"Transformation + rebirth + beauty, strength and misery"
"Main story HE, but there are multiple if lines containing BE"
"This time, I choose to fall for protection."
He was once the most dazzling holy son of the righteous path, but he watched helplessly as his sect was destroyed, his love withered, he fell into darkness alone, and spent his whole life destroying the evil path.
But at the moment when he reached the top and got his wish, time turned back - he was reborn as a dying girl, Ji Ruoling.
In this life, she is no longer obsessed with the false reputation of the right path.
In order to keep the oath of guardianship she lost in her previous life, she took the initiative to step into the abyss, holding a sword as a witch, and slashed into deeper darkness.
The world only saw her white clothes stained with blood, turning into a demon step by step, but they didn't know that the direction of her sword was always the real evil that had destroyed everything in her life.
She burns herself in exchange for the peace of mind of the one she loves. Even if she is laughed at, misunderstood, or feared, she will never look back.
But I don't know when, those saints who she desperately wanted to protect behind her, those cold, gentle, and proud figures, voluntarily faded away from the holy light one by one, stepped into the shadows, and stood firmly behind her.
"If the righteousness of this world cannot protect you," they whispered, "then we will accompany you to become a demon."
Among the righteous saints, why is it so popular recently to become a demon?
Reader comments
The setting is very novel, the early characterization is excellent, the characters are full-bodied, and the description of the if line is also great. Great potential
I originally wanted to give it a try before reading it, but I didn't expect it to die (sad), but I felt that the writing style had changed a bit since the protagonist came out of the Luoxia Sect, and after I met Le, it gave me some hope. It felt like a script about fighting monsters and collecting a harem along the way. If it were written like this, I would still be willing to read it, but it is a pity. It is rare to find a script that does not have a high concentration of two-dimensional elements, does not deliberately sell the lily plot, and has an online protagonist's IQ.
The author has also written down a lot of shortcomings, but the quality and the bad need to be compared. I can only say that in the context of Tomato, your writing is definitely not bad so far. What you may be missing is some experience. If you still have plans, try to write them. If you have the ability, go for it.
I really love this book. The author describes the relationship between Ji and her surroundings in a wonderful way. Yu Youxi's farewell to Yun was filled with feelings of separation and lingering, while her deep affection for Le was deepened as time went by. After "The Record of Killing Demons in the Immortal Capital of Penglai", Ji, Le, and Xing have a small room together, which is warm and harmonious.
It's a pity that the author's book ended suddenly before it was finished. However, since the author has published the outline, he also wants to fill in the gaps.
I am grateful to the author for writing and illustrating this wonderful chapter, which comforts my heart. I wish you a long and healthy pen, a spring of literary thoughts, frequent and worry-free masterpieces from now on.
(This is pseudo-classical Chinese, polished by artificial intelligence. If you don't like it, please allow me to apologize.)
It's good-looking, the characters have their own characteristics, and the protagonist is not a trash snack (the protagonists of many male-to-female novels I read are only cute and cute, with no fighting ability, and they don't look like male-to-female at all), and the interspersed if lines are also interesting and awesome.
Unfortunately, the most surprising thing when reading is actually that Le's if has some small details that are the same as the main plot, and their confession is really smooth (?, But it also caused me to automatically lead into the pure love script when reading this book, and later felt that the relationship was too messy (other people were redundant, which made me happy The treasure can't be let go) [smile], but if the main plot is independent and focused on family and friends (or there is only one female protagonist), and multiple if lines are pure love, the perception may be much better. Of course, these are personal opinions, and I look forward to the author's next book (I am looking forward to Western Fantasy😎).
It's very interesting, but I have something to ask the author. Is the main plot of the text 1V1?
In the past, I have only read books with all the CPs in the main line, but I have never read a book with a single CP in the main line, or a book in which the CP of the protagonist in the IF line is changed. I feel a little uncomfortable [face covering]
I have read this book by order of the bus, it is very beautiful. But it is a pity that I have not achieved perfection. This is really a regret in my heart. I only rejoice in Ji Le's love. I wish the author all the best and find the right path to his dream as soon as possible (apologies for this pseudo-classical Chinese article)
Non-toxic, safe to eat. The character creation is very arcuate and three-dimensional, and it is not the kind of assembly-line garbage formulaic novel. Moreover, each chapter has a mysterious little IF, an idiot master, the sleeping god Yin Yi, a junior sister Murong Shuang, a miserable Luo Shuang, and a very capable Xiao Le. All in all, it is very delicious😋
It looks good, and the interspersed if lines are also good. I like this sudden knife. It not only enriches the world view, but also makes the characters three-dimensional.
The overall evaluation is no less than some paid novels. The overall story is delicate. This calm (crossed out) style and the overall character of the protagonist and the shaping of the master are perfect. But now I just saw Luo Ying come back. I feel like a vase, but I feel that she is one of the female protagonists. I don't know if she will grow in the future.
It's actually quite good. One star is given because I don't like time travelers appearing in novels other than the protagonist, especially time travelers who know the plot. This makes me feel that the protagonist's halo as the protagonist has been robbed. However, I read that many Cultivation Lily novels will have such characters, which is helpless.
I like the beautiful, strong and miserable characters, and the heroines have very distinct personalities. The combination of the if line and the main line is both sharp and sweet. This is a good-looking novel, very good!
It feels good to see it now, but the final ending should be written so that the protagonist unifies the evil way and the righteous way. After all, where there is light, there is darkness. If there is no magic way at all, then this is an ideal world.
There is a problem with combat power, but it's just a minor matter. I need to add more if lines🥰
It's quite good-looking, and the world view is novel. It's pretty good to watch. There are a few foreshadowings, and everyone's portrayal is pretty good.
It's good to watch~ The author's writing style is good and the writing is very smooth~ The plot is also quite good. Come on, come on~~
Very good, come on! [Like][Like][Like]
It's a great read, it's a great read, please update it quickly, I can do everything!
It's really beautiful, with deep characters and delicate emotions (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡
It's a pity that I didn't finish it in the end...ಥ_ಥ
Wow, I didn't expect it to end so soon
It's a pity. I feel pretty good. If it were released in a certain period, it might become popular (´_ゝ｀). Come on, author.
It's a pity that it's over and I'm looking forward to the author's new book.
It looks good, especially the if line is very good [laughs]
I like both of the author's books [Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss]
The setting is very novel, the early characterization is excellent, the characters are full-bodied, and the description of the if line is also great. Great potential I originally wanted to give it a try before reading it, but I didn't expect it to die (sad), but I felt that the writing style had changed a bit since the protagonist came out of the Luoxia Sect, and after I met Le, it gave me some hope. It felt like a script about fighting monsters and collecting a harem along the way. If it were written like this, I would still be willing to read it, but it is a pity. It is rare to find a script that does not have a high concentration of two-dimensional elements, does not deliberately sell the lily plot, and has an online protagonist's IQ. The author has also written down a lot of shortcomings, but the quality and the bad need to be compared. I can only say that in the context of Tomato, your writing is definitely not bad so far. What you may be missing is some experience. If you still have plans, try to write them. If you have the ability, go for it.
I really love this book. The author describes the relationship between Ji and her surroundings in a wonderful way. Yu Youxi's farewell to Yun was filled with feelings of separation and lingering, while her deep affection for Le was deepened as time went by. After "The Record of Killing Demons in the Immortal Capital of Penglai", Ji, Le, and Xing have a small room together, which is warm and harmonious. It's a pity that the author's book ended suddenly before it was finished. However, since the author has published the outline, he also wants to fill in the gaps. I am grateful to the author for writing and illustrating this wonderful chapter, which comforts my heart. I wish you a long and healthy pen, a spring of literary thoughts, frequent and worry-free masterpieces from now on. (This is pseudo-classical Chinese, polished by artificial intelligence. If you don't like it, please allow me to apologize.)
It's good-looking, the characters have their own characteristics, and the protagonist is not a trash snack (the protagonists of many male-to-female novels I read are only cute and cute, with no fighting ability, and they don't look like male-to-female at all), and the interspersed if lines are also interesting and awesome.
Unfortunately, the most surprising thing when reading is actually that Le's if has some small details that are the same as the main plot, and their confession is really smooth (?, But it also caused me to automatically lead into the pure love script when reading this book, and later felt that the relationship was too messy (other people were redundant, which made me happy The treasure can't be let go) [smile], but if the main plot is independent and focused on family and friends (or there is only one female protagonist), and multiple if lines are pure love, the perception may be much better. Of course, these are personal opinions, and I look forward to the author's next book (I am looking forward to Western Fantasy😎).
It's very interesting, but I have something to ask the author. Is the main plot of the text 1V1? In the past, I have only read books with all the CPs in the main line, but I have never read a book with a single CP in the main line, or a book in which the CP of the protagonist in the IF line is changed. I feel a little uncomfortable [face covering]
I have read this book by order of the bus, it is very beautiful. But it is a pity that I have not achieved perfection. This is really a regret in my heart. I only rejoice in Ji Le's love. I wish the author all the best and find the right path to his dream as soon as possible (apologies for this pseudo-classical Chinese article)
Non-toxic, safe to eat. The character creation is very arcuate and three-dimensional, and it is not the kind of assembly-line garbage formulaic novel. Moreover, each chapter has a mysterious little IF, an idiot master, the sleeping god Yin Yi, a junior sister Murong Shuang, a miserable Luo Shuang, and a very capable Xiao Le. All in all, it is very delicious😋
It looks good, and the interspersed if lines are also good. I like this sudden knife. It not only enriches the world view, but also makes the characters three-dimensional. The overall evaluation is no less than some paid novels. The overall story is delicate. This calm (crossed out) style and the overall character of the protagonist and the shaping of the master are perfect. But now I just saw Luo Ying come back. I feel like a vase, but I feel that she is one of the female protagonists. I don't know if she will grow in the future.
It's actually quite good. One star is given because I don't like time travelers appearing in novels other than the protagonist, especially time travelers who know the plot. This makes me feel that the protagonist's halo as the protagonist has been robbed. However, I read that many Cultivation Lily novels will have such characters, which is helpless.
I like the beautiful, strong and miserable characters, and the heroines have very distinct personalities. The combination of the if line and the main line is both sharp and sweet. This is a good-looking novel, very good!
It feels good to see it now, but the final ending should be written so that the protagonist unifies the evil way and the righteous way. After all, where there is light, there is darkness. If there is no magic way at all, then this is an ideal world.
There is a problem with combat power, but it's just a minor matter. I need to add more if lines🥰
It's quite good-looking, and the world view is novel. It's pretty good to watch. There are a few foreshadowings, and everyone's portrayal is pretty good.
It's good to watch~ The author's writing style is good and the writing is very smooth~ The plot is also quite good. Come on, come on~~
Very good, come on! [Like][Like][Like]
It's a great read, it's a great read, please update it quickly, I can do everything!
It's really beautiful, with deep characters and delicate emotions (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡ It's a pity that I didn't finish it in the end...ಥ_ಥ
Wow, I didn't expect it to end so soon
It's a pity. I feel pretty good. If it were released in a certain period, it might become popular (´_ゝ｀). Come on, author.
It's a pity that it's over and I'm looking forward to the author's new book.
It looks good, especially the if line is very good [laughs]
I like both of the author's books [Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss]
Look good, good, good