After Offending Long Aotian, She Begged Him on Her Knees Not to Become a Black Man

It's so refreshing, I really want to see the Shura field that the five people remembered after deleting their memories, and Shen Juan, a weak and helpless person, was pushed into the corner by five people, Jiang Jiang Liang Liang, hey, the author, I really want to see Wuwu Wuwu, I want to see Five People, I also want to see different protagonists get together and be Jiang Jiang Liang Liang, Wuwu Wuwu, update soon [I'm about to cry][Quickly Crying][Almost crying][Almost crying][Almost crying][Almost crying][Almost crying][Almost crying][Almost crying][Almost crying][Almost crying][Almost crying][Almost crying][Almost crying][Almost crying][Almost crying][Almost crying][Almost crying][Almost crying][Almost crying]

To be honest, it's pretty good-looking, but the serious and innocent swordsman inside it. . . It seems like a person (Gong), blind, innocent and serious. He was abducted to Hualou when he was a child. He usually calls himself Chi, and calls the protagonist Brother Shen, or Lei Linggen. When I saw it, I never dared to say it for fear of being called gay, but the content is really interesting, but the personality is a bit similar.

It's very good-looking, but the emotional line feels a bit strange. I don't know how to describe it, but it just feels a bit weird. Then there are a little few updates. I hope the author can update it quickly. I highly recommend this book. If you are interested, you can check it out. I haven't found any surprises yet. I strongly support [like] [like]

This book is super nice! ! ! ! If you like stock buying articles and BL, you can't miss it! Let me add one point here: don't quit when you see that you become a girl at the beginning, you will regret it! ! ! ! This is just a vest that I am forced to wear in order to survive! Just came here for the emotional line! It's not a boy changing into a girl. [Sad] The male protagonists here like Shen Juan, and they will only like Shen Juan! ! ! The author's wife especially likes to make jokes, and it's also very interesting while making fun of her! Although there may be some minor logical flaws, don't be picky! Overall, this is a very good book. The low rating is because it was just written! I believe it will get better! ! ! ! The relationship line is still in the early stages, so those who like to keep books or are slow-burners should come quickly! The atmosphere in both the comment area and the book circle is very good, and the author and teacher are also very easy-going. Come on, teacher, it's so beautiful! ! !

It's quite funny, I like the character of the main character. Among the five male supporting actors, I hope that Ye will be offline soon. Ye takes the protagonist as his wife regardless of his wishes, which is very annoying to him. I hope Master will give up love and concentrate on cultivating Taoism. The best ending for him is to cultivate the Taoism. It's best for the protagonist to be single. What he needs is never love, but strength. But it would be interesting to take on one or more of the remaining three supporting actors.

It's really good. I enjoyed watching the Master line. Xiao Chi is really good. (I didn't really like the way Xiao Juan changed into Yue Xingxue and had close contact with the male protagonist.) The author is also very good. He listens to readers' suggestions and there are more updates! ! !

[Adoration][Adoration][Flowing kiss][Flying kiss][Flying kiss][Flying kiss][Flying kiss][Flying kiss][Flowing kiss][KISS][KISS][KISS][KISS][KISS][KISS][KISS] I like it very much😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍 😍😍I'm really surprised. The writing of this book is much better than many short-form novels. It's still original and the characters are really full-bodied. Although the plot is a bit cliché, I really like this kind of book. I love it so much. I have regained the passion I had when I first read the novel. It is worth reading. I fell in love with [][][][][][][][]. I feel that the rating is too low. This book is much better than many 9-point fanfics. It is also better than many brainless heartthrobs. It is really clear. The new writing style is not boring at all. I really like it. The writing style is very mature. It is not easy to write a cliché story well. I really like it [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart]

It's really funny and refreshing. It's the first time I've seen the heroine die so early. It's so strange, and her character is so funny. It's really funny. "My hands hurt so much~" I need some encouragement from my brother~~~

I've been chasing this book for a long time, and now I realize that he didn't give it a five-star review. It's my fault. I think the role of the protagonist is relatively average. At least I think the author is fair to the five palaces. There are basically some shortcomings, and there are also highlights (for example, the supplementary supplements include Ye Suqing and Xiao Xiao, who have relatively flat characters. Dragon, I think this is awesome. I have rarely seen an author who fills so many holes.) The plot line is relatively complete, and many unreasonable places are basically explained. If the author can still write this type of book, he can add more protagonists, which is my highlight moment. I feel that the portrayal of Shen Juan is not very complete. I can write more about the protagonist's growth experience and changes in perception of the avenue. This will make the protagonist more charming, or more charming. No matter how you put it, I think this book is still very interesting to read. The emotional line is basically complete, and the character creation is also remarkable. If you want to watch a more delicate emotional drama, you can read this book. Let me point it out here, the master has really delicate emotions (//∇//) I also hope that the author can create more exciting works in the writing process. [Laughing]

It's so beautiful, it made me so happy to watch it, I couldn't stop laughing, it was so much fun, hahahahahaha, it's so beautiful, and it looks like a real person, I'm laughing to my temples [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile]

Personally, I feel it's pretty good, and the settings are quite to my liking, but when I read the book reviews, many people commented, "Am I really too hungry?"🧎🧎🧎

I like it so much!!! The characters are very full and I like every one of them. When I read the article before, I couldn't see what the author said about love. The author's writing is so detailed!! When I read it, I can imagine the picture or mood. I am happy when they are happy, and I feel uncomfortable when they are unhappy. The writing is really good. I was in a bit of a book shortage a while ago, which may have something to do with myself. This book makes me feel very good, (I don't know how to express it) I really want to read it every day! Unfortunately, I go to school now, but I can come back once every two weeks to maintain a balance. I hope the author will work hard! ! !

It looks good. I want to know whether the main character's attributes are 1 or 0. Ye Suqing's setting is so cute. It feels like she was originally a Black Heart Lotus. After rebirth, she is the Black Heart Lotus Max.

Highly recommended, and this is a seven-hour desperate straight man drama with two male protagonists (?). I really want to laugh. The plot development is quite reasonable. It can be seen that the author has put some thought into the character creation, but the foreshadowing is a bit less now. I look forward to it +10

Yes, the plot and main characters are the best among heartthrob novels. Although I don't like Ma Jiawen, this book loses horse quickly, which is acceptable. The male protagonist Shen Juan has a pretty good character, not silly or sweet, he is upright, kind and able to use his brain. Although he deceives a few lucky children in order to complete the task, he will also give a certain amount of emotional response and care, and he also knows how to keep himself clean and will not lose his bottom line. The characters of the several children of destiny are also well-developed, each has its own characteristics and is easy to remember, and the roles and scenes are similar. Among the five sons of luck, I like Chi Xu the most. He has a very good personality. No matter in the previous life or in this life, no matter what the hero did, he always likes and trusts the hero. He has no reason to stand by the hero. Moreover, he will never force the hero. When the hero is in danger, he will stand up as soon as possible. He will also agree to cooperate with his love rival, will not be jealous, and even help the hero to go back in time and restart his life at the cost of his life. It is really rare to see such a full character. Secondly, I like Xiaolong. He is also devoted to the male protagonist, and his interactions with the male protagonist are very sweet. For the safety of the male protagonist, he will drop everything and cooperate with Xiao Chi to save people. He is also very cute in his daily farming life, a bit like a tsundere version of Xiao Chi. The third one likes Master and Xi Zheng. Both of them are doing great things silently behind the scenes. They have helped Shen Juan a lot, even at the cost of their lives. They have been entangled and set up for thousands of years. What I dislike the most is the character Ye Suqing. In the early stage, he was still a sunny Long Aotian, who cooked well, but later he suddenly turned into a dark male ghost, forcing the male protagonist to love him. I suddenly felt unhappy, but it was still much better than similar characters in other novels. Finally, the character Xi Zheng is really charming, dangerous but charming. He has saved the male protagonist many times without any intention of repaying, and he will not tell the male protagonist the price he paid. It is a pity that the male protagonist is the least gentle to him, and it is even more pity that he is the only one who has not released the extra story. I hope the author will release it later. However, looking at the number of extra chapters of each male protagonist, I feel that the author is more biased towards Ye Suqing...

I want to see the line between Xiao Zheng and All, it's really very beautiful, Xiao Juan's style of painting hahahahaha The feeling of all is that the master is in the palace, and then the others are noisy, Chi Xu Hui Shen brother is long and Shen brother is short, Ye Changqing is silent and just does what Xiao Juan likes and then secretly rapes him, Xiao Long will cling to Xiao Juan every day, and Xiao Zheng wants to sleep with Xiao Juan all the time, everyone is so lively and noisy [crying] [crying]

It looks good! ! ! ! I hope Brother Zhuma is the real palace! ! ! ! If not, I might abandon the article [Thinking] But this is my personal feeling. If the main palace is not Zhuma Ge, I may not be able to stand it [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking] But the overall appearance is good-looking [Blowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss] Everyone will have their favorite male protagonist! Don't pay attention to what I say (end. Brother Zhuma, I support you!! [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

It's actually very interesting to watch. There are no weird points or mentally retarded characters. The plot is not draggy. The characters created are also quite interesting. There are also many jokes. At the moment, it is a sweet story with a bit of nonsense◍╹×╹◍￰￰! Update soon. I finished reading it in two days🙌🏻🙌🏻

The writing is really beautiful, but when there are many suitors, you won't be willing to give up on any one of them. I hope they all will. The protagonist Shen Juan is different from the male protagonists I have seen in the double-male novels in the past. How can I put it, I like Shen Juan very much. He is a crazy person with a very gentle heart.

I just want to say why this book is so beautiful. When I first read this book, with more than 300 chapters, I had no interest in reading it. After clicking on it, more than 300 pictures were not enough to read. Why is it so good? I read it in two days and all night. It feels like it will be finished soon. I will definitely pursue it if the author can write another one next time. I also read the God-Slaying fanfic written by the author. It is good✧(◍˃̶ᗜ˂̶ " By the way, another thing is that the character setting is really perfect. Everyone has their own characteristics. The Shura field of several of them is also good-looking, and the 1V1 is also good-looking. How can it be so good-looking (*꒦ິ⌓꒦ີ). After reading this, I guess I have reached the bottleneck period again. Next time the author writes about dual male protagonists, I will definitely follow up [laughs]

This is the funniest book I've ever read. It's very interesting. I want to see the author's CP line with the master. I really want to blow a kiss [fly a kiss] [fly a kiss]

It's great to watch, but it's a pity that I came late, the intimate scenes and the small theater have been deleted [crying]

It's even... It looks great! The plot is well-executed, and unlike most polyamorous characters in the world, the characters all have their own shining points. I am partial to Master hhhh, but other people's plots also made me feel happy watching them! I haven't seen such a logically consistent book on Tomato for a long time. This book is really not about writing random formulas to create characters. However, I still feel a little obsessed with the plot of this demon, and I look forward to the author's follow-up plot!

This is the most funny novel I have ever read. The plot is awesome and sometimes unexpected. Every character makes me laugh. I giggle for a while after reading a chapter. My mother said that I have a mental illness. It is the only novel that I want to read immediately as soon as every chapter comes out. If I didn't have to go to this school, I would definitely rush to update it every day [face covering] [face covering] [face covering]

It's a very good book. I stayed up two long nights and didn't even skip a chapter. I also caught up with Old Ford [please update]. In fact, I am not interested in master-like characters, but the author wrote the ruthless way very well. The saint is ruthless but has a trace of selfishness. He should be ruthless, fair, impartial, and unobsessed, but he has the only unreasonable and ulterior preference for Shen Juan. This is not betrayal or depravity, but the flower of humanity blooming in the cracks of divinity. The more restrained he is, the more it means he is tempted. The more impartial he is, the more sinful this preference becomes. In the end, Shen Juan's sense of fate and powerlessness due to his hard work and Master's indifference and determination made me cry. Everything is logical, everyone is normal, and even kind. Things are still irreversibly sliding towards collapse. There are no winners, no survivors, and only I am left crying like a dog. [Crying]

It's good to watch, but not many people watch it, and the plot is a bit funny Hehehe, you are reviewing, don't be too strict, I'm afraid I'll take the whole family to beat you up [laughs]

It's not bad. I don't know how Shura Field will be written in the future, but I feel that it may be more difficult to handle. I don't know if the vest thing can be handled well. So far, the emotional line has been handled relatively normally, and it is relatively good without feeling awkward. It's pretty good, keep up the good work

I like it very much, but there is one weird point. Chi Du, who returned from time travel, liked the heroine of the original book [face covering], which is different from the introduction. It's a bit weird.

In the genre of heartthrobs, this book is fairly well-written. There is nothing particularly awkward about it. Overall, it is good.

It's quite interesting. The four male protagonists are all pretty good. I especially like Long Shuangjue. Ye Suqing is too yandere. Now his senior sister has nothing to do with him. He just cares about that [smirking] [OK]