I Cultivate Immortality

Yes, it was a bit stiff at the beginning. If I hadn't read the book, I almost couldn't stand it. Fortunately, it got better after about 30 chapters, and it became smoother. The writing is okay, I just need to change the sentences. Add books to the bookshelf, save it first, fatten it up and then kill it! Come on, author, don't stop updating, many bookshelves are broken, 😢 I'm so tired, it's so hard to find writers!

The plot is compact and the plot is tense and interesting. The male protagonist is quite humorous, but I still don't know who the female protagonist is [Thoughts]