Slay the Gods: My Forbidden Ruins Are Weak, but the Heavenly Fire Is Drawn!

First of all, the writing style is smooth, which can be praised. Secondly, the male protagonist's personality is very similar to Kevin's, but he is still different from Kevin. He has a strong self-awareness and is okay. Then, there is the issue of combat power, which exists in almost all fanfics. This is a matter of opinion, but I personally think it is okay. Third, whether to save Lao Zhao or not, to be honest, he should be saved, but sitting back and watching Lao Zhao die and letting him become the Seventh Thunder Sword Spirit of Purification is obviously a complicated process. Depending on the acceptance level, I feel uncomfortable. But the pit was filled later. The reason why the male protagonist did this at that time was that he was deprived of his humanity by [Salvation] (a bit like Otto's version of Kevin). Fourth, the characters of the supporting characters are all well-chosen. The author did not deliberately underestimate Lin Qiye, but also gave Lin Qiye some highlights. The emotional line is very delicate, the heroine Hongying, the author is suspected to be a Neptune (?) Summary: Putting aside some common faults of fan fiction, there are some flaws in the front part, but I personally think the latter part is more exciting. The protagonist is super A and also has a growth process. Those who like the ancestor Kevin can still give it a look.

Everyone who has read this book has a majestic figure, admired by thousands of people, and unparalleled. The jade tree faces the wind, both internally and externally, talented and noble sentiments, super invincible, proficient in one's work, reaching the pinnacle, flying sand and walking stones, uncanny workmanship, enlightening the deaf, illuminating the world, seeing thousands of miles, raining and dewing the common people, benefiting all directions, eagles watching wolves, dragons walking and tigers treading, majestic, majestic, lofty, benevolent and moral, charming and suave, Selfless, looks like Pan An, but is more talented than Song Yu, flowers are more beautiful than Begonia, you have it, you have it, and you have it, you have it, you have it, you have it, you have it, you have the wind on your sleeves, you are virtuous, you have a pure heart, you travel to the mountains, you have high feelings, you have great virtue, you have immeasurable merit, you have good gold and jade, you are bright and virtuous, you have a beautiful heart, you have a pure heart, you are a noble person, you are a person with lofty ideals and a benevolent person. A white crane in the clouds, a man of great splendor, a romantic figure, a dragon and a phoenix, unparalleled in the world, an unrivaled hero, unparalleled, a branch in Guilin, a man of cranes, one of a kind, unparalleled in the world, named on the gold list, Kunshan tablet jade, peerless and transcendent

I like this book very much. I have to say that it is very comfortable to write. It can pretend to be Kevin's ancestor very well. It is very enjoyable to read. However, the relationship with Hongying should be written more delicately and slower. I have also written a book myself. I know this situation. I have conceived a lot in my mind and made up a lot, but the actual content in the article is only a few sentences. Maybe I After thinking about the long companionship, I wrote this sentence after several months in the article. The amusement park date can be described in a separate chapter to describe the details. Old Zhao just sacrificed, and Hongying would not choose to start a relationship so quickly. Taking the opportunity of the amusement park to resolve the knot and comfort Hongying can be regarded as the beginning of love. Too hasty description of feelings is disrespectful to the character, and It is irresponsible for the author's own work. Maybe the author creates it casually, but a book can bring joy and relief to readers, including laughter and tears. The characters created, their every smile, every move, their daily life, their laughter and tears, will bring us a different kind of experience, and these experiences can truly enrich a person's spiritual world. , The climax plot of the article can be more foreshadowed, so that when the climax comes, readers and even the author can really get excited. I write so much because I really like the character of Kevin. I can see the potential of this fanfic. It is considered a good one among Tomato's books about Kevin. I can spend more time polishing it. I look forward to the future direction of this book.

Let the songs that no one sings sing again. Write a new chapter for the story that has been forgotten by history. A noble and pure soul embarks on a journey. May the plundering beasts love you and protect you, and grant you the freedom of "empty dreams". May the feathers of Duchen love protect his body and grant him the perseverance of "floating life". May the scroll of the painted world bless him with love and grant him the innocence of "stars". May the world-devouring snake love and protect his body and grant him "infinite" desires. May the Whistle of Dawn love him and grant him the will of "Rising Light". May the Inch-Breaking Blade love you and grant you "momentary" determination. May the love of the good Dharma protect his body and grant him the wisdom of "God's Wisdom". May the love of bad calamity bless his body and grant him the sincerity of "violent destruction". May the love of the Box of Foolish Play bless him and grant him the miracle of "spiral". May the song of brilliance bless his body and give him the brilliance of "gold". May the love of deep sin bless his body and grant him the love of "precepts". May the Emberless Sword love him and grant him the ideal of "salvation". May the flawless people love you and bless you, and grant you the return of your "true self". We hereby praise the resurrection of the heir of the will of [Salvation]

A very good book, the main character becomes the heir, which perfectly avoids my red flags.

Any plot idea is fine, but it's too short [face covering] I recommend 80 updates per day, 10,000 words per chapter

Personally, I feel that this is a very good novel, like discovering a bright pearl in the vast sea of ​​books. Although the combat power is a bit stretched, when reading novels, my mind is definitely not there. Just like enjoying a glass of ice-cold lemonade on a hot summer day, it is refreshing and thirst-quenching and makes people forget their worries. The charm of this novel lies in its storytelling and characterization. Every character is lifelike, as if they are alive on the page, and they experience the joys, sorrows, and joys with the readers. The plot has ups and downs, and is as exciting as a roller coaster, making people want to stop. Overall, this novel is like a delicious dish. Although it has some flaws, it is still endlessly memorable. In this fast-paced era, it is rare to encounter such an immersive novel. Able.

It looks good. The protagonist is sane and will not turn the original protagonist group into a bunch of useless people. He will also change the original tragedy of Zhan Shen within his ability. In the plot, the characters and organizations other than the original God-Slaying are well inserted. It is a rare and good book.

I am also an old fan of the account from the beginning to now. It is really beautiful, the content is compact and very logical. For me, it's a rare good Su. The author will update soon. Ps: Why can birds fly? It's beautiful. It's really beautiful. Come and take a look.

I finally saw a good-looking article about Honkai Impact. I hope you won't be disappointed. I really recommend it and it's worth watching. 👍🏻 Don't miss it if you pass by. The good-looking article is here. As long as the author writes well, I haven't seen any thunder yet, but there are too few.