come on, author! !
Come on, show me, hey hey hey, this pure bond (it's so Konoha)
I like the protagonist so much. It feels warm and caring hh. The author just writes according to his own ideas and doesn't let the readers' words disturb his thoughts. It's very interesting and interesting now, but it's just not enough for my treasure. Please update more [Sending Hearts] Woohoo, the author finished it so directly, it caught me off guard! I feel like there are still many more stories to write in the outline, and I'm a bit reluctant [crying][crying][crying]
The system can be there, just don't rely too much on it.
It feels good. I can see Konoha friendship again!
This article is still very sweet overall, there is no ambiguous plot, the protagonist is strong and not aggrieved, and has brains. One star was deducted because of the eunuch, but I still decided to give it four stars. At least it provided me with a good experience in the past, and I really like this tone. It would be better if this book could be integrated one day and return with a new look. I will definitely read it.
It looks good. This mutual aid association is becoming more and more popular.
It's really, really good to read😭😭😭 I originally wanted to read it slowly over a longer period of time, but I didn't expect that everyone would be like this, but I ended up losing it [crying][crying][crying][crying] I think I can still read this book over and over again for a long time. Looking forward to the author's next book!
Succubus × Voice of Konoha√
Damn, this Konoha friendship is so delicious!
It's a bit new, but overall there's no big problem. You can check it out again.
The look and feel is very smooth and beautiful. The writing style is a bit immature but overall it's pretty good. ૮₍♡>𖥦<₎აThe daily plot is also quite warm and I really like it. I hope the author's writing style can be even better in the next one pp₍ᐢ..ᐢ₎♡