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After seeing the latest chapter, talk about the advantages. 1. The protagonist's abilities are developed by himself, step by step, and his character is relatively simple, which is pretty good. 2. The rhythm of the game is very good. Compared with some authors who have a dozen or even thirty chapters for a small game, it is much better. It is almost two chapters for a game, and it is not verbose. 3. There is nothing wrong with the overall logic, and it is relatively objective. Your teammates are weak. Even if you press the opponent's middle, there is nothing you can do. If you can't beat it, you can't beat it. It's just that there is a little less foreshadowing in that section, and the perception is a little bit worse. I think it's natural to suppress most of the mid laners, including well-known mid laners. After all, after knowing who to fight, you only need to study the playing style in advance. 4. Updates are still possible. This feeling should be mentioned earlier. It is about 6,000 words a day, and sometimes there will be bursts of updates, which is considered good. I would give four or five stars to most books if they are not particularly toxic, because writing a book is not easy, not to mention that the audience is different. I feel that this book's five stars are not enough, and it is considered a masterpiece.

Let's talk about the pros and cons of this book. Advantages: The protagonist's love for games can be understood as a flying pro, the intensity of the game is reasonable, the plot development is relatively solid, and there are no major game errors. Disadvantages: ① It's not exciting enough. The protagonist's laning advantage will basically be converted into help for the side, rather than single kills. There are too few team battles and side solo kills. Although this is consistent with the character of the protagonist, an unconfident boy who debuts in LPL for the first time. To be honest, the most enjoyable part of playing mid lane is to kill the Three Saints and One Emperor first, then destroy Chao Wei Fei, and then single-kill An Zhang against S3 Feike, the same as Ryu. ② Is essentially a continuation of ①. Jack is actually not a stable point, so the protagonist needs to stand up more. ③The role of male fan Xie Ming is of unknown significance. It might be better if it were replaced by a female. Because the relationship between male fans and the protagonist's subsequent plot will not be too great. If you don't want specific fans, just resist it completely + score with Hupu. ④The panel value increased from 82/81/79 to 88/89/86. To be honest, people's status fluctuates. It is difficult to explain without giving people a permanent fixed buff. Moreover, the data suddenly improved so much. If you want to energize the data, you must look at it every day.

It's very good-looking, very unconventional and not a very flamboyant protagonist, but it makes people feel real because of his hard work. It's been a long time since I read an LPL novel before this one, and this book brought back the excitement I felt at the time when I was chasing this type of novel.

At the end of the day, I found out that the author had stopped updating. I hope the author goes well in his current life. The end of this book is innocuous. Xiaoxia is a very pure player, very hard-working, like a little sun. Hope there will be another day to see you again.

The writing is really good. I hope the author will not have a female protagonist in the early and middle stages. I am not opposed to having a female protagonist. The main reason is that the pace of the game in the early stage of more than 40 chapters and the pure e-sports character of the male protagonist are really well established. If you insist on adding a female protagonist or a so-called emotional scene, it will immediately remind people of the 🌿fan mid laner in reality. You can later complete the male protagonist's e-sports dream and then write some emotional scenes or something.

A very good and pure protagonist. Not having a live broadcast is a good thing, but having a live broadcast will inevitably lead to distraction. It's rare to see a protagonist who is improving step by step and is very pure, just to win the game, just to win the championship!

It's really good. In terms of LOL e-sports, the plot of this book is relatively reasonable. Ordinary e-sports players really can't play it if they don't fail. I am quite picky when it comes to reading books, but this e-sports article is very suitable for me. In fact, there are advantages to losing, because the protagonist has to die after all, but LoL is a game of 5 people. It is undeniable that as long as one or two teammates are not in the right state, how can one person c? In fact, I really hope that the protagonist loses a few more games. It doesn't matter if he loses. The purpose of losing is to combat the inflated mentality of his teammates. As long as the best champion wins. Come on author

It's quite good-looking. The protagonist is interesting but not obtrusive. It looks very comfortable. The author's writing style is very good and the details are well written. There are no mistakes in the version. The protagonist looks so comfortable. He can communicate with the team enough. I like it.

The author's writing style is unexpectedly special, not that it is excellent, but that it is very special. To describe it specifically, it has a plain and warm feeling. There is a light everyday atmosphere between the lines. It is very good and unique. I like it.

It's a pure God's reward cheat. The character of the protagonist is very comfortable to watch. The style is more group-like and the supporting characters are not facial makeup. I haven't seen such a feeling in a LOL article for a long time. Update quickly, five stars will be given to you when it is completed.

The protagonist works hard and is talented. The plot is also good. I still hope to win the championship in the future. I haven't seen such a good alliance article in a long time. Finally, is there a female protagonist? Who is it, Xiran?

I watched it in one sitting. The characters are pretty good. There is no revenge plot. The innocent heart is very calm and works hard to improve its strength. Although there is a golden finger, you still have to practice and develop it yourself. The pacing so far is okay, some matches are written in more detail, and the ones that need to be skipped are not delayed. Keep it up, author, come on!

It is a very pure alliance story. Even if there is a system, the protagonist will improve his skills through continuous training, rather than adding an attribute point to increase his ability. I hope there will be no inexplicable and blunt emotional lines or strange internal conflicts in the future. I hope the protagonist will continue to grow in a warm internal environment [Like] [Please update]

As an LPL fanfic, it is quite interesting. It writes about the competition in a down-to-earth manner, and I know that there are various memes in e-sports (I feel like I am responsible for half of the laughs hahh). However, as a novel, it is relatively bland and slow-burning, and it is not very refreshing.

It's good-looking, there's nothing shocking about it, it's fresh and fresh, plug-ins are also a type that requires hard work, and the character of the protagonist is also very good. I sincerely work hard and keep moving forward. However, there are too few chapters and it's not enough to read. I would like to have some similar book as a meal replacement.

The writing is great. It's rare to see such a tough protagonist who is too pretentious. This book made my eyes shine. He didn't always step down on his teammates, nor did he take away the highlights that his teammates deserved, nor did he appear to be leading all the way. The protagonist is also great, there is no feeling of being superior to others, and there is no plot to forcefully pretend to be a slap in the face (❁´◡`❁)*✲ﾟ*

I watched it unexpectedly and I really like the pig's feet and other players created by the author. It feels very close to reality. Actually, if you lose, it would be boring if you don't lose. I like this kind of winning and losing better than other games that don't lose until the championship. Very good

The latest 62 chapters, I even think they are better than the two dialect books. Although the writing of the competition in those two books is more detailed and vivid, the writing of other scenes is really bad, which is very unsatisfactory. However, I feel very satisfied with everything I can say about this book now, and I give it a five-star rating. [Learned]

The writing is very good. I haven't read such a comfortable lol novel in a long time. In the first one, the mid laner was named Lin.

The writing is very nice. Although it is not as detailed as some professional authors, even as detailed as calculating the amount of damage, the overall rhythm is great, and the characters are very popular. It is not like some system novels. After the system is established, one does not work hard to strengthen himself and only relies on the dark blue points of the system. It gives people the feeling of a nouveau riche. Reading this article makes me feel peaceful, humble and not arrogant. It is quite interesting to listen to the book.

I don't have bad breath, and I don't scold this and that every day. Although there is a system, I don't add points, nor talent. I have to work hard to improve myself. Good reviews.

I love seeing this kind of enthusiasm with a positive attitude and going all out for the dream! (PS, those silver diaosi on the market who rely solely on plug-ins will block them after reading one)

Immortal product. My favorite e-sports article. The protagonist has a very charming personality, it is rare to see this type of protagonist. I wish the author all the best in his current life. Looking forward to seeing linx when he wins the championship.

I haven't watched the game for many years. I can't comment on how the game is written and I can't understand it, but the character of the protagonist is a plus.

It's been a long time since I've seen such a nonchalant character! Nice!

It's very interesting, but there are too few chapters. The male protagonist's image is well-shaped, and some daily life can be added appropriately. I hope to create a unique female protagonist.

The writing is awesome, full of logic and sense of immersion, and the supporting characters are well written. The supporting characters in other books are just human beings.

The writing is really good, mainly the characterization of the protagonist. It is my favorite among all the novels I have read.

It can be regarded as an e-sports literary novel. Whether it is the sense of substitution or the details of the game, it is all written wonderfully. I haven't seen any poisonous spots so far.

So far, it is worthy of five stars. The protagonist does not have any particularly exaggerated tricks. He mainly relies on his own self-discipline and hard work. The character creation is pretty good, and the plot description of the game is also very good. I hope it can be maintained in the future.