Comprehensive Wear*****

Haixi's writing is super good, principled, capable and caring for her family. But from time to time there is behavior of seizing one's body, which I don't understand. After Hexi and the Duke got engaged, it was a dual-power setting and they loved each other. Then stop writing about Hexi restraining her behavior because of the Duke's jealousy. Voluntarily avoiding suspicion (such as with Edward) and avoiding suspicion because the Duke was jealous (such as "William doesn't like me dancing with other men" at the ball) are two different things! Shouldn't two people be equal? Haixi has always had a sense of proportion and knows what to do. As long as the Duke has another lover, Haixi will not do it. The point is that the Duke is not in Haixi! Don't control Haixi When Haixi did something dangerous but didn't need the Duke to wipe his ass! What he said after meeting the Duke was that I was wrong? Sorry? I don't understand. Can you explain clearly why you need to apologize? What's wrong? Haixi is obviously capable and sober. Whenever Haixi apologizes for these things, I feel guilty. Haixi is a time traveler. I am really worried and just leave. Why is it so "humble"? The portrayal of Haixi is really good and I really like it. I hope the author can see that Haixi doesn't need to show weakness and be jealous in order to fall in love with the Duke. There is no need to write this, as long as there is a tacit understanding between the two strong characters. I will still look forward to the following stories, please come on, author!

The writing is particularly good. It is based on the original book [laugh][laugh] The author can write as much as he can ~ Our protagonist Haixi is really cuteớ ₃ờ The emotional line is very rich Edward Arrow... The only drawback is that the update is too slow. The author is much faster and more

The writing is really beautiful, why so few people read it [crying] The Pride and Prejudice written in this book is really much better than many fanfics I have read. The plot is also very delicate. There are very few fanfics with a hint of political intrigue in female videos [crying] The emotional line is also very fragrant [shy]

The first dozen or so chapters were difficult to write, but then it got better. The first world is the coordinate origin of the heroine's travel mission. After the subsequent world missions are completed, she will return to the first world. The heroine has no system or store, which makes her a bit miserable. Except for the world of Origin (Twilight Zone), during the mission, she basically has to rely on her own efforts and work hard to start a business. Please give me a chance. If you feel that the previous chapters are not interesting, you can start from around chapter 30. You will be able to write much better by then.

It's so good, especially the Pride and Prejudice chapter, with new original characters, novel plot, it's so exciting to watch. Haixi always knows what she wants, will make her own strategies, and use the rules to get the desired results in line with the background of the times. She will also miss her sisters at home and value her family's reputation.

Very beautiful and wonderful

This is so good. I really like the machinations of the arrogant world. The author can change his name to a label related to Western variety movies. Promise me: Wouldn't it be better if I didn't stop [blowing kiss]

Which chapter is "Fake Death"? Why didn't I see it?

A great book, an extension based on the original work, and unconventional! I never expected to come up with such a great product!

It's super good-looking, but the update hasn't been finished yet. I'm so anxious to wait! !

The Pride and Prejudice part is very wonderfully written, it's great to read [adoration][adoration][adoration], I love reading it, more to come!

Pride and Prejudice is really great 🤩 I like it very much. It's a rare unconventional fanfic that doesn't involve much plot, but the plot is still exciting and rich. Please give me more! ! !