One Piece: Mary Geoise’s Twin Red-Staff Enforcers

I always give 5 stars or 2 stars. If the writing is not bad, I hope the author will not give up his efforts to finish it, so I give 5 stars. If the writing is bad, I really can't read more than twenty chapters. Let me tell you the reason why I give 5 stars. 1. There are not many Celestial Dragon Humanities, but most of the Celestial Dragon Humanities will become the same routine as the Pirates. They are obviously Celestial Dragons who are free to liberate themselves every day. This is obviously unrealistic. It is impossible for such Celestial Dragons, Wulaoxing and Jialin Sheng not to get rid of them, because they are not good people in the first place, but other However, in the Celestial Dragon literature, Wulaoxing and Jialin Sheng are often the good guys, and their characters become smart people without correct guidance. What the author of this novel did well is that he can put the Celestial Dragons as the protagonists in the book, but retain the character of the Celestial Dragons villains, instead of the protagonist changing 180 degrees in just a few sentences. 2. The author is very stable in that he does not focus on the emotional line, and does not rush into the main plot of the original work. This means that the author can have more private settings to establish the "unique world view of the book", which will be less affected by the settings of the original work. He can also change the original plot more reasonably without being too abrupt, resulting in too many "Dragon King pretending to be a slap in the face" Dragon King novel plots. It is also a good choice not to enter the emotional line too early, because what is the setting of the Tianlong people? They are the nobles of the world, the nobles among the nobles. 90% Of the consequences of this character entering the love line too early will be a stallion novel. 3. When the author adds patriotic thoughts or modern thoughts, he integrates them well with the pirate worldview. It will not make people feel too strict and arouse the readers' disgust. This kind of article should either not include these private things, or you should let these ideas be well integrated into the pirate worldview. The author handles it very beautifully, and And the method of reforming the Celestial Dragons will not make people feel inexplicable. The protagonist deliberately introduced the "pure blood and dirty blood theory" to conceal his true purpose of reforming the Celestial Dragons, and asked Im, the Five Old Stars and the Knights of God to cooperate with him. This not only conforms to the philosophy of the Celestial Dragons, but also achieves the protagonist's purpose. Next, a personal suggestion. As the protagonist is a world noble, it is obviously not good to give him a eunuch story without a heroine. I think there should be only one heroine, or there should be no more than 5 heroines. I think the position of the heroine in the main palace should be given directly to Shalulia Palace. If you have any suggestions for other heroines It is Hancock, Ginny, Stella, and Kerra who have been slaves, or members of the original Revolutionary Army like Bello Betty. Although Ginny ran away from the Valley of the Gods, there was a kidnapping incident later, so that Ginny would not suffer from Qinglin disease due to Satan's experiment, and there would be no Bonnie also has Qinglin disease, the tragedy of the bear sacrificing himself to save his adopted daughter (although the latest comics can definitely restore it), as for the bear's arrangement, I think it can be a bit explosive (anyway, this book is a plot with some funny entertainment elements), recruit him and Ivankov into the evil party, and then Afterwards, the evil party sets up a personal guard for the protagonist and makes them the first and second in command of the personal guard. Then Ivankov completely transforms into a woman and falls in love with a bear or something like that [laughing evilly] (it can not only replace Ginny's childhood sweetheart and lover, but also amuse the readers) Then I hope to arrange a heroine, but don't dwell too much on the emotional line, just express the meaning. The most stable and stable heroine is the single heroine of Shalulia Palace, because she has already laid the groundwork in the early stage, occupying the role of the protagonist's childhood sweetheart, and she is also a Celestial Dragon. Regardless of her status or rationality, she is the most suitable candidate. My suggestions for heroines above are just to give more choices. It doesn't matter how you arrange it, but just don't collapse. After all, it is still very good so far. I'm not sure if there will be a Revolutionary Army in your book, after all, there is reform for the protagonist, but to be honest, I have the idea of giving a personal guard above. I personally hope that the original members of the Revolutionary Army can become the protagonist's personal force, instead of following the sweat king Dolag as a revolutionary army, working for him with blood and sweat, and then being abandoned directly regardless of life or death if something goes wrong.

When you update, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the progress of the plot is paid more attention to. When you watch the third watch, Weiwei's praise begins to speak out, and the number of dead harvests begins to decrease. Readers' support spontaneously formed, and the sound of praise became louder and louder when you read the fifth watch. When you are at the tenth watch, the Confucian debates are deafening, and the tolerant attitude is implemented both internally and externally. When you are twenty, you will have a place in the bookworm's memories. Even in your long life, your name will leave a dazzling trace. Updating may not solve all problems, but more than 90% of problems come from insufficient updates.

A very good novel about One Piece from the perspective of the Celestial Dragons. The angle of choosing to transform the Celestial Dragons is also very good. However, the golden finger is a bit stretched and not strong enough. I hope to become stronger as soon as possible. After all, only your own strength is the biggest trump card. Please keep updating the author!

From the current point of view, the design angle is very good. The Exiled Land, Black Sun, and Ming Ge's family also have a good ending. The unexpected guy seems to have risen. Generally speaking, he has experience. [Sneaky smile] [Sneaky smile] [Sneaky smile] The Tianlong people have also undergone changes in the world. The Five Old Stars, the Knights of God, and Im have also become people of fun, praising joy [Shy][Shy]

I didn't expect that I could get such great wine at such a cheap price. The store! I have nothing to say about the service. The room is clean and tidy! The lady in charge of the guest room is really nice. Thank you for your hard work! The hardware and service of this budget hotel are top-notch. Star, the room is big and the equipment and facilities are very new. Is the room clean? There is a peculiar smell, the sheets are clean and new, the shower is very comfortable, and the WFI is very good It's fast. It downloads larger files very quickly. I like it. Location Excellent, warm service. A must-choose Home Inn when traveling. With diagram The picture is exactly the same! The location is obviously easy to find and has its own parking lot. The lobby is clean and bright, the girl at the front desk is warm and thoughtful, and the pillows are The quilt and quilt are very clean, the room has no peculiar smell, good ventilation and sound insulation The effect is very good, very quiet and no noise, the elevator has access control, it is late It is very safe with security guards on duty at night, facilities are in place, and the price is convenient Affordable, cost-effective, easy to book, and trustworthy for staying on time. WiFi speed is very fast

The writing is very good. It is different from the plot-oriented pirate novels. It can be seen that the author really wants to write something, and some details can be studied. It is good. I look forward to the follow-up [Like][Like][Like]

This is a great One Piece fan novel. It is not the popular follow-up type, but an independent second creation. The author is very careful in writing it. Even though there is not much traffic, it is still young.

It's beautiful, I love watching it, it's considered top-notch The character design is pretty good, especially the kind of lies [laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly] The protagonist jumps and goes into the sea quickly. I think it would be better to make the sea chaotic.

The protagonist will grow, and he will not be in awe of the sky and the earth as soon as he comes. The rat will appear a little more frequently in the early stage and things will get better later. Although the protagonist is a Celestial Dragon, there is no original character in the book. The protagonist is as earth-shattering as the one in the book, but he has the voice of an ordinary person. Every short story and plot character are almost self-created (maybe I haven't read it), and the characters are very vivid. It is worth watching a different One Piece.

A very good fanfic that can be backstabbed by the original author