I Asked You to Sell Paintings on the Street, So Why Are You Mining in Ailao Mountain?

Chapter 10 of persuading people to quit. Except for the protagonist, who is a normal person, everyone else is mentally retarded. The plot advancement is stiff. It feels like it is the author's own one-man show. Being funny does not mean being mentally retarded. It is a slap in the face without logic. The world view and values of the novel are too far away from reality, and the description of details is also poor. It's in place. Originally, my predecessor had no ability to sell paintings at the beginning and screwed up and others wanted to refund the money. When you time-traveled and performed an unexplained operation, I knew that I wanted to highlight the image of the protagonist, but you forcibly reduced the intelligence of the supporting character and performed a confusing operation. The protagonist himself was unreasonable. The predecessor's technology I can't ask others to refund the money. You didn't solve the problem after time travel, and you made things difficult for me. I don't know why I wrote this. Do you think this is funny? Isn't this a slap in the face? I won't say the rest. It feels like you are trying to write a novel. Come on, author, you definitely want to write an online novel. But if you read novels for a long time, most of these poisonous points can be avoided. I have also seen authors who write their own ideas. Others really have one thing and one thing, but you have written something different.

Others have three golden chapters, but you have three chapters to persuade them to quit? 🤦

No, it's hard work. I have to write more than ten chapters in one place.

Little white text, suitable for reading without thinking!

Not bad, let's keep it for a few more days and then take a look.

Come on! Settings are OK

Too much poison

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