In Konoha, I Start Grinding for Affection

Fake Konoha succubus: Wearing women's clothes to flirt with little boys and then defecting to become Bai Yueguang The real succubus of Konoha: the sunny and cheerful little sun that talks to you about ideals, friendship, and the future

The writing style is relatively warm, I just like to see the male protagonist instigate rebellion and bring out the people at his core 😏 The bond between the male channel and the male channel is so frustrating. The Light of Konoha brush is in progress... The Light of the Ninja World has not yet been opened. Turn small love into big love. The strongest beheaded mouth. If you like to watch Redemption, you can enter it.

God! The last Naruto fanfic was Naruto: Undercover's self-cultivation. I thought it was a harem at first, and then shared the story of Metkai and his son, as well as the Ninja Mutual Aid Association, helping Obito cross the hell in his destiny, and the rescue of the root spy, all very exciting. , Don't forget that Obito actually wanted to become Hokage like Naruto, but when he witnessed his best friend stabbing the person he liked, he said, "This is hell!" It's over, what a pity

Teacher teacher! Have you ever thought about turning the protagonist into a Konoha succubus? 😏

So far it's pretty good to watch, the characters are not OOC, the daily life is very warm, the gay character is very relatable, and it's good that it doesn't steal the spotlight from other characters. I hope there will be no harem in the future, or the same poisonous points over and over again.

Progress 56 It looks really warm and unconventional. I really like the way the protagonist builds a bond with Konoha through talking. Is the protagonist like Minato? 🍉 The psychological analysis of Sandai and Danzo is very detailed But the protagonist just entered school and ran 500 laps with Kai without any exercise... The flaws are not hidden, it seems very healing.

It's very well written. I hope it continues like this without a female protagonist. It's quite interesting.

@ Diseased Tree Qianchun Although I haven't been reading for a long time, I can see from your book that you want to create a warmer story. My review is that it feels very comfortable, um, that ordinary warm feeling. But he may not be to everyone's liking, and it's hard to avoid. Original content is not undesirable, but the original idea of this book is to build goodwill with other characters (as the introduction says), so there may be some people who want to be closer to the main plot (and the characters in the original work). There's nothing wrong with these branch plots, and I like it. It's fun (unexpected development is also a part of life), but it may become a kind of extra form. Moreover, the current pace is really a bit slow (if you really want to write from a small to a large book, it does take a long time). On this relatively fast-paced book network, this kind of slow-burning book may not have such good data (no one hates brainless and cool books). As for the settings, you have good control over them. At least from what I know about the settings, there is no problem. There may be some timeline issues, such as the age of the characters, but after all, this is a second creation, and there may be changes. It is not the original work [laughter] I still hope that you have some confidence in yourself (the writing is good, and you will not pile up words in abstract places). It is good to take opinions (some voices may be more subjective and direct), but you still have to start based on your actual situation. After all, the person who wrote this book is not someone else, but you. Even if I give more and more suggestions, the person who wrote this book is not me, and the reason why I am here is very simple. I want to see stories shaped by others (no way, you can't write things without this technology). Just write whatever you want, and there will be a group of people who like it and continue to read it. (As long as you keep updating) I also hope that your book will get better and better. (I will definitely review it when I come back later)

It's too late to mourn the great Han Succubus. Next up is the Konoha Succubus 🤔🤔🤔

It's good, I hope it doesn't have a female protagonist.