"Gender-bender + Reborn + Beautiful, Strong, and Tragic"
"The main story has a happy ending, but there are multiple what-if routes with tragic endings"
“This time, I choose to fall so I can protect what I love.”
He was once the most dazzling holy son of the righteous path. He watched helplessly as his sect was destroyed and his beloved perished, then fell into darkness alone and spent his whole life wiping out the demonic path.
But at the very moment he reached the summit and fulfilled his wish, time turned back. He had been reborn as a dying young girl named Ji Ruoling.
In this life, she no longer clings to the hollow reputation of the righteous path.
To uphold the vow of protection she had failed to keep in her previous life, she willingly steps into the abyss, takes up her sword as a witch, and strikes at an even deeper darkness.
The world sees only her bloodstained white robes and her steady descent into becoming a demon, never realizing that the targets of her blade are the true evils that once destroyed everything she held dear.
She burns herself to give the people she loves peaceful lives, and even when mocked, misunderstood, or feared, she refuses to turn back.
But at some point, the holy maidens she had fought so desperately to protect, those aloof, gentle, and proud figures, began one by one to willingly cast off their holy light, step into the shadows, and stand firmly behind her.
“If the righteous path of this world cannot protect you,” they said softly, “then we will become demons with you.”
Why have the holy maidens of the righteous path all suddenly taken to falling into demonic ways?
The setting is very novel, the early characterization is excellent, the characters are full-bodied, and the description of the if line is also great. Great potential I originally wanted to give it a try before reading it, but I didn't expect it to die (sad), but I felt that the writing style had changed a bit since the protagonist came out of the Luoxia Sect, and after I met Le, it gave me some hope. It felt like a script about fighting monsters and collecting a harem along the way. If it were written like this, I would still be willing to read it, but it is a pity. It is rare to find a script that does not have a high concentration of two-dimensional elements, does not deliberately sell the lily plot, and has an online protagonist's IQ. The author has also written down a lot of shortcomings, but the quality and the bad need to be compared. I can only say that in the context of Tomato, your writing is definitely not bad so far. What you may be missing is some experience. If you still have plans, try to write them. If you have the ability, go for it.
I really love this book. The author describes the relationship between Ji and her surroundings in a wonderful way. Yu Youxi's farewell to Yun was filled with feelings of separation and lingering, while her deep affection for Le was deepened as time went by. After "The Record of Killing Demons in the Immortal Capital of Penglai", Ji, Le, and Xing have a small room together, which is warm and harmonious. It's a pity that the author's book ended suddenly before it was finished. However, since the author has published the outline, he also wants to fill in the gaps. I am grateful to the author for writing and illustrating this wonderful chapter, which comforts my heart. I wish you a long and healthy pen, a spring of literary thoughts, frequent and worry-free masterpieces from now on. (This is pseudo-classical Chinese, polished by artificial intelligence. If you don't like it, please allow me to apologize.)
Unfortunately, the most surprising thing when reading is actually that Le's if has some small details that are the same as the main plot, and their confession is really smooth (?, But it also caused me to automatically lead into the pure love script when reading this book, and later felt that the relationship was too messy (other people were redundant, which made me happy The treasure can't be let go) 🙂, but if the main plot is independent and focused on family and friends (or there is only one female protagonist), and multiple if lines are pure love, the perception may be much better. Of course, these are personal opinions, and I look forward to the author's next book (I am looking forward to Western Fantasy😎).
It's very interesting, but I have something to ask the author. Is the main plot of the text 1V1? In the past, I have only read books with all the CPs in the main line, but I have never read a book with a single CP in the main line, or a book in which the CP of the protagonist in the IF line is changed. I feel a little uncomfortable 🤦
It's good-looking, the characters have their own characteristics, and the protagonist is not a trash snack (the protagonists of many male-to-female novels I read are only cute and cute, with no fighting ability, and they don't look like male-to-female at all), and the interspersed if lines are also interesting and awesome.
I have read this book by order of the bus, it is very beautiful. But it is a pity that I have not achieved perfection. This is really a regret in my heart. I only rejoice in Ji Le's love. I wish the author all the best and find the right path to his dream as soon as possible (apologies for this pseudo-classical Chinese article)
Non-toxic, safe to eat. The character creation is very arcuate and three-dimensional, and it is not the kind of assembly-line garbage formulaic novel. Moreover, each chapter has a mysterious little IF, an idiot master, the sleeping god Yin Yi, a junior sister Murong Shuang, a miserable Luo Shuang, and a very capable Xiao Le. All in all, it is very delicious😋
It looks good, and the interspersed if lines are also good. I like this sudden knife. It not only enriches the world view, but also makes the characters three-dimensional. The overall evaluation is no less than some paid novels. The overall story is delicate. This calm (crossed out) style and the overall character of the protagonist and the shaping of the master are perfect. But now I just saw Luo Ying come back. I feel like a vase, but I feel that she is one of the female protagonists. I don't know if she will grow in the future.
It's actually quite good. One star is given because I don't like time travelers appearing in novels other than the protagonist, especially time travelers who know the plot. This makes me feel that the protagonist's halo as the protagonist has been robbed. However, I read that many Cultivation Lily novels will have such characters, which is helpless.
It feels good to see it now, but the final ending should be written so that the protagonist unifies the evil way and the righteous way. After all, where there is light, there is darkness. If there is no magic way at all, then this is an ideal world.