The World Is Frozen, and Goddesses Line Up to Beg for Shelter

Secretly give yourself a compliment. The climax of the community chapter this weekend has also ended, and it has been released on time. I have also read the questions raised by readers in the middle one by one. I have recognized some problems and have gradually adjusted them and accelerated the pace. I will take the time to revise the previous chapters. Apart from some jokes in the middle, I think some of the characters are also remarkable in their writing. It was a pity that the little black room was closed for 7 days and all the previous chapters were revised, and it couldn't retain readers. I also realized that I couldn't go too far in that aspect. Part-time writing is too difficult. I owe Tomato 6,000 words every morning when I wake up. I hope you will urge me to update more, post more, leave messages in the comment area, and stay a little longer. Thank you for your support. Orz!

Although the early stage is a bit clumsy, the subsequent plot connection is quite exciting. I have watched it several times, and the holes dug in the front can be filled in later, and the characters are all closed loops. Also, can you update it faster? 6,000 Words a day is simply not enough. In addition, I have two questions, when will Wu Hailong be killed? Kill more bloodily! And there is the white general Kong Yilei, can he draw it? Why do I feel like it's a trap? Don't give me another knife when the time comes! 😠

Personally, I feel that after chapter 20, the writing style has improved a lot. Moreover, there are small climaxes one after another. The previous ones are all in the same routine. It should be said that the early stages of the apocalyptic novel are all in the same routine. Look further back, it's pretty good. 🤭

Everything else is fine, but the author's description of the protagonist himself is a bit sparse, and a lot of the space is devoted to various other supporting characters. The space should be shifted to the protagonist himself.

I have read more than 300 chapters, and the rating is too low. I feel that this book is better than 7 or 80% of similar books. It is more beautiful than some 9-rated books. The female characters included in it all have carefully described details and have their own personalities. This point beats out a lot of apocalyptic novels. I hope I can finish it well. Tomato review is still too strict.

It was obviously cut out at the beginning. Such a good and essential part was cut out, but I didn't see the author restraining himself later.

Okay, just don't mess it up

Can anyone summarize how many women there were in the end?

Who wouldn't want to click on this title to take a look?

The writing at the end was a bit confusing, and the foreshadowing was on point. Kong Yilei could obviously tell that the author had forced him to write to death. In fact, no one is right in the apocalypse. It's all for themselves. As one saying goes, if you don't do it for yourself, heaven and earth will destroy you. Just do it!