Zhan Shen: Agent Succubus, Qiye, Please Don't Mess Around.

Ah? ! I actually finished reading it so quickly? ! ! ? ! (Hamster is shocked) (Hamster is overwhelmed) (Hamster rolls) (Hamster screams) (Hamster runs around) (Hamster dances karaoke) (Hamster runs around in the underworld) (Hamster is raised peacefully) (Hamster likes) (Hamster says good, good. Good! Good↗!!!) Good-looking, love to watch, watch more! ! ! Seeing perfection, not seeing regret——! Thank the author greatly, praise the author greatly, and lift up the author greatly! (Hamster bungee jumping) (Hamster riding a roller coaster) (Hamster going to outer space to look at the stars) Wuhu↘↗!

Xingxing is very cute ⚈₃⚈Qiye also loves Xingxing, it's so sweet [admiration], and it doesn't look weak as a couple, but the review is a bit strict and the questions are clear, but overall it's still very good

It's okay, there are a few flaws in the first 60 chapters 1. Change from high school student to college student (reluctantly agreed in order to pass the review) 2. Lin Qiye went to Squad 136 on the pretext of joining the army. Normally, he could not go home during the New Year, but he went back (in order to protect his aunt's family and fear that his identity would be leaked) 3. The appearance of U. S. Dollars in the article means that the U. S. National University is likely to be in the circle of people. According to the original work. 4. The characters of the protagonist group are changed, such as adding Pangpang to smell feet, and then Pangpang spends 50 million US dollars to buy his friend's props. According to the original character, Pangpang should be very happy that his friend has a self-protection tool, instead of spending a lot of money to buy it just because he is strong. 5. The emotional line [face covering] is similar to that of Jialan in the original work, which is a bit inexplicable. Pretty point Unlike most God-Slayer fanfics, the death of General Zhao was not forcibly changed (as a major reason why Lin Qiye joined the Night Watch in the original novel). And the protagonist's fighting ability is sufficient, so it's okay to just read it as a cool novel. Some settings of Twin Gods are also unique.

The language is cleverly used, the expression ability is clear, the relationship and characteristics of the characters are vividly written, the character's personality is highlighted, and the character's image is highlighted. It is worth recommending.

1. The author's writing style is very good, and he writes some things in an orderly manner. 2. The emotional line is not very confusing. 3. It can arouse the readers' emotions in more than 100 chapters.

Damn, the writing is really good [adoration][adoration] Thousands of beauties and beauties surpass all the beauties, with delicate eyebrows and beautiful eyes, as beautiful as a fairy, ice and snow are smart, gentle and lovely, as beautiful as a fairy, peerless elegance, natural beauty as a fish and a goose, national beauty and natural beauty, small and exquisite, peerless beauty, the moon is shy of flowers, beautiful as a fairy, gentle and lovely, ice and snow smart, gentle and charming, the author of peerless elegance is Da Da Yeah [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] I have a small wish, that is, can you make up for the couple to have a grand wedding? [Shy] [Shy] Young couples who don't have a wedding are not considered to be together for a lifetime [Top post] [Top post] [Top post] [Top post] [Top post] [Top post] [Top post] [Top post]

It's very sweet. Once you read this kind of book, you can't get out of it. You struggle to read it every day. You don't want to read it, but your heart is still tightly grasped by this book. You want to read it. I can't stop reading it. When I see the yellow button to remind me, I feel an unspeakable feeling in my heart, a huge sense of gap. I flipped through the whole Tomato bookshelf. I looked over and over in the whole Tomato circle, but I still can't find the book that suits my heart. If you find a book that suits your taste, you can go back and read it quietly. Two words are highlighted on the book: update, joy, excitement, excitement. Countless happy moods are intertwined in your heart. This feeling is something ordinary people cannot feel. What a great sense of satisfaction! ! ! . Wish Qiye Xiaoxing 99. . For a long time.

Baby Lin Xing is so cute. Qiye pampers the stars! My aunt didn't stop laughing the whole time. [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration] Forget about the broken character design, it's all the same as humanities, and it still requires so much.

It's good-looking. This is my first time reading a story about two male protagonists about God of Destruction. It's very well written. Shuanglin is so sweet. I just can't stop the text. It's so uncomfortable. It didn't take long before the sweetness started. The author, you are a Sanjiu, right? [Cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry]

Teacher, please keep updating, Qiye, you must check ④Xiaoxing! !

A great book, it is the passion of young people, the love of young people, and the vow of each other who only has eyes for each other♥(｡￫v￩｡)♥♪(´∪`●)ゝ

Good review! ! ! I really didn't like what the protagonist Lin Qiye was doing with the other male protagonists, their relatives, etc.! But this book is really great! ! ! Author, I beg you! Not enough! [Cry]

It's super, super, super good. I've only read 10 of the original books, and I can't stand two more. The first one is too sharp, and the second one is a bit intolerable to the male and female protagonists. Chapter 372, you told me that a female protagonist appeared, right? I really can't keep going, so I'll find some fan fiction [blowing kiss]

It's very interesting, and the emotional line is so sweet, but what I personally can't accept is why the protagonist must be forcibly sacrificed to save Canglan. It's a bit too holy. If it's for Lin Qiye, just save the aunt and the captain. Except for this part, which I can't bear to watch, the other parts are really good to watch.

The protagonist is not very capable, but the advantage is the emotional line. The young boy's youthful feeling is well written, and the little star is energetic and cute. Among so many fans, I think the emotional line is good. But there is a common problem. The author didn't pave the way for their relationship enough, and Qiye fell in love too quickly.

I rarely see the natural love process as long as it comes naturally. Recently I have seen a lot of fanfics where the CP is Lin Qiye. Either the protagonist has a crush on Shenxu, or he seduce Lin Qiye intentionally or unintentionally, and then Lin Qiye's IQ and strength plummet and he turns into a love brain. I hope you will learn better and better and not be OOC.

The emotions are very well written! Tranquility, happiness and tranquility are simply my most ideal emotional state. I have always longed for this kind of emotion. I am very happy to see them happy. Beautiful things can really infect and heal everything, and I also feel happy from it. The author integrates beautiful moments into daily life In it, the dialogues and other life details of the protagonists show the most beautiful appearance of love, and also reflect the author's views and opinions on love. I am very lucky to read this book, because it really healed me. Lin Qiye and Lin Xing, you must never be separated! I finished reading it and it said that I had read it for no more than 30 minutes. . I watched it for two days.

It's very beautiful. It's one of the most beautiful fanfics I've ever read. The content is also lively and interesting. I always like when Lin Xing uses that "manhole cover", it's so interesting, hahahahahahahahahaha. However, a big drawback is that there are too few authors updating. If you look at other authors, they update dozens of chapters a day! ! Go and code! ! !

Innocence is so sweet, big, can you update it soon? Please, please, it's not good enough. I started watching it two days ago and have almost finished it as of today. Wouldn't it be better to hurry up? [Blowing kiss][grievance]

So pretty😭👊, Qiye loves little star so much Author, I will definitely follow you

I really like this book, everyone is very cute, but I feel that there will be a knife in the future. Here, I also hope that the author can work hard to update it. I feel that two chapters a day is still a bit too little. The author's writing is very good, much better than me. I love you, author (^_^)／

This book is so beautiful. It's just that the washing is not exciting enough, and the shou is not written too strong, and the shou feels a little weak.

It's quite beautiful. Qiye and Little Star are so sweet, the combination of Seraph and Succubus [laughs]

Not much to say, the writing is really good. Well, I got into the trap later, but now I have finished reading the author's work to evaluate it. Don't be too sweet for the young couple! So far, no female protagonist has appeared. There should be no female protagonist. After all, the plot of the female protagonist in the original work is almost omitted.

I directly use the most straightforward, the most direct, the least roundabout, the least ink, the least nonsense, the least wordy, the least procrastination, the least grinding, the least detours, the least circles, the least foreshadowing, the most gentle, and the least Euphemistic, the least obscure, the least disguised, the least modified, the least polished, the most hard-core, the least watery, the least silly, the least perfunctory, the least nonsense, the least deceitful, the least flattering, the least pretentious, The least appetizing, the least sophisticated, the least sophisticated, the least correct, the least useful, the least flashy, the least pretentious, the simplest, the neatest, the most enjoyable, the most relieving, The most comfortable, the most powerful, the toughest, the most domineering, the most refreshing, the most awesome, the most ruthless, the most absolute, the most in place, the most on point, the most to the point, the most throat-sealing way to tell you that it is very, very, very, very good-looking.

The Shuanglin CP in it is so interesting that all experts will come and take a look. The poignant story about Shuanglin's love will be performed online for you!

The teacher's writing style is very good [sending heart] [sending heart] [sending heart] [sending heart] [sending heart] is particularly beautiful. I hope the teacher will stick to it [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] I love you [shy] Hahaha I'm a little busy these days. When I read this today, the teacher's articles are also popular. Can I be considered a long-time fan of the teacher? [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking]

Hee hee, I like it, the author must continue to update it. This book is very suitable for me. Lin Xing and Lin Qiye are so sweet [laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

The author's writing style is really good! The plot is also very smooth, highly recommended! But! Remember, there is a big knife ૮₍ɵ̷ɵ̷̥̥᷅₎ა around the 100th picture (I cried to death when I saw it)! At the same time, there is also a handful of sweet fried chicken ⊹꙳ ˶˙ᵕ˙˶ ⊹꙳ (is this the calm before the storm?) If you can't stand it, you can skip ahead and watch it. All in all, I like this book very much•˶ɞ˶• Poor our stars ⭐️Baby woo woo ໒꒰ྀིᜊ꒦ິ^꒦ິᜊ ꒱ྀིა Do you know how much you want to cry when you look at the rice in the middle of the night! The stars are so cute, but the author has no heart! You are willing to take the knife! ! ! ｡｡꒰ ´･~･꒱੭՞՞

This is the first God-Slayer fanfic I have read, and it took me three days to read it. After reading it, I tried to read other fanfics, but I didn't think they were good enough. This one piqued my interest. Stars and Seven Nights are really interesting! ! ! [Shy] Can someone tell me when Xiaoxing's birthday is? 🌚🆘