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Xiuxian + Tianmu, a very interesting combination, I like it. But I hope that when the original heroine and others slander the heroine, the heroine can refute it, and don't use the trick of "the one who understands will self-examine", it's not enough to just be a cricket in the sky.

It is different from the traditional Cultivation of Immortality novels. In Chapter 123, the heroine has never fought monsters. She is a nerdy Internet girl who stays at home to write novels every day. Since everyone started to follow the novels of the heroine, those scheming bitches, whoring and soft-boiled men and gold-fishing girls have nowhere to hide. The general public in the Cultivation World observes the people around them with a critical eye every day, saving many love-minded fools and all kinds of shit. The logic is prudent. Although the heroine does not go out to fight monsters at the moment, it is also a kind of secret pleasure to be able to defeat others without fighting at home. Those who want to secretly do evil will be exposed by the heroine before they can make a move. No matter how good the tricks are, they will be aborted. It feels better than fighting in person. The main reason is that the other party does not know who the enemy is.

This is really good-looking and super funny. It's not a forced comedy like those TikTok memes. The people in the author's writings are so funny that it made me laugh to death. I've been reading books for eleven years. I've read various genres since I was in school. The funny genre is what makes me think it's really funny. Hahahaha, I'm such a picky person. This is the first time in my life that I reward [shy] hahaha. Especially Jin Long, Bi Hen and the heroine go to the netherworld and stack up together. There's also touching the dragon and scratching the dragon's neck. I'm almost laughing to death🤣It's so late at night. I'll give you five stars first. Come on, author.

This article is very interesting. Although the original protagonist has a protagonist aura and is difficult to kill, he will not come out to play around often, and the other supporting characters will not mindlessly defend the original protagonist and make the heroine "wronged". The point is that the heroine is not mute! ! ! It's not like I don't say anything when I feel wronged, I just watch you acting like a monster quietly, and then wait for others to help slap you in the face. If the heroine is wronged, she will take revenge on the spot. If she cannot take revenge on the spot, it will not take long. Cool! ! ! It's a really cool article! ! ! Nice! ! ! ! ! ! [The masterpiece of bird food][Please update]

I declare that this is the heroine I have seen who has upgraded the fastest in the world of cultivation this year! [Like] Every paragraph of the novel written by the heroine on the sky screen is very interesting. Different from the type of novels that focus on writing, this novel has a small proportion of content, but it is very insightful. It is not like other random fabrications. It can be said to keep up with current events (in the book) There are not many good-looking comedy novels without cp. If you stick with this one, it will get a score of 9 or above. Probably the content is to create the protagonist's love brain to death, which is very cool, unlike others. It is right not to save the love brain. Regardless of male or female, the protagonist must always maintain his original intention. What I like most is that when everyone breaks through the novel's content, it's really funny. Although the scumbag and love-minded jokes are common in it, it has a different feeling that makes people want to read on. Especially the back part looks better than the front part! I would like to make a small suggestion. I hope there will be more female characters, such as immortals and so on. Those who are suspected to be the heroine's brother and her brother's friends are all men. I hope there will be more outstanding female characters. After all, men without cp don't care. The author's writing is good, the content is novel and interesting, and it is very beautiful. It has received five-star reviews and has been reviewed. I hope it will be updated [please update][please update]

The plot is very novel and very interesting. Xiaozhi has a love brain and the medicine he administered is not harsh, so Xiaozhi, not much, after all, you can't wake up a person who is pretending to sleep, let alone a dead person? (The following is my personal feeling. Don't watch it, don't watch it, don't watch it! I say the important things three times! Don't complain if you feel uncomfortable after watching it, because I won't necessarily watch it if you complain, and I won't necessarily pay attention to you if you do.) Personally, I feel that the content is relatively bland, and there is no special ups and downs in the plot. It feels like a class where you understand everything but feel sleepy. To me, simplicity means that it is as boring and boring as going to school. Sometimes I can encounter some interesting things, but not many, and I will forget them after a while. It's too bland, just like the vegetarian dishes I've been eating for half a year, without any oil or meat. The full score is 10 points, which I think is just above or below the excellent score.

The writing is novice, but the plot is unique. The protagonist has no CP. It is a light-hearted and funny story. There are currently no interesting points, and it is not a purely brainless and fun story. There are also normal people with thinking and logic in it, but they still need to be nurtured. There are too few and it is not enough to read [Thinking]

The setting is novel. I really want to see the shock and change that Tianmu brings to people in the world of cultivation. The heroine is sane and decisive, but there are too few updates. I hope the author can do it faster. I really want to see the subsequent plot development [Love]

It's very interesting. I love reading it. The content of the book is very innovative and attractive. The heroine is also very resourceful and brave. Lightning points: The plot of Tianmu basically takes place around the people around the heroine. People who the heroine hates basically play the role of bad guys in Tianmu. People who are good friends with the heroine will be given a similar plot warning by Tianmu. Moreover, the heroine's cultivation level has increased so fast. Why can't you guess that Tianmu is the heroine's fault. Especially when the heroine ascends to the upper world, the sky also appears in the upper world. Why do people who are familiar with the heroine have no doubts.

Big heroine, system, time travel, multiple reincarnations, canopy plot, no cp, the way of heaven. The subject matter is very novel. The heroine Ye Qingyan is a super scroll king who is bound to the scroll king system. She has a big golden finger. The heroine slowly changes the world by writing novels on the sky screen. The plot of the sky screen includes the past, present and future. At present, it seems that the heroine's identity may be very good. 399

The subject matter is very new and it is the first one I have seen so far. It feels like there will be a lot of them popping up pretty quickly. Come on, roll it up and read dozens or hundreds of chapters. I support you [I learned it] [I learned it]

The theme is novel, cultivating immortals + canopy, very creative. It would be better if the heroine is not a little aggrieved [laughs]

It's great to watch [crying] [crying] 1. The heroine is strong, smart, and has a righteous heart to lead the sect to take off. She is also very humorous in her greed for money and making money. I like it. 2. The various friends are so cute. The Phoenix, Bai Ze, and Qilin in the sky are all cute. The two Juan, Little Tatter, Bone Mom, Mirror, Master, Senior Sister, and the Master next to the heroine are also cute. The golden dragon in the back, the sky-defying Senior Sister Bi Hen, they are a loving family. 3. The characters are good, the characters are good, and the plot is good! There are plots about cultivation, immortals and demons, there are also plots about the real and fake daughter, anti-love brain plots, and there is also a hidden heroine's past and present life. It's great to watch. It is mainly comedy, with outstanding characters, Sister Jinlongdandan, senior sister/disciple Bihen, anti-love and anti-abuse stories, anti-abuse stories that charm the male protagonists, encourage female cultivators to pursue their careers, and have a sense of feminism. But for wc, there is a small problem of boys and girls, the ratio of the number of male and female characters, I hope it can be improved. Also, I have read Chapter 498, but there are still 54 chapters left to read. The follow-up is a bit boring, the plot is not very compact, and the characters are a bit stereotyped and a bit mindless. . In the story of Tianmu, the continuous scolding is very relaxing, and the strength is also very strong. The protagonist also has a lot of tricks, especially business acumen, and has a lot of imagination. It is also quite fun when going to the devil world. It is humorous and has female consciousness, so I still give it five stars. I look forward to the next book, which will get better and better.

Personally I think it is very well written. Although some of the views on the love brain may be a bit overdone (perhaps deep hatred needs to be re-examined), I deeply feel the author's strong goodwill in hoping that everyone should protect themselves and love others first. I have also read some novels within novels, and this one is really different. The plot is closely integrated and synchronized, and the writing is immersive and humorous. The heroine's ability is related to "writing" (no spoilers). She is currently practicing "Tao of Counting". Whether it is "(current plot) Book Spiritual Root" or "Tao of Counting", it is her growing ability to practice Taoism. When she was weak, she kept strategizing and practicing hard. It seemed that she never stopped at all. In fact, it was quite logical and set. The overall story is relatively relaxed, and the pace of the original male and female protagonists is relatively fast - not in terms of the timeline, but in terms of Mo's reasonableness. From the beginning, the powerful Son of Fortune and the daughter appeared more often, then to a little bit of destruction, decline, and finally to the final struggle and stubborn resistance until they were wiped out. Moreover, their appearance was also accompanied by the writing of the original Tiandao route. I personally think it is very reasonable. Recommend.

First of all, I don't have the habit of leaving negative reviews. After all, coding is very hard. I hope the author can read more suggestions from everyone in the comment area Then tell me your personal thoughts (involving some spoilers) The idea of the article is okay, but many of the plots, especially the slap-in-the-face plot, are quite classic and a bit too cliché-like, which may be a common problem in 🍅 articles. 1. In the largest sect where the heroine belongs, the sect leader is not respected by the most capable, but is hereditary, which is somewhat unjustifiable. Even after the young sect leader became disabled, this setting was still the same (I didn't read it, and I don't know if he will recover later, but it doesn't matter, because it is indeed illogical, and everyone in the comment area is complaining about this. 2. There are so many descriptions of villains, whether it's dialogue or contrived little actions, etc. The previous plot has always relied on the villain to cause trouble. Even a powerful man in the transformation stage repeatedly targeted the heroine and a young monk in the Qi refining stage, and even went to the sect to say that he wanted to expel the sect. It was a bit outrageous. 3. The introduction is a non-CP article (I must be correct?), But there is a character whose description is very typical and very similar to the male protagonist. The description of his deep eyes and so on is so classic! Okay, no more, because I haven't finished reading it and I can't watch it for the time being. Best wishes, salute [salute]

Ahhh, it's so beautiful. The heroine Ye Qingyan is very good, confident and intelligent, and the Wuji Sect is so united. It has such a loving atmosphere. People who watch it are very soft-hearted, and I really like the system. She is full of rainbows, and she does her best for the host. I like this kind of brave and resourceful protagonist!

It's still very interesting to watch now. As the author gets better, he always adds some humor, such as the scene where the entire sect is led astray by the heroine and holds a funeral together, collecting members' money in advance and almost breaking the gang, hahahahahaha The sky is used to create a flying love brain and has a woman to strengthen herself! The various white lotus green tea operations of the original male and female protagonists and the original named people were predicted in advance, so that their tea talk had nowhere to hide! The only thing that was a bit annoying at the beginning was that the original heroine had a lot of tea talk in the early stage, and it was annoying to watch. I always expected the heroine to turn into a slap monster and give the original heroine a series of eighteen slaps [laughs] but it didn't happen. Just get through this period, and the original male and female protagonists had more scenes than before. What I saw for the time being was that I felt that the flaws were not concealed. Oh yes, the most important thing is that this is a female channel. I hope the author will not change the female protagonist. The system calls the main system Big Daddy and says that it will recognize the female protagonist as the second daddy [laughs] Has the female protagonist changed into a male? Did the system change people's gender? I only saw one sentence so far, so I skipped it. I'll check it out again and report again. If you don't get any reaction after reading it, it means there's nothing serious about it. Super pretty! ! ! ! I complained about some logic bugs at the end, mainly because the little humor written by the author in the article is really funny. Every time I post a paragraph comment, I just want to say hahahaha [laughs] The plot is fast-paced and I don't feel bored. I love this kind of fast-paced long novel!

It's so funny hahaha 😁, reading a novel within a novel is exciting, slaps in the face, and fun. The plot is really good, it's so good, novel and interesting, I like the heroine's character, she has lots of clever ideas, her brain is very clever, the sect brothers have a good relationship, and they can cooperate with each other when doing things. It's not finished yet, keep chasing. [Praise]

The female video mainly tells stories, and of course it may also be about accidents. Accidents are written with innuendo through the canopy. Everyone eats melon. Love Brain - Dog Licking - Soft Rice - Green Tea - Phoenix Man - Rebirth - Broken Sleeves - True and False Daughter Chapter 520 Cause. But read it first and then go back to the first chapter. The outline is roughly that the protagonist lost his soul and went to modern times. After he died and came back, he was tricked and bound by System 09 (a fugitive who broke the rules and killed the host). After becoming the Immortal Emperor, they each opened the door. The protagonist hit the system until it shut down. The system hit the protagonist and the protagonist was stunned. He traveled back to modern times. The new individual died unexpectedly and was brought back by the second volume of the current system. What lies behind is the direction of a low-key comeback. The oath of heaven means that the protagonist cannot harm System No. 09. Breaking up means going back to modern times and turning off the phone. The story is quite good and there are many accidents. Can enter the pit. . The combat power level setting is definitely broken, a common problem among women. Identity is greater than realm.

The plot setting is very novel and the canopy part is very interesting. But the heroine was too frustrated. In the early stage, the female protagonist slandered the heroine. The heroine didn't say a word. Just like Da Ru, whoever finds out will find out. I watched the heroine spread rumors and provoke the heroine. I was so frustrated. I can watch Da Ru Chuan, but I can't stand it anyway. Readers can focus on the canopy, which is very distinctive and beautiful.

This book is really beautiful. Every time I read it, I always feel like I am reading a book, a novel within a novel [laughing] The heroine Ye Qingyan is the king of scrolls. She traveled from the present world and used the system to write novels on the sky screen to persuade those who are in love. From then on, the female cultivator in this article only wants to be an emperor, and the male cultivator only wants to ascend to the world of immortality and never fall in love.

This book has been recommended to me since last year. Every time I read the introduction, I would read it and feel that it is similar to other fairy tales. I read it when I was in a book shortage stage, and found that the author's writing style was sophisticated and his humor brought me a lot of joy. I couldn't help but read chapter by chapter until I finished the book. What's even more rare is that even though his family members fell ill and died, and his own work was transferred, he still insisted on updating his creations, without abandoning the article or discontinuing updates until it was completed. I was really shocked that the author could create such a joyful work despite being so sad. In addition, the logic of this book is clear, and all the foreshadowing laid in the early stage will be explained later, which is really rare! Strongly recommend everyone to take a look

If you like reading cool articles, you don't need to read this. This is a normal novel written by normal people, not catering to this software. It feels light but quite fun. It's relatively slow-paced, the plot is reasonable, simple and easy to understand, it has foreshadowing, it's funny, and for me, it's fun. Everything the heroine does is in line with the behavior of normal modern people. The supporting characters are all quite silly, so I don't feel angry watching them. But even if the supporting characters are relatively weak, Kizuko can still advance the plot, which I think is good. Regarding not killing the villains, there is actually no need to do it yourself, they are just insignificant people, it is good to know that you have a way to solve them, and just treat them like clowns. I even think the villains are just ordinary people with abnormal brains. For example, Long Tian, ​​do you think it is annoying? Actually, no, it's just for some of your own interests. It's very normal. The writing is good because the villains and supporting characters all have their own reasons, and they are not extreme characters. Reading it will only make me happy, and it won't make me angry like the villains in other novels.

So well written! ! ! This is my first time seeing this kind of subject matter. The story is warm, the content is clean and tidy, not procrastinating, not bloody, and it is all written around the heroine. It is not like the Xiuxian Ju that I watched before, which just wrote about many things about other characters. The language is also very connotative and worth thinking about. The story is also very interesting. The characters in it seem to have come alive. There are some plots in the canopy plot that are difficult to guess if you don't write the follow-up. It's great. Looking forward to your second work.

A rare book worthy of five stars. Although it is a formulaic book-traveling system, the suspense of a heroine being plotted in her past life and being reborn in this life has been laid from the beginning, but it does not have the viciousness of ordinary rebirth revenge novels. There are various foreshadowings throughout the book, which can be corresponded one by one later, and the logic is self-consistent. The writing is humorous and interesting, and what's more rare is that it is full of warmth and human touch. Unlike most cultivation novels, everyone sweeps away the snow on their own doorstep and doesn't care about the frost on other people's tiles. It even takes pride in the jungle law of the jungle.

It's very novel. For someone who has watched it for nearly 2,500 hours, it's really very novel. It is one of my favorite novels that is humorous, lively and interesting. At first, I read someone's comment about lightning protection, which initially gave me a bad impression. Later, I realized that people should follow their hearts. It's best to just look at your own feelings and don't read other people's comments, and I don't think this is a cool article. If you are a superficial person and you want to read a bunch of inexplicable Internet memes that are mindless and cool, then you are welcome. If the villain is really so easy to defeat, then what's the point? I don't know why, but the more pressure some people have in reality, the more they think about being invincible online and go crazy. You can look for articles like this instead of asking other people's articles to become what you like.

Totally five-star praise! ! ! It's the kind of story-driven novel that attracts people to read in one sitting. No cp micro group portrait sect cultivating immortality essay There are very few refreshed map copies but the whole story is exciting The whole text is indeed connected by writing a novel. The heroine is smart, strong, and flexible The plot is smooth and non-abusive, the logic is rigorous, and the pitfalls are basically filled in. The background of the plot of this book is that the way of heaven is supreme, that is, the authoritative power in the world of immortality is the way of heaven, and there is no connection between the system and the way of heaven and they do not interfere with each other. The setting is very cool. The story setting is very good. After being bound by a trap, I discovered that the 09 system was bad. Both sides suffered losses. After being reborn, I took back everything that belongs to me. The tone of the whole plot is light-hearted, and people who watch it are very happy and refreshing. Recommended for everyone to watch!

It's so beautiful, and the writing is so novel. I like this kind of book. It's a new book with a different twist and a different routine. I just like reading it. I'm actually tired of reading books with the same routine, but I love reading this one [laughing]

⒈ Overall impression: It's not bad. It's very refreshing to watch. It's a bit frustrating at first, but later on it's okay. You can watch it without worrying about it. After all, I've started to deposit it. ⒉ Slight shortcomings: The highlight is probably that the heroine upgrades too fast. This is the fastest upgrade I have ever seen, except for the one who ascends through the book. The reason will be explained later. ⒊ Highlight character: Probably Yu Shisheng. The character is well-drawn. Although it is greasy at first, the relationship between him and his master and apprentice is quite admirable. He will avenge his master until his death.

Go, go, go, it's really beautiful In the early stage, the heroine just developed secretly, performed various saucy operations, and had a lot of laughs. Later, when she became strong, she began to show her provocation openly. Even after becoming an emperor, she still used saucy operations. It's very nice. She never forgets her original intention. ꈍ◡ꈍ Although the ending of the story in the sky is sloppy, it is finished at least. No way, if it involves some bloody things, the heroine and her brother will be angry again 😂 It's like the author wrote two books at once, which is very annoying This book has a strong sense of immersion. It is easy for people to follow the thoughts in the book while reading it. If the clues were not complete later, I would not be able to figure out the murderer for a long time (｡•́•̀｡) The pitfalls inside have been filled in, and the logic is smooth. Overall, it looks good, go go go go go go go. The above is just my personal opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it, I mean you are right [Sending my heart]