Zhanshen, Hongying's Daughter and I Are a Bit Disobedient.

I read the novel a long time ago, and it was not serialized yet, so I gave up on it without realizing it. I recently started working part-time at a snack shop and picked it up again when I had nothing to do. I finished it in less than a week. I feel comfortable not having to wait for updates. As a new online writer who has just debuted not long ago, I think I can still look forward to a second work of this level. It's just that this book does have a bit of a strong dragon flavor... But it's far from the two, which is what I'm most afraid of. It can be seen that the writing style and fluency of the writing are still a bit immature. It does not have the same skills as the veteran online writers. These need to be accumulated through time and experience. Especially in the description of the subtle facial expressions of the characters, it is indeed a bit difficult to describe in one sentence. The word "stick out tongue" appears very frequently and often seems inappropriate and too stiff. The design and writing style of the emotional scenes also need to be greatly improved. It's quite passable when it comes to filling in holes, at least there aren't many major flaws, but there are still some small holes. In short, I personally think that this work is of a balanced kind. I don't say which part of the book is particularly polarizing in the front, middle, and back, but it is still acceptable. It's a novel that's above the passing mark. Some comments on the Internet say that it's a pure novice novel and a pure novel, but it's not that bad...

The plot is relatively clear. I personally feel that the asylum of the gods is like Lin Qiye's Mental Hospital of the Gods. The emotional lines between Chen Mulin and Hongying are better written. So far, the performance of the book is good. There are not too many pitfalls in the early stage. I hope the author can fill them in later. Overall, there are no poisonous points. It is good to read it in your spare time. ʕ⁀ᴥ⁀ʔ

This novel is very beautiful

Very enjoyable to watch. It's worth 5 stars, but there are some things that are wrong in the back. The previous sentence was still talking about this, and the next sentence will talk about other things. So give 4 stars

Invincible text, I feel like 60 chapters is the ceiling for humanity

You have to cry and you cry, you have to have flesh and blood, you have to laugh and have fun, you have to feel refreshed and you have to have romance and romance. The updates are too slow. They only update at 1 a. M. And they only update twice a day. However, it is still very good. There is also Chen Mulin, the younger brother of Chen Muye, who is probably still in the sea ban when others are here.

It's a pure and refreshing article, it's not bad to read without thinking too much.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Not bad, but I feel like I have to send it, which is a pity

Very good, you can watch it

Are you, the author, updating every day like this? [Crying][Crying][Crying]

It's nice to look at, but it's too short. Who can see this little bit?

The progress is fast enough. I haven't reunited with Hongying yet. I stopped updating at the most critical moment and rushed to the street.

Very pretty Swords are not allowed on the throne Under the throne, gods and demons are forbidden

Who can tell me what happened when I was 15 years old?

Not bad, add a bookshelf

To be honest, it's okay

Very good, very beautiful

A little too much pressure,

Very ok.

The plot is okay, it's pretty good to watch

How can there be any four seasons? When I meet you, the four seasons are like spring?

Not bad, okay, just a little missing.

Author, your writing is really awesome.

It's a very good book. The author needs to finish it soon.

I suggest you read this book. It's very nice.

It's pretty good. Of all the time-traveling Gods I've seen, you're the better one.

The novel is enjoyable, but the update is a bit slow. I hope it will be updated three or four times a day.

Very beautiful, very satisfying, worth a look for everyone

This book is very enjoyable and enjoyable to write, but the only drawback is that it updates too slowly, with only one chapter updated a day.