HP: Rapunzel and Magpie

This novel portrays the heroine in an extremely three-dimensional way - she is not a symbolic 'strong' person, but a living person who makes mistakes and regrets. The author did not force a happy ending for everyone as is common in fan fiction, but instead made death and regret the weight of the story. The story is logical and not deliberately idealistic, but faces real difficulties. For example, the heroine will encounter difficulties during pregnancy, leading to accidents. What struck me most was that these deaths and regrets were not meant to sensationalize, but were like fine sand piling up in my heart little by little. Only when I closed the book did I realize that I could no longer breathe. This real aftertaste is more memorable than the false happy ending. Thank you to the author for such a true and profound story. It does not cater to routines or avoid cruelty, but instead makes the characters and plot more touching. Please continue to stick to this creative style, I will always support you! [Blowing kiss]

It's a very nice and perfect story, so far it's just a cookie, no abuse, very loving parents, a mature and charming sister-type heroine, a growing love story, and a baby girl who is constantly maturing and reconciling with herself. I originally read this story out of curiosity as this CP setting is rare, but after I tied it up, I found that it was really perfect. There was basically nothing I didn't like about it. The voice acting was lacking and I didn't know how to praise it, so I could only make up some random words to express my love. I really like this story. I want to believe that this is a real HP parallel world. Everything is told from the perspective of the heroine, which is very real. I feel that the author has his own understanding of HP-related characters. It is not a boilerplate and stereotype-filled description. Every character is full-bodied, flesh-and-blood, and has a sufficient reserve of relevant knowledge. It is very powerful. I hope that everyone will have a good ending. The characters who can be saved will no longer take advantage of the situation, and it will no longer be a "win of death", but I guess it will be, after all, the heroine's role setting has already begun to appear. Finally, I would like to wish the young couple, 99 [love] [love] [love]

The heroine has a very full character. I really like it from the beginning. Personally, I really like the plot of the heroine and her friends before they transfer to another school. I started to feel a little aggrieved after Yasmin's death. The second time I felt aggrieved was when the heroine miscarried in the latest chapters. I didn't get over it for a while (because I prefer happy ending plots). Btw What's interesting is that she is no longer the dream girl, but now that I have caught up with the latest chapter, I suddenly fell in love again (let's get back together with my ex-boyfriend🫰) The author's George is very three-dimensional and full. It's the first time I see the author create such a George, and I still feel very strange!

The early reading was very comfortable and smooth, with both sweet and bitter emotional lines. I have read a lot of hp fanfics, and the fact that the heroine rarely participates in the main plot is actually a bit fresher. This article is not about salvation, and some regrets cannot be fulfilled after all. I feel a little sad, why can't I make up for my regrets when we are all in the world of fandom? Some deaths are unresolved, considering the heroine's setting. I can actually accept it, but I don't quite understand why a plot of pregnancy and miscarriage was arranged in the end. I think this is a twist that shouldn't have happened, although in the end I still feel sad about it.

It's a really nice interaction between the young couple. It's super sweet. It's really interesting. I don't know how many pages I've taken notes on. It's such a nice writing style. The author has put a lot of effort into restoring some details. It's so humorous. I just don't know why so few people are reading it. I hope the author will continue to update it. Well, although there is also cruelty in the sweetness, especially the death of La Garcia at the end, I felt so uncomfortable at that time π_π, but it still feels very good to watch. I hope most people can have a good ending.

Love this book so much! Finally, I no longer write the story of the protagonist group, but the story of the male and female protagonists themselves. The love between Dick and George is so sweet! Although they sometimes have a little awkwardness and are disturbed by many external factors, such as family, the eyes of people around them, wars, positions, etc., None of these can separate them. There are also personality issues between the two of them. In the process of constant running-in, they have managed to tolerate each other and respect each other's ideas and concepts. Everyone is not perfect, they all have their own flaws, it's very real [Like]

It's hard to imagine that this is a novel written in 🍅. I actually prefer to read happy ending hp fanfics. Everyone seems to leave very lightly, but the impact is far-reaching. Fortunately it's not be! And some quarrels I thought would have a long-lasting impact, but they didn't. (No more spoilers) War is so cruel!

It's particularly beautiful. The emotions are described very delicately and realistically. It's a very sad story. It well depicts the harm that Voldemort caused to the entire wizarding world. Everyone was a victim at the time. It's not a mindless and sweet novel. The relationship between Dick and George is not smooth sailing, but the small conflict makes the two people's images more vivid and their relationship more real. Can you write another pure and sweet version based on this? [Crying] Make it longer, this one still feels too short, please do your best! The writing is really great!

The heroine doesn't have any golden fingers, it's really real. Pain and separation are the normal conditions for ordinary people when facing war. It would be wise to cry first [cry] I particularly like this simple narrative style of writing, with some short sentences that sparkle in the middle. It is simply the writing style of my dreams. But I really don't understand the miscarriage plot. .

From the character setting and the changes in the protagonist's mood as the plot progresses, it can be seen that the author loves the characters very much and has put a lot of effort into them. He especially likes this kind of rich and full character design. The ending is full of flowers! 🎉 Can there be a sequel? ()

The child was miscarried, which is really a little sad. I hope the young couple will be kind and [loving] and not abuse her!

The pacing is okay, and one can't help but wonder what will happen next. It will be a bit sadistic, so be prepared when watching it.

Ahhh, it's so beautiful. I really like the dialogue between the male and female protagonists in the book. It seems like I'm really reading a foreign novel. The male and female protagonists really love each other and tolerate each other. They also grow up in sweetness and friction.

I think the author's writing is very good, because I can't tell George and Fred very well, so most of the fanfics I read are about Joe and Fred liking the same person, and the author does a good job of distinguishing the two people, and each one is an independent individual. In the end, Joe and Dick were a perfect match.

The writing is very good, and the heroine's character is very real and her friendship is very good. But it's very real. Many people died. When the heroine's child left for the first time because of the dark wizard, neither of them were very mature yet. After the heroine rescued George, she felt that her heart had become very mature and complete. In the end, George was healed by love.

It's pretty good. I didn't find anything bad about it. It looks good too.

It's been a long time since I've read a good book about George. The heroine is very plump. Thank you so much for creating such a good heroine.

The author's writing is very delicate and worth reading

Good at writing, no need to say too much about greatness

Regarding Weasley CP articles, you can rank in the top three

It's nice to watch. The heroine is well portrayed. She is very sweet in peacetime, but war is a bit sadistic. It really makes people feel the heaviness through the words.

Very good book, worth readingღ(✞╹◡╹✞)ற

It's very beautiful. I haven't seen my favorite George or Fred's articles for a long time. Please update soon ❤️

It's nice to see [Flowing Kiss] and you can tell that the author put a lot of thought into it, and the name he chose is also nice [Flowing Kiss]

It looks good! The progress is also relatively fast, and it won't be delayed.

A particularly novel and interesting book about the magical world

A very, very, very good novel. The plot enriches the reality of the characters, breaks away from the old conventions of HP fan fiction, and is very reasonable. Thumbs up. If you like the Order of the Phoenix camp, you can check it out!

It's so beautiful, I'll make you cry in the end. Watching it again makes me cry just as much

It's really beautiful ah ah ah ah

It's not bad, the logic is very good, and the article is relatively realistic. But also because it is very realistic, there will be mistakes, losses and regrets, which is not in line with the original intention of reading the article to relax.