My Little Pony: I Am a Counselor

It looks good, but I feel that the protagonist is just like the minions. Whichever villain he joins, that villain will definitely fail, even though he will fail in the first place [you taste it carefully] [smirk] [you taste it carefully]

It's pretty good, especially about the protagonist, I think it can be called "The Demon Lord's My Little Pony Comes Home"

This novel is so novel, it is exactly like the novel, and the content is very relevant to the novel. I can't imagine it at all! The novelist is really just a novelist! (No malice, just a new twist) [laughing evilly] This pony fanfic is too ponyy and fanfic! !

Now that we all have daughters, will there be a heroine in the future? [Thinking] The setting of the protagonist is a bit confusing. At first, I thought it was a time traveler, but I didn't feel like it after reading the middle part. I was sure after watching the back part. There is also a slight problem with the outline. Why do the protagonists in time travel novels written in the 1990s and above always want to go home? Of course it's just my own feeling, after all, there are too many of the same type. After all, it has the theme of going home and adheres to the background of thousands of years. It will be a little difficult to change later: the heroine can be arranged and the daughter can express herself more. What do you say about asking the male protagonist to stay? In anime terms, it means bonding, which is also emotion. If you insist on not winning once in a thousand years, you can set up some difficulties later. When the protagonist is most helpless and confused, using the daughter or heroine can make the hero know how to cherish the present and rewrite the outline. The male protagonist can stick to the goal of going home with his daughter and the female protagonist, or he can cherish the present moment, and then go to other universes later. After all, even if he gains the power to travel across the universe, there are so many universes that he does not know the coordinates and it is impossible to return to the original universe at once. After all, Jia Xu, a poisoner, also has his own lover and family. There is a bug in it, which is that Discord can cut through dimensional walls and go directly to other universes. This can be weakened a little. The above is a slightly newer subject matter that I have read so many books on. But it's just a general direction and personal suggestions, and the author's process is a bit fast. I finished the whole season in a dozen chapters. OK, brothers, just take a look. New authors can also refer to it. After all, I am not an author. I can only give you some suggestions, or if you have your own ideas, you can write according to your own ideas.

Holy shit, I just realized that "My Little Pony is a Little Dark" turns out to be by the same author. I said the writing style looks so similar (I hope the author's writing style can be improved a bit. I struggled to read both books [face covering], but they are both excellent) (But can you add some black and lesbian elements to this book?)

To be honest, I really enjoyed reading this book. I didn't skip a chapter from the first to the last chapter. What made me happy was when I learned that it didn't have a heroine (in fact, even if there was a heroine, I would continue reading it as if there was no heroine). Every time I saw the failure of the protagonist and the reasons for the failure, I felt funny and sad. I also like Moonlight, but Moonlight basically has no role at the end. Furthermore, when I saw that Lao Hai did all this just to go home, Not to mention how sad it was, then I saw the ending. Moonlight ended up being left in Equestria (or the United States?). Beihai ended up looking like she was going home, but I don't know whether she went home or not, but I knew that Moonlight would never see her beloved father again. I have read the author's other works before, such as "My Little Mary is a Little Dark," but this is the best of the author's works in my opinion (and I think it is the best My Little Pony-themed work I have ever seen). Ratings do not mean everything. What is important is that you think it is good. I hope the author will continue to create. I really hope that I can see your works on the recommendation page many years later. I will continue to read your other works. Come on, author! [Blowing kiss]

You don't want to have no female protagonist, you can have a single female protagonist, but it's better to have more female protagonists.

Originally I just wanted to pick some chapters to read this book. After all, I finally found the My Little Pony book, but I picked a few chapters and became fascinated by it. It was really comfortable to read. The goal of the protagonist has never changed, and the story is very exciting. To be honest, when I was watching it, I sometimes thought that the protagonist should just stay in the world of My Little Pony. Anyway, I am familiar with the protagonist, and the world of My Little Pony is still a utopian ideal world. But when I saw that the protagonist was actually a prophet who lived before Equestria was created, I felt that the protagonist's will was very strong. Some people are obsessed with immortality and some people hate immortality. I am not qualified to help him make a decision, let alone evaluate it. Maybe as the protagonist said, if there is no system, he may stay in the My Little Pony world, but when the protagonist knows that he can go home, there is no second choice. Home is such an unattainable dream for those who are far away from home.

Yes, despite repeated failures due to familiarity and reasonable reasons, I can still stand up and say, "It's a cool autumn!" Why hasn't this score gone up yet?

The plot is not draggy, the pace is quite good, the plot style is like the cartoons of the past, and it is fun to watch. The only problem is that the sentences are not fluent and it is a bit difficult to read. The plot is really interesting, at least it's very thoughtful, much better than some books

Everyone is saying that this novel is very funny and interesting. They say that the protagonist is like the Ghost Demon King. In fact, there is really no difference. The main theme of this novel to me is like a little strong man who cannot be defeated, and there is still a bit of tragedy in it, because the protagonist's current development model will never succeed. He clearly sees his own failure, but he will never give up.

The plot of the story is very good, but the language expression is slightly lacking. There are some typos and omissions and the word order is not clear. But as a novice, the author is very good at writing like this. Come on, author, I look forward to the day when you become a golden author! 🌹🌹🌹

Well written "But... It's a bit bad that the human world just disappears. Although I don't know how to continue writing, it just feels bad." "Although the three villains started fighting among themselves in the middle of the ending, at least they shouldn't fight among themselves because of the participation of the protagonist... This is not good and makes it uncomfortable to watch." There is also the protagonist who is directly knocked out. When the three villains stand together, the protagonist can directly use the Friendship Cannon in Wufengjian, and then use the magic bell to absorb power... It is really uncomfortable to watch the protagonist being knocked out directly. " "Another thing is that after the protagonist and Yun Yu had a fight, they were basically chopped into pieces. It felt like they were cut off forcefully. " "Also... The last three villains were sealed and turned into stone, and the protagonist left directly... And when he came back, he didn't want to see them... But bumped into the protagonist group..." "There should be some pitfalls, but I didn't think of them so I didn't mention them. " "One more thing, this book is really well written.

It's better to let Beihai return to the human world, that is, let him return to the human world and have a happy ending. I think that is the best ending. Specifically, you have to figure out whether you want to cooperate with the princesses or play with magic or a few gems. Anyway, let me make a suggestion.

Okay, to be honest, I haven't watched this anime, or the author's novel suits my taste so much that I actually became interested in this direction! However, compared to returning to the human world, I still prefer the story of the protagonist continuing in the pony world. Although it is very sad, I know that it is inevitable that this story will return to the human world later. But compared to the rights of the human world, I still prefer the purity of the pony world, so my progress has been stuck at chapter 211. Please forgive me for not persisting! Ah, actually I don't think this is abuse of the protagonist, because although the protagonist has always failed (limited to the pony world I have watched), most of the things he does have failed, but they are not meaningless, and I also like the author's way of writing!

Author, this novel is very interesting. Remember to strengthen the protagonist.

Judging from the introduction, the protagonist should stab Tirek in the back and then collect Starlight, with Afterglow as his wife? ?

A very good-looking Pony fanfic, with a completely different angle from the regular Pony novels. The early and middle stages are very exciting. But the later stage was too hasty, many foreshadowings were not recycled, and the ending was too dull (personal feeling). I personally feel that it would be better if a chapter could be added to describe everyone's reactions or feelings after Beihai left. All in all, this is an excellent little pony fanfic that stayed with me for more than a week. I really thought about it a lot the night I finished reading it.

It's pretty good, but I came to see the various small struggles between m6 and the protagonist and the friendship between m6. In Chapter 249, there is no need to talk nonsense with them. The protagonist has lived for so many years and must have the ability to stop them from talking so much nonsense. As long as the person who dies is not a pony and does not invade the pony home, the Universe Princess and the others will not be too lenient at all.

Well, not bad, not bad. I have read 4 of the author's books alone, and they are all quite good [laughing evilly] [like] OK, it's over. \( ͯω ͯ)/｡:.ﾟヽ(*´∀`)ﾉﾟ.:｡

This book is really beautiful! How easy it is to see depends on the specific situation. But I have to say that this book exceeded my imagination, it was really unimaginable. All in all, it's worth reading, because this book is really good! [Praise]

Hmm~ An ideal villain story, I like it extremely eloquent~

The track is novel and good. This kind of main line is interspersed with daily life so that you won't feel bored. The author should not be lazy and update it hard.

It's great. It's the third Little Mary fanfic I've read. It's great. The relationship between the characters is relatively pure and simple. It doesn't feel like the first and second books I read. It has a private princess setting and it doesn't feel too complicated.

It's the first time I've seen such a little Ma Wen, sir, you're such a talented person.

After The Unlucky Detective, I think one of the best Little Margins ever written. I really want to see the day when M6 knows the identity of the protagonist, it's exciting just thinking about it [laughing]

It's nice to watch, but I just want to ask, in the last three chapters of your extra chapter, which other work of yours is mentioned? Why is the protagonist of that work an Alicorn? How did the protagonist of that work end up in this book? So what's the name of that work?

This book, don't read it if you are too empathetic, don't read it if you are thin-faced

You can continue to write extras, and I'm even more curious, if the Princess of Friendship knows more about it, what will it feel like when the person you admire the most has a daughter with you? Becoming a mother is painless, and which novel does the last one belong to?

I want to see human Twilight Sparkle and the protagonist complement each other