Dragon Clan: Starting from the Awakening of Emperor Yan Ling

The part where the protagonist and Eri elope is very well written. I have seen an author with the best descriptions in fan fiction. The style is very Jiangnan and the content is very rich. I don't know what the follow-up will be, but I am willing to give you five stars for these few pictures.

This book is really good to read. The characters are all flesh and blood. They can cry, laugh, or feel sad. Especially when it describes Sun Wukong fighting hundreds of rounds for Lu Bu and Diao Chan. But Xue Baochai is really too strong. If it weren't for Nuoshou with an outer ring and a Noxian guillotine, this wave of M46 will kill him if he sweeps his head. Apart from that, I compare I particularly appreciate what Zhuge Liang said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguo Mountain: "Young man, don't show off your pride in front of your brother Liang." It shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkeys knocking him to death with three sticks. All in all, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, many foreshadowing of the fighting scenes that make you feel like you are actually there, and the character description is very good!

It's a decent fanfic, and the protagonist's character is also very likable. The only thing I'm a little dissatisfied with is that Chu Zihang's knife shouldn't be given to the protagonist so easily. Well, after all, the knife is related to his father. Even if it is borrowed, there should be some small stories interspersed in the middle clips.

The introduction is messy, but the writing style is very good and the quality is maintained. This is also the only good Dragon Clan fanfic I have read on Tomato. Nothing to say. .

Objective evaluation: It is highly repetitive with the book "Slaying the Dragon Without Money" at point q, and the overall plot advances too fast. Personal evaluation: Although it is repetitive, it handles personal emotions and social relationships better than that book. The male protagonist of this book is not as shocking as the sister in that book, nor is it as shocking as the senior sister in that book. The author was very wise in not writing too many scenes about the senior sister in the early stage.

Five stars, five stars. I can only say that the characters are very well-written, Angers's few words of invitation are also very touching, and those wild metaphors are very Jiangnan characteristics. The most important thing is that the protagonist is cold and so handsome, [adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration] Oh, it's a pity that it's not the harem, it's so uncomfortable [I'm about to cry]

It looks good, not much of it is about scoring points, but can anyone tell me what pressure points mean. In addition, the writing style is really good. Although it is a systematic article, the writing style really feels like watching Long San. Overall it is good, the writing style is very delicate, and the foreshadowing is also perfect. I hope the quality can be maintained in the future. Finally, come on, the author!

Although I haven't watched Dragons, I feel that the author's writing is really good, but there is a female protagonist (personal preference, single male protagonist). But it doesn't matter. I will recommend it to my friends and netizens who like Dragon Clan. I hope you can get better and better at your books. More people came to see it. Goodbye, I will recommend it to my friends. [Laughing][Learned]

The writing is very tasteful, and the plot is not too confusing. I can see that I really want to write the taste of Jiangnan, and it is indeed good, but sometimes some of the metaphors are a bit too imitative. The metaphors of Jiangnan's writing are often very deep, so it will be rich in philosophy. Come on, this Dragon Clan fanfic is the best I have ever seen.

The writing style of this Dragon Clan fan is excellent, like a spiritual spring that nourishes the heart. At the moment of Yan Ling's awakening, "The deep blue eyes are full of ancient power, and the incantation is about to shake the world. The majestic waves are rushing into the sky, and the king of heaven and earth is coming." The sharpness of the writing shows its mystery and vastness, making us feel like we are in it. The outline of the characters is penetrating. The protagonist is brave and courageous, "his body is like a pine tree that is proud of the wind and rain, and his eyes are like stars fighting in the sky." His shape is vivid on the paper. Various characters also show their talents, and their souls are fresh and within reach. The plot is laid out like a symphony, with a degree of relaxation. In the place of fierce battle, "the swords clash and the lotus blooms with blood, and the dragon roars across the abyss of the universe." It is exciting; in leisure time, "the laughter in the warm sun yard is endless, and the secret words whisper the friendship." It is like a spring that refreshes the heart. Expressive feelings, delicate and graceful. When love begins, "My eyes are filled with shyness, and my heart is full of love." Friendships are deep, "Join hands on a dangerous journey, and warmth remains, and we work together in the same boat with determination." They are all poetic and touching. Great support, author. I like this book very much. You have outlined a new chapter of the Dragon Clan with your pen, and your words shine like stars. The scenery depicted reaches straight into the sky, and the characters created have endless charm. May you continue to sail on the road of creation, let the fragrance of ink flow forever, and continue to write more magnificent legends.

It is the best fanfic after Tyrant Lu Mingfei and Return to the Past, even surpassing Tyrant Lu Mingfei. Therefore, the author would like to send more [send my heart][send my heart][send my heart]

The writing is pretty good, but there are a lot of personal details. All I can say is that the author's personal design is truly unique! Judging from the content of the novel, it describes a fantasy world about dragons and humans, full of thrilling adventures and deep emotions. Jiang Nan's brushstrokes are delicate and the characters are vivid, especially the growth process of the protagonist Lu Mingfei, which makes people empathize with him. Moreover, Jiangnan's private settings are very rich, from the setting of the dragon clan to the setting of the human world, they are full of imagination and creativity. It not only retains the style of the original work, but also allows Chinese readers to easily understand it. People can tell at a glance that this is a novel about the dragon clan. It has rich private settings, attractive storylines, vivid characters, and excellent design. Pressure points. Pressure points⌓‿⌓

It's a pretty good Dragon Clan fanfic. It maintains the original style while adding a lot of its own designs. The original characters all retain their original designs: Lu Mingfei is still as aggrieved, but willing to stand up for the people around him; Chu Zihang is still cold on the outside and hot on the inside. Although he did not blow up the special axle of the wedding car, blowing up the enemy's axle for his brother is consistent with the original work; Caesar is still a proud and noble son who regards money as dirt, he is also a good man, and a good brother who can help his friends; Eli Yi is still so cute, and the little monster now has the protection of the big monster. Finally, I hope the author can continue to write more and give it four stars to prevent you from being bloated. Forgot to change the review

It's really good to read. It's the first time I read a novel so seriously. Please keep reading [Blowing Kisses][Flowing Kisses][Flowing Kisses] Score points, otherwise they will say you will be banned

It has the flavor of Jiangnan, the writing is good, and I feel it is more interesting than other fics.

It's really good, Eri Uesugi. There's nothing I can do [sending my heart]

It is very similar to the Dragon Clan fanfic from Qidian. The writing style is good, and it has the literary youth feeling of Dragon Clan. The previous plot is very similar to that one. I hope the author can write his own stuff. It is a good fanfic. Reduce points. . .

I watched it all in one go and I can only say that it was very enjoyable to watch. The depiction of the characters is also very realistic. After more than 100 chapters, it got worse and worse. It was uncomfortable, even though it was such a good book.

It's really good to read. Although I've only read more than a hundred chapters, I really like the writing style. And the key point is that when I read the original work, I loved painting Li Yi so much. Jiang Nan really cut me to pieces. I cried and cheered for the little devil during that part of the story. It's true. I'm so happy to see Jiang Yi raising Eri Yi so well~ Of course, I'm also looking forward to the subsequent collision between Jiang Yi and the little devil, haha, I'll keep watching~

Personally, I feel that this is the best free fanfic I have read so far. Come on, brother, and write well. We will keep your score at more than 7 points. When you finish it, we will give you a score of more than 9 points.

The writing is smooth and the pictures are vivid. I like it very much and will repurchase it again [Adoration]

I have read a lot of books. Basically, I only need one chapter, or even one page, to know how this book is. It's not about the plot, but the writing technique, or the writing style. It makes me want to read it. This book, I don't know if the word writing is accurate or not, but it is indeed very well written. It is a rare writing style that suits my "taste". It has nothing to do with the content. It simply makes me want to read it and see how the author writes and what he writes. I think maybe I can learn something. I gave it four stars because I only watched it for a short time and am not sure whether the content is engaging and whether it is a good work. Maybe I watched it for two days and came back to comment, maybe I watched it for two days and then deleted it, or maybe I finished reading but forgot to comment, but it doesn't matter, he only used a few hundred words to get me to comment.

It's quite beautiful, it symbolizes my personal appetite. I hope that the heroine in Eri will be the best. Come on, the author.

Okay, it's not as exaggerated as I said. I personally like the description of Eri Yi better. I have made up for a lot of regrets. But in terms of plot, a lot of things have been added. I can actually accept it. As for the protagonist, in terms of identity, he is not much different from Lu Mingfei. The plot and other aspects are not too different from the original. It depends on personal preference.

For me. These 66 chapters are enough to become a god. Four stars for the Dragon Clan fanfic is full marks. Many people may think it has some flaws. But I just know. This is the ending I wanted for Eri. That's enough. The girl who has eyes for you. It should be just like in this novel.

It's a vivid and rare book. I haven't read The Dragon, but I've only heard about it. The writing style of this novel is really good. There is no simple language. I can see the author's ingenuity. I believe he must have something he loves and insists on. Come on [laughs]

Not bad, not bad. The previous articles were very detailed and not like some outrageous ones, and the protagonist's abilities are worthy of S-level. But the author of The Taste of Jiangnan is not very good, but I'm not sure yet. I just read Chapter 30. I will make some comments later.

This dragon novel is the only one I can read for several hours in a row. Although I skipped a dozen frames in the middle, it doesn't stop me from finding it interesting. Also, everyone has been too harsh on the score. 6.3 Is really a bit ridiculously low. If I hadn't been accustomed to reading reviews at that time, I might not have read this book.

It's a particularly awesome book. The writing is awesome. People who haven't read Dragons can understand it. There are no flaws in the whole book. It's just that the main character is a little depressed because of his sister's constant suppression. But it's very smooth to read. I couldn't stop reading this novel. It's very attractive. The regrets are all filled in. The ending is very sweet and makes people reluctant to let go. Every character has flesh and blood, and it's as if real characters are emerging in front of you. All in all, the author's writing is awesome! But I am uneducated, so I can only praise you with one awesome sentence. There has never been a book that made me linger so much. From the beginning with Tomato, I feel that this is the most awesome fan book I have ever written. I really like [The Bird Eater]. The only regret is that Lu Mingze died. Lu Mingze did not see the moment when Concubine Ming proposed [crying]

It's so beautiful, so good, it's a dragon, I can't save it. I haven't read Dragons in a long time, and I've never read such a good book. It's very good. The writing is good and everything is good. The details are nice, nice. The story is not bad either. All good.