Xuanhuan: The System Says I Must Become Invincible Before Taking Disciples

Four stars, after all, it looked pretty good at the beginning, but in chapter 64, the protagonist turned to licking hard, which was a bit poisonous, so I left.

Crowdfunding to write a book, help me think of a few interesting apprentices, set up a character, plug-ins, make them more interesting. [Eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon] Let me tell you, if you think there is something wrong, let Aite tell me. If I think what you said makes sense, I will modify it. I don't read comments very much. Sometimes there is something wrong with the plot and I don't know about it, so if you see it, please tell me, Aite. Sometimes there are problems with the plot, and it's true that I didn't think it through properly, so I need brothers to correct me [I learned it] [I learned it] [I learned it]

After reading so many fantasy novels, this is one of the few that can be given five stars. The plot and content are very good, there are no lags, and all the pitfalls are fixed. Moreover, the theme is quite novel. You need to get the rewards first and then complete the tasks. There are restrictions, so it is not an invincible novel. At the same time, it also develops the sect. For readers who like to see strong protagonists, people who recruit disciples and develop their power, this is great! The apprentice is also very familiar with it. It is a mixture of many good fantasy novels. The best thing is that all the pitfalls have been repaired. For example, the pot of the first disciple is actually an immortal weapon randomly trained by an immortal emperor; the small green bottle of the second disciple is a great treasure of the great road, and the protagonist's system is also a great treasure of the great road. Including the five subsequent disciples, they have all achieved enlightenment, and there are no regrets; the pets in the front have not been left behind, and they are present throughout the whole story, and in the end they have successfully achieved enlightenment. Praise

It's great, I'm at chapter 39 now. I don't think I saw anything poisonous. He talked openly with his disciples. There was no fierce fighting, just plain and simple. There is just a bit too much description when describing the daughter of the ancestor of the sect, and I don't know if she is the heroine. (It is only described when it appears, but not at other times. For example, there is no description of the delicate body, red lips, etc.)

The writing style is white and the setting is good, but the details are not described enough. The pace in the early stage was too fast and the details could not be kept up. However, in the middle stage, it can be seen that the writing has improved and the content is richer than before.

Very good nanny article. She is the kind of good nanny who brings her own food and works hard for others. She is a model nanny [Like][Like][Like][Like]

What a great book, my favorite type The further it goes, the uglier it becomes, so do we have to follow the old Shuangwen route?

A rare good book. I read it all at once. IQ Online. Protect shortcomings. Slowly and step by step. Not fast, not slow. Food and grass are also available. But the only thing is that the killing is not decisive enough. I just use the enslavement technique. General setting: If the realm is not higher than that of the caster, the law of enslavement cannot be broken = the protagonist's realm is higher than 99.99% Of the people. On this basis, it is not excluded that the killing is not decisive enough.

It's very good👌 There is a systematic and thoughtful approach to accepting apprenticeships. There is no blind procrastination, no ambiguity with female apprentices, and no intake of apprentices that readers can't remember. This kind of writing is excellent in this category.

It's pretty good, I've read 200 chapters, it doesn't have too many explosive points, but it doesn't have any obvious poisonous points either. Although it doesn't have the climax of showing off and being slapped in the face, it still has an invincible and leisurely style, which I like. Even though he has taken on a disciple, he is not a complete nanny and takes care of everything. It is also good to train him in a relaxed and moderate manner. There is also an expert who is behind the scenes and knows how to give back to the sect. He is not a cold-blooded person, but he is not a holy mother either. Overall, I feel good. The only annoying point is that each upgrade requires several advance opportunities to upgrade spiritual pets. Obviously, they can be directly exchanged for new high-level spiritual pets. However, it can also be understood that the author is afraid that there are too many characters and it is difficult to control. This is an annoying point, not a poisonous point.