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The protagonist always protects Saitama and feels like Nan Tong [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]

Limited to 54 photos, I think it's okay, but I don't know if you can accept your Weasel God being avenged by hundreds of tribesmen. The older I get with this character, the more confused I feel. OK, please update more.

Let me talk about a few points that I personally like. In fact, I have only read more than 20 chapters, but I can't help but want to comment. The first point is Saitama-sensei's hero level evaluation. Although Saitama-sensei doesn't care about it, as a fan, I really felt very uncomfortable at the time, and I didn't make any changes in this regard when reading other fanfics. The second point is that I was ridiculed in other fanfics. , The other protagonists have not actually taken action, but the protagonist of this novel has actually released his own abilities to prove that he is like a true friend. The third point is also my favorite point, that is, Saitama-sensei's strength in this novel has not been weakened, it is based on the original version. This makes me feel very good. Many fan fictions weaken Saitama-sensei. (I'm not criticizing them here. There are also some very good fanfics. I'm just pointing out the faulty ones, not all fanfics.) (This only represents my personal opinion. After all, everyone likes to read different things.) (Don't criticize if you don't like it.)

It's a very good novel. The male protagonist has a clear character and never indulges those self-righteous guys. Chongqiyu, who has great advantages, treats others as human beings, and does not let the seal hide his strength, take the blame for any record, or be thought of as a minion. Just get rid of these things and tell the world directly and positively about Saitama's strength.

If you want to continue watching, when will Fubuki and Tatsumaki be the female protagonists? (Don't let me see that's not the word) [angry] There's another thing at the same time @ Living is to Wear Slippers Have you forgotten that Ripple Qigong is used for healing? Even if you have to use Crazy Diamond to repair it, you won't be afraid of training in vain and getting beaten in vain [laughs evilly]. There is another thing about Ripple Qigong that you can ask people close to you to learn, such as blowing snow tornado (crazy hint [laughing evilly]) Banggu. I never thought about it [smiles] Another thing I remember is that the ultimate creature does not need to be analyzed. You only need to read it once to obtain its abilities. Or the creature itself will emit a kind of pheromone, and if you are directly captured by the ultimate creature, you can obtain its ability genes. Does the protagonist have Fubuki's telekinesis? After all, it is also genes. One more thing, the protagonist's abilities are so complex, they won't be unified and integrated, it just becomes one ability or three. The three of essence, energy and spirit have already obtained chakra. Isn't it itself spiritual energy and cellular energy, which is called life energy? And isn't domineering the embodiment of essence, energy and spirit? They can all be integrated into essence and spirit! Ripple Qigong uses life energy, that is, the essence, energy, and spirit are included in it. Whether it is Godzilla, etc., It can be included. As long as it is converted into three kinds of energy, the essence, energy, and spirit are closely related. They can transform into each other to maintain the balance among the three! [Laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] So because it is the ultimate creature, it is always transforming and transforming, transforming and disappearing all its own internal organs, turning them all into hearts [face covering]

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As a short story, it's good. It's a good punch. His combat power is almost the same as that of the bald man. Later, he also cleaned up the disgusting people inside, became the president himself, and got along well with the bald man. He also told me where the explosion was? It turns out to be a parallel universe. Mainly, there are all the stand-ins in JOjo. They are pretty good. They are almost omnipotent. The title is boxing champion. Saitama's title is One-Punch Man. But these are all mentioned near the end. The last few articles are mentioned. Anyway, it is very good. I recommend watching it. As a short story, it is very good [eating melon] [like]

It looks good, but the author got involved (annoyed)

It's fun to watch, but when will there be a stand-in in the game? According to what you write, there may be someone who can bring back characters from other worlds, or strengthen the gods. It seems impossible to survive without a Beyond Heaven.

The proportion of daily life and plot is quite good. It is a good invincible novel. However, I personally think that if the protagonist wants to engage in pornography, it is better to put it later, so as not to have a lot of related elements in the early and middle stages to ruin the rhythm and fall into the cliche. All in all, this is a very good fanfic so far. The characters are not OOC, the air of pretentiousness is not too strong, and there are not many poisonous points. It is not a big problem to keep it at about 9 points. It is recommended.

So far, it's okay. I hope the characters in the original work are not OOC. Also, I really like the original Xiao Tatsumaki [laughing] I hope the female protagonist can have more roles [laughing]

It's really good-looking. I haven't seen any clear protagonist CP so far. I'm quite satisfied. That's why I didn't update Kouya! ! ! !

I thought it was Xiao Baiwen, but he turned out to be so arrogant

The writing feels familiar, but the author only has this book under his name. Has the author written any other books?

The writing is ok, the plot is ok, the main characters are ok, those who like Jojo and Haihu are in luck. Compared to the book next door, I can only say that it is not inferior. The number of words is too small, so the author will update it soon.

It's been three months and it hasn't come out yet.

It's a pretty cool novel. Three stars is a bit low. I'll give it four stars.

Update it, they can do anything, Master Jo [laughing evilly]

Looks good and feels great! I really like what the author said. Saitama was bullied before I came here. If he is still bullied after I come here, then wouldn't I come here in vain?

What I want to see is this mouth tooth! I used to get angry when I saw Saitama being misunderstood or even scolded, but now the protagonist finally helped me make up for this regret and vented my anger on Saitama's behalf. Regarding the combat power, Saitama's ability to use ordinary punches to defeat each other is also very good.

The setting of weirdos from another world is really fun to watch [laughs evilly]

It's beautiful. I asked you why I always feel like I've seen it before [laughs evilly]

I knew it was good after just reading a few chapters [laughing and crying] ps: I want to read the author's previous books [laughing]

Very good, the perfect creature has achieved physical omnipotence, the full double has achieved unlimited abilities, and the growth history of another almighty person Cut it...

There are a lot of fan memes, which I personally think are quite good.

Oi~oi~oi~gua! This book is beautiful and mouth-watering! It looks good, I like it, I like it, please give me more words! [Praise]

This is one of the best one-punch novels I have ever read [Like][Like][Like][Like] @Give Auntie a glass of pure milk

Not bad, but since the protagonist is invincible, there may be no plot to write.

When does the protagonist go to heaven?

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