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Mortals Cultivating Immortality Is the Same as Human Beings
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It's a Double Male Protagonist (Double Strong!!!)
Please write, please write, please write, please have two male protagonists with super good writing! ! ! ! ! ! I don't want romance stories, and I don't want burp literature. I've been looking for it for a long time, but I haven't found it. 🍅 Isn't it good at writing? ? ?
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In fact, when I saw the ending, I was still a little unbelievable. It was only this much? ? I think this book has a bland style, without much ups and downs in the plot. Then there's the relationship between characters. The ending is OE, and it is not clearly stated whether A-Qing will be with A-Yan, but what A-Yan said to A-Qing at the end also leaves a lot of room for the reader's imagination. To be honest, this is the first time I have read a novel with such an open ending. I personally think that A Qing doesn't actually have much feelings for A Yan (?), But he doesn't show resistance to A Yan's closeness (the kind of closeness he likes), but the article does not clearly state A Qing's feelings for A Yan, so I think A Qing doesn't like A Yan (probably) Then there's the part where A-Yan's feelings for A-Qing are a little far-fetched (?). I think A-Yan's feelings for A-Qing were confirmed because A-Qing and A-Yan pulled out the mandarin duck swords. To be honest, I really didn't understand it when I saw it, and it always felt weird. But I think maybe it's because the author's writing style is not very mature and his words don't convey his meaning, so that's why it's like this Generally speaking, the author is still very good. It takes a lot of energy and time to insist on writing the next novel, and even a lot of courage and imagination. Moreover, the author's writing style still has a lot of room for improvement. I believe that if the author insists on writing, he will definitely write better works.
Awa looks good, I want to know who the protagonist's CP is ੭ ᐕ)
I really like this kind of leisurely life of cultivating immortals. The development of the plot is also quite novel.
It's very interesting, but can you write a little extra? Are they together or not?
It's very comfortable to watch
If you also like ordinary stories with slight twists and turns in daily fights, then come and read this book [Cool] After all, ordinary is the truth, and it is really comfortable and enjoyable to read. The writing style may be a little immature, but it is easy to understand and the plot and characters are clearly introduced. The ending is left blank to leave readers with unlimited reverie, but I still hope the author can write an extra chapter. Or just a rough outline will do, I can figure it out myself [almost crying]
The writing is very good, please make it more casual and warm. Does the protagonist have CP?
A very good novel about cultivating immortality [a gift to my heart][a gift to my heart]
It's really good to read, I'll write another hundred chapters if I'm still young [crying][crying][crying]
Plain and nice. But there are still many places that have not been completed.
It's okay, but the ending is open. I don't know who Sun Qing will be with in the future. I stand by Chen Fu.
The content is quite interesting, but the ending is a little rushed. I haven't seen enough [I almost cried]
Well written and the storyline is great!
Very interesting, very good novel
A great humorous novel about cultivating immortals