After Time Travel, Start a Family First, Then Save the World

The writing is fluent, the plot is exciting, the writing is so good and superb, the rhythm is very good, every chapter is very careful, the story logic is online, and the emotional line is delicate and natural. Thank you to the author for bringing such a good work, and you must keep writing! The writing is amazing, the plot is compact and not procrastinating, the characters are flesh-and-blood, the more you read, the more you read, the plot is gripping, the characters are great, highly recommended

The whole book is very comfortable to read, like sitting in the mountains with the breeze blowing on your face and the sound of the stream. The author's literary talent is rich and the writing is brilliant. The poems are picked up by hand. Confucianism, Buddhism and Yi are all eloquently described. Unfortunately, the full text is only a hundred thousand words. It's okay for snacks, but it's not enough to make food for the belly [laughs]

The writing is smooth, the plot is compact, and the story is exciting.

The logic is clear and reasonable, and the content is rich and colorful.

The first time I read a time-travel novel was the ancient Legend of Two Dragons of the Tang Dynasty. I haven't read it in many years. This time I watched it with gusto. The details of the scene, the shaping of the characters, especially the protagonist, and the psychological description are all very realistic. There is a twist in the plot but the ending is not cruel, so you can eat it with confidence. After reading the first half of the novel, I admired the author's talent for poetry many times. Many of the fanciful connections also make people smile. Only people with interesting stories and love can write such works.

The author Lan Jing and I have had several intersections in academic activities. She is a female Ph. D. In engineering who graduated from a prestigious 985 university. She actually wrote a 100,000-word novel in her spare time. It was really beyond my expectation. She inherited court training from a young age and enjoyed reciting poems and composing poems. She was familiar with rhythm, rhyme, and literary and historical anecdotes. She was gentle, quiet and as light as a chrysanthemum, which left an excellent impression on me. They fell in love with each other and became friends for many years. She is both liberal arts and science, and has a quick mind. She just entered the literary world, tried her best at a small scale, and has a masterpiece coming out. Congratulations! Fragmented reading is currently in fashion, and this is the first time I have read a long novel in many years; however, as soon as I read "Tomato Novel", I was deeply attracted and couldn't stop. Although I am very old, I have been reading for three days, and I will keep it in my hands whenever I have free time until it is finished. After reading the story, I felt deeply. First of all, the author has an extremely rich imagination. The plot of the novel includes both ancient and modern time travel and interstellar travel in space. It enthusiastically eulogizes the protagonist's lofty spirit of sacrificing one's life for righteousness and boundless love - in order to maintain the peace of the "planet", he sacrifices himself to become a greater self, and sacrifices himself to "steal fire" to save the world; at the same time, it shows the team spirit of new and old elites with unique skills, as well as the pure and sincere love between the two protagonists, spreading full of positive energy. Secondly, the author's writing style is concise and beautiful, Shen Boyali. She cherishes ink like gold, and with just a few words, the appearance and temperament of the characters appear vividly on the page. The article inadvertently and skillfully incorporates idioms, poems, Chinese and foreign allusions, so the text is short, concise and catchy. It's really the so-called "simple but not simple"! The titles of traditional chapter novels are usually two sentences of seven-character poems, but now most of them just have ordinal numbers. But she took a different approach and used a three-character title as a bold innovation. She secretly thought that this might be the "unique one" in the novel genre. I remember reading an article by a literary giant - "The shorter it is, the harder it is." It's so true! In addition, the novel's descriptions of several women are full and vivid, which leaves a deep impression on readers. Among them are ladies from famous families and jaspers from small families, as well as famous prostitutes from religious houses and slaves from poor families. But all of them have outstanding appearance, possess unique skills, and are as pure as snow, as brave as the piano and as brave as the sword. The plot of the novel is ups and downs and fascinating, but it contains suspense. It is not until the end that the novel uses the "reasonable and unexpected" technique to complete a clever closed loop. As a debut novel, this novel is undoubtedly a model of success. I hope Lanjing will have more and better masterpieces coming out!

"After time travel, start a family first, then save the world" follows the route of marriage first, love later + gentle healing. The time travel starts with a marriage, but the system is useless but unexpectedly makes daily fireworks possible. It is not intense and exciting, but is laid out with delicate emotions. It protects the family first and then carries the righteousness. The pace is slow but it is comfortable to read. It is suitable for readers who prefer a warm flow. Xu Lanjing's time-travel novel is delightfully imaginative! The beginning of the time travel is equipped with a useless system + a husband from heaven, which cleverly combines the main line of marriage first, love later and the savior. The daily fireworks are sweet but not greasy, the emotional lines are gradual, the plot is compact and not procrastinating, the writing is smooth and easy to understand, the warmth of the small family is the foundation, and then the big world is laid out. It is both sweet and refreshing, and you will feel refreshed and addicted after reading it.

The plot advances smoothly and the content is in-depth.

Wonderful life, wonderful stories, encounter wonderful works

It is deeply touching, sincere in emotion, and the characters are three-dimensional and vivid.

Gripping, simple and clear.

The writing is experienced and meticulous, highly recommended.

The characters are vivid and deeply rooted in people's hearts.

The plot of the story is compact and not procrastinating, and the details are described in detail.

The author's writing is good, a little slow, but I felt good while reading it. I should make a short miniseries [Adoration]

I haven't read a novel in a long time. This one is good. I like it very much.

I haven't read a novel in a long time, and I finally hit the mark. It's wonderful.

Wonderful novel, everything about the plot is good

Big cheers for the author, it's really well written, I like it

The plot is compact and natural, and the content is rich and exciting.

The writing is good and the plot is brilliant. I love watching it.

The author's descriptions are so beautiful and every character is vivid

The plot is novel and innovative, and you still have endless fun watching it.

The supporting characters each have their own characteristics, and the ending is handled very well.

The novel contains both sweet love and a passionate salvation plot. It's a joy to read!

The plot is gripping, profound and mundane, making you immersed in it.

Wonderful, the plot makes you forget to leave after watching it

The plot setting is cleverly reversed. A wonderful story told in a reasonable manner.

The characterization is full of strength, with distinct and different personalities, and it interprets a touching life story.

The spirit of the protagonist is admirable and I loved every interaction in the story