Transformed into a Soul-Piercing Elf and Became a Female Rival

It's good to watch, and the rare thing is that the writing is good, and the plot is not laggy. Even though she is a boy-to-female, the heroine has an online IQ and is very good-looking. Even if some people like the heroine, it is because of the shining point of the heroine's character, the fighting is wonderful, and she can also establish a spiritual bond with the elves. If I don't write random CPs in the future and keep updating, I will keep chasing it, come on ^0＾~

It's a really great Pokémon novel. The world is original, not the cliche Pokémon on Earth kind, and the author has laid a lot of foreshadowings, and the plot connection is not bad. There should be an outline of the author, but the age seems a bit strange, and the most important thing is that the protagonist is not a traditional Pokémon king.

Overall it is good. The biggest shortcoming is the continuity of the plot and the small poisonous points. Although there are not many small poisonous points, they are poisonous in key places every time, which makes people uncomfortable to watch. Personally, the first poisonous point that I feel is not a poisonous point is the two souls in one body. The second poisonous point is the spiritual root poisonous point in the origin chapter. The three spiritual roots of water, fire and gold that the author gave to the heroine look really awkward, because one spiritual root corresponds to an elf. What about the fourth one? There are also the fifth and sixth elves in the back. What if they have that spiritual root? So it is better to give the heroine a six spiritual root or a chaotic spiritual root from the beginning. Not only will it be comfortable for the readers, but the heroine's talent can also be recognized. I won't talk about the other little poisonous points. It's not that I didn't find them or I didn't make them up, but I don't know how to describe those poisonous points, because they are just the poisonous points that I think, so I will only talk about these two poisonous points, because these two poisonous points are the poisonous points that most readers think. Okay, I will say these. Finally, I would like to give you a few words. I hope the author will write this book better and better [Like]

In my opinion, it is a good Pokémon novel, but Lily in the middle is a bit unsatisfactory, with too little foreshadowing. I fell in love with it inexplicably, and after reading the second volume, it felt very depressing. The second volume was a bit too disturbing. It can be seen that I wanted to write some details to highlight the sense of separation of the protagonist, but the overall story is very compact. And I am personally very curious about who Gao Ranran likes? Do you like Xiao Yu, Xu Yu, or Xu Yu who is influenced by Xiao Yu? And Gao Ranran's actions also look a bit uncomfortable, and some paragraphs seem to be taking advantage of others' danger. I haven't read the third volume yet, but I can tell it's a depressing story, which makes me feel a little uncomfortable. I'll read the rest slowly before continuing to evaluate. So far, it seems pretty good to me. Overall, this novel is not suitable for someone like me who reads books with a leisurely attitude. The author likes to foreshadow, which makes the story line very tight and intertwined, which makes it very depressing and leaves little time to breathe. I will review the rest after reading the third volume. Generally speaking, it is good.

This article is really good. Both Pokémon and gender change are well written. Pokémon battles feel very similar to daily life. The strengthening of the power of bonds makes every battle very exciting. However, the protagonist jumps a few levels and fights too many times. In terms of gender change, it can be said that it is the most classic straight male transformation in gender change stories. Women, no matter how cute they are, stick to their true feelings and not be affected by female thinking. This kind of writing is very contrasting and not easy to read. It can be said to be my favorite type of sexual transformation. There are very few sexual transformation articles nowadays like this. They all fall quickly and there is no desire to continue reading. I suddenly thought about reading Pokémon articles, but I found such a beautiful sexual article😋

The author's writing is good, although some of the logic in the front is not good, but the grasp of the plot is still good! Especially when writing about Menas, it takes more pen and ink than writing about Charmander, but Charmander's emotional bond is deeper.

Although there are slight flaws in the processing of soul travel, and the blur of the little girl's awakening, it seems that it is deliberately trying to fill in the holes, but the innovation of Pokémon is very novel, and I hope more people will see this work. The scenery environment and scene transitions are very vivid.

It's really super good-looking, but when I saw the part about traveling through ancient times, I really couldn't stand it anymore. I skipped it directly, and then the plot jumped too much and I couldn't understand it. I had to run away. QAQ, but this is really the best Pokémon story I've ever read. I didn't just watch it for 31 minutes. I don't know why, because the offline time in school does not count. Just reading this novel, I have waited four times for the 90-minute waiting time.

As a bookworm who has read novels for more than ten years, it is not easy to come across such a beautiful book. I saw a good unfinished book a few days ago. The rating for this book is not high now, but I tried to read it and found that the structure is rigorous, the narrative is natural, and the plot is compact. Unfortunately, it is not finished yet. I am very satisfied at the moment.

The plot content is above the standard level, the writing is also good, the characters have no obvious poisonous points, they are passionate and touching, and there is a mixture of daily life and conspiracy. I have finished the first volume now, take a break and continue later!

There are not many good-looking Pokémon stories, and even fewer good-looking Pokémon heroine stories (sexual transformation). Come on, the author, the five-star structure is simple and reasonable. The main character's name is nice, and the writing can be seen to be simple and smooth. Be bold in your imagination and be creative.

A very novel novel, the writing and plot are very good and I like it very much. I hope the author can keep updating it and don't forget the original intention! ! Come on, come on! ! This is the first time I have encountered such a novel with a novel theme. It is really well written. The author shows his world very carefully. It is also a world that I yearn for so much! ! I hope the author can successfully complete this excellent work. I will always support you silently! ! [Love][love][love]

The plot is very exciting, interlocking, and predicts the readers' expectations. It really shapes the article from the reader's perspective, meets the readers' expectations, but is a little unexpected, full of surprises and surprises.

To be honest, this Pokémon novel is my favorite. It is not as exaggerated as other Pokémon novels, such as the mythical beasts roaming the ground and the elves defying the heavens. On the other hand, although the pace of this novel is relatively slow, the elves become stronger and more realistic.

I really like the author's sincerity! Warning in advance that the plot is sluggish, and the first volume is not friendly to Qibai. This kind of author who does not forcefully give sugar to the readers and respects the readers is so rare! I fell in love with the settings of gender change + darkness + hundred, and I will follow it to the end!

The writing is very good, the plot connection is also in place, and the system's capabilities are not outrageous. What about feelings? Whether you have CP or not depends on what the reader thinks. I guess he is single, so he can still do it casually.

Oh yeah, I finally caught up with the author! I really like this book, so I keep telling myself that I must read it in one day! In addition to the good story, the author's writing style is also very good. The language, manner and psychological description are very good. I will continue to follow it.

After reading it, I am a person who can be particularly immersed in the plot. This novel really gave me a sense of the picture, as if I saw everything happening around me, so I read it slowly.

I read this book bit by bit. Overall, it surpasses most novels. The plot is fascinating. It is not as exciting as other novels of the same type. The first half starts to decline in the middle, but this one does not.

It's good. Unlike the time-travelers who have seen Pokémon in the past, this protagonist completely treats Pokémon as partners. They are treated differently because of their strength, and there is no consistent use of just a few.

The characters are very successfully created, they are all flesh and blood, and the script is also very exciting, especially the atmosphere of the team. Overall, this book gave me a good feeling, and I recommend reading it.

The characters on the opposite side are really amazing, especially the plot. The control of the rhythm of this plot is really amazing. It is really amazing. I really like this rhythm. It seems that I am getting more and more fascinated. It is really amazing.

The writing style is a bit immature, but it has a lot of laughs, and there are a lot of funny jokes. It's not boring to watch, and I'm looking forward to the follow-up development. It's not bad for a new author. There is no perfect novel. If the author can write it and be seen by so many people, it's perfect.

A very imaginative time-travel novel! The protagonist of the novel gradually becomes stronger, rather than being the best at the beginning. The writing style is wonderful, and this article is written with care and freedom. It's worth watching, the plot is compact and the scenes described are realistic. Please feel free to eat!

The literary talent is brilliant and the language is vivid. Whether the protagonist, the supporting role or even the passerby are full of characters, the open-minded optimism when facing life's insights resonates strongly with people. It is a good book worth reading.

It's very interesting. I really like the relationship between the heroine and the trainer. The author's description of the battle is also very good. I can feel the intensity and excitement of the Pokémon battle, which makes my blood boil.

The slow pace is a bit refreshing, and although the plot drags a bit, it is still compact. The main reason is that the characters are well created, especially the Pokémon's love and care for their owners. There are a lot of descriptions of expressions, and the Pokémon that cannot speak are also vivid.

All the logic and plot of the whole novel can stand up to scrutiny. The storyline is connected one by one, and the characters are very full. It feels as if this person really exists. Basically, everyone begins to lay the groundwork when they appear on the stage, and it is slowly revealed after dozens or hundreds of chapters.

It's very good. I feel very good about the writing. The storyline is very exciting and particularly visual. The protagonist is very detailed and has a very charming personality. I also think the other supporting characters are very vivid.

After reading the first volume to evaluate, I feel that the author does have his own ideas. The plot arrangement is too compact, and a lot of things happened at once. It's really fun. I'm looking forward to the future and hope to maintain the quality. I personally feel that the emotional scenes don't affect the plot at all, but I prefer not to get married. I like the interaction between the protagonist and the elves, come on