The Invincible Sword Immortal and the Gentle Girl: Iron Breaking Chapter

Give me a five-star support

Can you write less extras? Are there too many extras?

As a Bentie player, this is the best second creation I have ever seen. It just feels like Liuying's favorability has increased too quickly. Is it the protagonist's halo? I don't know if I will become an immortal in the future.

Very good very good

Good-looking, love to watch, like to watch

It's so beautiful, even I, the Liuying Chef, got stuck in it and couldn't get out.

You can add some remarks in some places, otherwise it will be easy for people to misunderstand. The text is okay, the logic is stronger, and the writing should be better if it is combined with the performance in the plot.٩۹(๑•̀ω•́ ๑)۶

In response to his request, he sent down five-star blessings

Believe me, it looks great!

Good looking. Love to see more.

Start raising books, come on, the author is great ∠( ᐛ ∠)＿

It's pretty enough. Hehe, continue to write the story of breakup and reconciliation. I enjoyed watching it. Quite interested too. Keep writing. [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

Give 5 stars to support it

Not bad. The best thing is that the author will say it himself, so as to give readers a psychological preparation. The poisonous places are no longer poisonous [blowing kiss]

What we are saying is, can the extra chapter be put at the end and make another one to watch the sudden extra chapter?

Only two words are beautiful

It's okay, it's pretty good-looking