(Newbie, new book, please bear with me! )
[Partial entertainment] [No nonsense] [Basically invincible] [Not a slow-burning type with a single female protagonist] [Genshin Impact + Honkai Impact III + Honkai Impact: Star Dome Railway + other two-dimensional worlds such as battles] [Starting from Genshin Impact, staying in Star Iron, Honkai Impact III is the first part of a long story] [Conceptual skills] [Do whatever you want, happiness is the most important]
[Read the label first, don't buy if you don't like it]
After a half-year plan, he avenged his ancestors in Jinling a hundred years ago.
However, when Wu Yi opened his eyes again, he found that he had fallen onto an uninhabited island, and he was given a golden finger for a new concept skill every month.
Obtain the "Shuttle" skill in the first month.
"Add some time travel, add some space travel, add some world travel, add some information travel, and the world chat group is complete!"
(Soul Beast) Haichuan: "Ting Ting, give Xiao Wu back to me!"
Gain the skill "Pathogen" in the second month.
(Black Bullet) Qian Shou Xia Shi: "God has given me classics that understand the principles of all things, omniscience and omnipotence, and the king of legal principles!"
Yukinoshita Yukino: "?... Tiritiri!"
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The third month... I haven't thought about it yet!
In short, the protagonist Fifth Art has begun an abstract journey!
(The first forty chapters are a bit messy because they are a bit unskilled and the pace is too fast. The pace is already slowing down later on, sorry for that)
Reader comments
Let me tell you a little bit about my opinion. Don't say that I'm just finding fault. [Learned]
I saw you said in the comment area that the revision was slowing down later on. Please try your best to polish the previous chapters. Don't treat each chapter one world at a time. Try to revise it as much as possible while there are not many chapters now. Otherwise, a lot of readers would probably be lost because the pace is always too fast.
There are also chat groups that you can invite randomly (you are the author, and inviting people randomly is just for fun). You should have read novels about chat groups, and you can actually learn from them.
In the early stage, I relied too much on spells, and the mask and magic energy were completely useless. Doesn't this mean that the mask and magic energy were not used?
Your own abilities are not developed deeply. Relying too much on spells is a small disadvantage. It is impossible to develop without time, because you can travel to the past time to practice, and then return to reality after practicing (or you have considered this problem, but forgot to patch it)
Finally, the fan group account sent me
It feels like it will be over sooner or later
The protagonist's current personality is a bit anthropomorphic. I don't know when I can improve and grow up my personality. Come on.
I want to see more female protagonists, but there is no female protagonist at all. This emotional line and the character of the protagonist really make me very interested.
He keeps his word and persecutes Lao Yang every day
Can be very beautiful
The author added the Death God's Zanpakutō and the Hokage's Kaleidoscope Rinnegan Byakugan and the 6 eyes of the curse.
Let me tell you a little bit about my opinion. Don't say that I'm just finding fault. [Learned] I saw you said in the comment area that the revision was slowing down later on. Please try your best to polish the previous chapters. Don't treat each chapter one world at a time. Try to revise it as much as possible while there are not many chapters now. Otherwise, a lot of readers would probably be lost because the pace is always too fast. There are also chat groups that you can invite randomly (you are the author, and inviting people randomly is just for fun). You should have read novels about chat groups, and you can actually learn from them. In the early stage, I relied too much on spells, and the mask and magic energy were completely useless. Doesn't this mean that the mask and magic energy were not used? Your own abilities are not developed deeply. Relying too much on spells is a small disadvantage. It is impossible to develop without time, because you can travel to the past time to practice, and then return to reality after practicing (or you have considered this problem, but forgot to patch it) Finally, the fan group account sent me
It feels like it will be over sooner or later
The protagonist's current personality is a bit anthropomorphic. I don't know when I can improve and grow up my personality. Come on.
I want to see more female protagonists, but there is no female protagonist at all. This emotional line and the character of the protagonist really make me very interested.
He keeps his word and persecutes Lao Yang every day
Can be very beautiful
The author added the Death God's Zanpakutō and the Hokage's Kaleidoscope Rinnegan Byakugan and the 6 eyes of the curse.