Tsunayoshi Returns After Ten Years, and Namimori City Goes Up in Flames

What was the reason for the betrayal? What it is, to be honest, this plot is very uncomfortable for loyal fans of tutors. To this day, I still feel that there is no end to the betrayal. New flame? Or is it being manipulated?

Although the number of words is small, the ideas are good Let's talk about the shortcomings first. The effect of Time Fire in the early stage is unknown, so it's a bit annoying for the clone guardian to always be unable to replenish the sword's health and escape. Ten years later, Sawada Tsunayoshi's character is not calm enough. In my impression, Sawada Tsunayoshi should be the kind of character who has no side effects. In this book, the intelligence aspect is still a bit lacking. The advantage is that the imagination is really big, and the ideas are also good. The guardians are strengthened just right, the fighting is written smoothly, and the story is very interesting, except that the system is a bit evil.

This plot is a bit interesting. The tutoring fics I have seen before are either retelling the original plot with the participation of the original plot, or just engaging in romance or homosexuality. This book feels like reading a new chapter, wow [cool]

It's super good-looking. I've read so many tutoring books, but this one is the most popular with me. Even after ten years, Gang still feels a little immature and gets startled. The others are really perfect. Come on, author.

After searching for a long time, I finally found an article about tutoring! I also wrote a story about betrayal a long time ago. Today I clicked on this book and found that it is also a story about betrayal. It feels very friendly [blowing kiss] The storyline is very rhythmic, the writing is not flashy, and it is very immersive. The only pity is that the tutoring text is too cold. Come on, author!

The best tutoring fanfic I have ever seen. [Praise]

Can the author not be so aggrieved? I always feel that the system was passed down 20 years later or some other time period, but overall it is good-looking, and I remember to update it a lot. I feel that it is not good enough, and this system should have some functions. I feel that there are pitfalls, but don't forget to fill them in.

Jujuju is good-looking. There are really very few good-looking tutors. Although it is very hard, I hope the author can write a few chapters or a few chapters. Thank you🙏

Everything else is pretty good, but this emotional scene...[Petrochemical]

Support the author, the writing is really good. I rarely see the works of tutors. You must keep writing.