Fantasy: the System Makes Me Invincible First and Then Recruit Disciples

Four stars, after all, it looked pretty good at the beginning, but in chapter 64, the protagonist turned to licking hard, which was a bit poisonous, so I left.

Crowdfunding to write a book, help me think of a few interesting apprentices, set up a character, plug-ins, make them more interesting. [Eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon] Let me tell you, if you think there is something wrong, let Aite tell me. If I think what you said makes sense, I will modify it. I don't read comments very much. Sometimes there is something wrong with the plot and I don't know about it, so if you see it, please tell me, Aite. Sometimes there are problems with the plot, and it's true that I didn't think it through properly, so I need brothers to correct me [I learned it] [I learned it] [I learned it]

After reading so many fantasy novels, this is one of the few that can be given five stars. The plot and content are very good, there are no lags, and all the pitfalls are fixed. Moreover, the theme is quite novel. You need to get the rewards first and then complete the tasks. There are restrictions, so it is not an invincible novel. At the same time, it also develops the sect. For readers who like to see strong protagonists, people who recruit disciples and develop their power, this is great! The apprentice is also very familiar with it. It is a mixture of many good fantasy novels. The best thing is that all the pitfalls have been repaired. For example, the pot of the first disciple is actually an immortal weapon randomly trained by an immortal emperor; the small green bottle of the second disciple is a great treasure of the great road, and the protagonist's system is also a great treasure of the great road. Including the five subsequent disciples, they have all achieved enlightenment, and there are no regrets; the pets in the front have not been left behind, and they are present throughout the whole story, and in the end they have successfully achieved enlightenment. Praise

It's great, I'm at chapter 39 now. I don't think I saw anything poisonous. He talked openly with his disciples. There was no fierce fighting, just plain and simple. There is just a bit too much description when describing the daughter of the ancestor of the sect, and I don't know if she is the heroine. (It is only described when it appears, but not at other times. For example, there is no description of the delicate body, red lips, etc.)

The writing style is white and the setting is good, but the details are not described enough. The pace in the early stage was too fast and the details could not be kept up. However, in the middle stage, it can be seen that the writing has improved and the content is richer than before.

A rare good book. I read it all at once. IQ Online. Protect shortcomings. Slowly and step by step. Not fast, not slow. Food and grass are also available. But the only thing is that the killing is not decisive enough. I just use the enslavement technique. General setting: If the realm is not higher than that of the caster, the law of enslavement cannot be broken = the protagonist's realm is higher than 99.99% Of the people. On this basis, it is not excluded that the killing is not decisive enough.

Very good nanny article. She is the kind of good nanny who brings her own food and works hard for others. She is a model nanny [Like][Like][Like][Like]

What a great book, my favorite type The further it goes, the uglier it becomes, so do we have to follow the old Shuangwen route?

It's pretty good, I've read 200 chapters, it doesn't have too many explosive points, but it doesn't have any obvious poisonous points either. Although it doesn't have the climax of showing off and being slapped in the face, it still has an invincible and leisurely style, which I like. Even though he has taken on a disciple, he is not a complete nanny and takes care of everything. It is also good to train him in a relaxed and moderate manner. There is also an expert who is behind the scenes and knows how to give back to the sect. He is not a cold-blooded person, but he is not a holy mother either. Overall, I feel good. The only annoying point is that each upgrade requires several advance opportunities to upgrade spiritual pets. Obviously, they can be directly exchanged for new high-level spiritual pets. However, it can also be understood that the author is afraid that there are too many characters and it is difficult to control. This is an annoying point, not a poisonous point.

It's very good👌 There is a systematic and thoughtful approach to accepting apprenticeships. There is no blind procrastination, no ambiguity with female apprentices, and no intake of apprentices that readers can't remember. This kind of writing is excellent in this category.

If you haven't read Eternal Thought, Mortal Cultivation of Immortality, Battle Through the Sky, and Perfect World, it's a good idea to check this one out. Although it's like a hodgepodge, it's not a bad book to read in terms of tomatoes.

I have followed the author's three books. Except for the last book, The Eunuch, the author's writing style is very good. However, some of the author's designs are a bit convoluted. I may not understand them. Anyway, I have been following all the author's books. They are quite interesting.

It's really good-looking, with a big-picture view, various materials realistically, and a blend of the strengths of each novel, all described very well. I feel like the author is going to lose a lot of hair [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon] Come on, author!

It feels pretty good-looking! The development of the protagonist is very steady, and he treats his apprentices well. I really like to read the apprenticeship story, which is the process of training the apprentices to become talents. It is like a training game, and it seems very easy. I don't know if there is a female protagonist, I hope it can be cp-free! It's the most enjoyable to be a disciple and concentrate on cultivating immortality and upgrading! I'm almost halfway through watching it, and I realize that the protagonist is actually a pretty lazy person, and basically relies on the system (for example, he can obviously redeem elixir recipes for refining, but he spends several exchange times to exchange for elixirs because he's too lazy to collect the materials). He doesn't feel bad about using the exchange times. Sometimes it feels a bit wasteful, especially cultivating spiritual pets. It's a waste. I hope it can be improved in the future. Apart from this, everything else looks pretty good to me, and there are no outstanding points. It's actually quite good for the apprentice and the sect. After all, you can't rely entirely on him. You have to work hard on your own. Some people may feel that it's not necessary and just use the system to mention it. But I feel that after all, apprentices don't have a system. They are all children of luck. They can grow into better people by working hard on their own.

It's very bland, and it's not a brainless stallion. It's tasteless and it's a pity to abandon it. If you want to pass the time, you can still read it. Anyway, I don't expect the free novel to be very good. The purpose of reading the novel is to kill some time. Give it a five-star support. After all, writing a novel is not easy. I guess in the hearts of all the apprentices of the protagonist, they feel that the master is omnipotent [laughs crookedly], and they should turn to the master if they are in trouble [face covering]

The plot is good, the character of the protagonist is also quite good, and the content is rich.

It looks good. There are no flaws so far. The pace is moderate. Good luck to the author. I also look forward to the follow-up apprenticeship.

It's well written, I like this kind of relaxed style

Sorry, I forgot to give a positive review Such a beautiful book is worth it

The overall plot is pretty good. There are very few books like this that I have written now. It is also the first good book I have read in such a long time. I must support it.

It looks good so far, great, great

It is one of the few novels that is not unfinished and is relatively complete. It took me a day to read it but it was still very emotional. The whole text is relatively bland, but I like this description very much. It allowed me to live in that world again.

Responding to the author's needs, five-star praise, the book is indeed good, I have been following it, but the shortcoming is that it is written too slowly! [Eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon]

The plot is reasonable, but the details are not enough. It would be better to intersperse some emotional lines into the plot.

It looks good and is currently non-toxic and harmless. Semi-invincible text. Come on

The plot is good so far, and there are no major flaws. It's peaceful, and there hasn't been any plot where the apprentice likes the master (it's not that I don't like "The Legend of the Condor Heroes", I also like it. Mainly, most of them can't write that feeling)

To be honest, I quite like it. There are many books about this kind of invincible disciples, but the author's writing feels very comfortable. The only thing is that the author has published quite a few books, but none of them exceed 500,000 words. Basically, they have all been cut. Will this one be cut? It now has 100,000 words. According to the author's previous word count, one-third of the book has been written.

Super pretty, a little bit too poisonous, and extremely poisonous

Very good. There are not many novels that I can read, but the number of words is a bit short. Come on, the author.

All I can say is that I can watch it, but there's nothing else to watch anyway, so just think it's too much.