Demon Slayer: Transform into a Green Algae Head at the Beginning

It's nice to watch, but I want to see the sweet interaction with Xiao Nin [Shy] I like Butterfly Ninja and want a perfect ending, can you do it? [Smile] I gave it five stars. If you can't see a perfect ending, just wait to be sent a razor blade [Laughing] I also saw these two people together [Shy] Damn green algae head, be nice to me, Xiao Ren! Otherwise, just ask the author [making a face] to support the author and look forward to the next book [sending my heart]

As a demon slayer time travel novel with Zoro as the protagonist, the author did not portray Zoro's original image very well. They are all scenes that are popular to see. However, I still have to say that the author wrote the names of Zoro's sword skills very completely, at least it will not make people think of GS. It is a common problem in online writing that the character creation is not three-dimensional. After all, no one is a master and has not received systematic training. [Grievance] So as a novice writer, start with 3⭐️. First of all, I'm glad that its structure is complete and the plot is not laggy. Although sometimes the explanations are not so clear and you may need to use your brain to connect the plot, but overall it is qualified, so I give it a 4⭐️ Then for my personal reasons, the creation of the heroine Ninja gave me a new perspective, which is beneficial to me personally, so I give it 5⭐️ All in all, this book is not very well written, but if you want to say it's a little bit poisonous, I actually didn't pay much attention to it after reading it. [Crazy] You can read it. If you like Demon Slayer and Zoro, this book is still good. [Thinking] In addition, please do your best, the author. As a newcomer's book, and there is no previous text to draw reference from, it can already be regarded as the second echelon [laughs]

The author is only in junior high school and already has such good writing skills. I didn't even dare to say that I could write such a good anime fan novel as a freshman. Keep up the good work, author, and hope you can create better works!

I feel that this is the most palatable Demon Slayer fanfic I have ever seen in Tomato. The protagonist is well controlled both in terms of strength and personality. The author seems to be a high school student? It has great potential. Come on, sum up your experience after writing this book. I hope you can write more outstanding novels in the future.

The plot is reasonable, the combat power is not broken, and the balance is good.

Except that the pace is a bit fast and there are no emotional scenes, it's all good.

It's really good to watch, the early plot isn't very good, but it's not bad either. The later stage is really exciting, but there are too few articles. [Please update] Finally, I would like to ask if there is any foreshadowing in the Hawkeye part? [Sending Hearts]

It's really good, but it's a pity that Butterfly Ninja lost one of his right arms in the end.

All in all... It's a really good story...

The author is down! Update soon! ! ! So pretty! ! ! ! !

This book is also one of the best among Demon Slayer spin-offs, and it is very well written.

There are a lot of typos, but it's very nice [Love] Raising books is about to start accelerating

I think the plot is pretty good. There may be a small flaw on the front, but it probably doesn't count. But I can accept it. [Learned]

The story is great, it's a pity it was rewritten, the family ending is the best

The book is really beautiful and highly recommended. Their ending is very good. Seeing their happy life makes me want to cry. I can only find the ending I imagined here. I like this book very much.

The pace is a bit fast, but it's well written and I love reading it. And the author, please update me soon! Author, your novels are still too few. Do you have any recommendations for more novels about Sauron that have a lot of words?

It's great. I've finished it. I hope the author's next novel will be the same. Also, please, can you remind me when you start the next novel?

A pretty good book

Looks good, I'd love to see it more.

It's a bit short. Author: It's too short.

Looks good, but a bit short [smile][smile][smile]

Nice! Come on, author!

It's so beautiful, there are many abstract metaphors [eating melon] [eating melon]

It's pretty good, I spent more than an hour reading it all, and I saw the yellow button.

It is a very healing piece. Although there are not many chapters, the essence is still there.

It's beautiful, I love reading it, I love you so much, the author.

Very nice happy ending٩(๑^o^๑)۶

The author's writing is very good, very good (my literary talent is not very good, so I can only praise this much)

Can the author CP not be a butterfly ninja? @Chusheng2

There are several female protagonists [laughing evilly] Now there seems to be only one, Nezuko can't accept her [laughing evilly]