This book was originally going to be mostly about palace intrigue and household drama, but readers reacted so strongly that I had to change it to a one-on-one romance. It isn't really about palace intrigue or household drama anymore...
Chapters 22–27 focus on the characters growing separately. If you want to read about them getting together, you can skip those chapters for now and pick up again when they reunite!
Some parts may be a bit wordy, so feel free to skim, hehe. I'm a new writer, so please be kind
Mu Jiuli has just turned 18 and recently finished the college entrance exams. One day, while walking along the sidewalk and reading a novel, disaster suddenly strikes: he transmigrates to a matriarchal world! At first, Mu Jiuli is thrilled, thinking he'll finally get a golden finger and be able to lie flat while soaring to success. But things don't seem to go his way. It looks like he has nothing at all!!!
Why is my start still so miserable?!
(All characters in this story are over 18!!!) I'm a new writer, so please don't flame me. I'm sensitive.
I would like to give the author some writing advice. I feel that the background of the story is in the Northern and Southern Dynasties. The plot is quite rich, but the dialogue is rather blunt. The dialogue can be written by someone else from a third-party perspective, and more character expressions can be inserted. When writing a book with a similar ancient style, I feel that we should read more about the background of the Tang Dynasty, or an ancient style fictional novel from the Southern and Northern Dynasties, Ming Dynasty, Sui and Tang Dynasties. There are many remarkable writing styles in it that can be adopted. The author can also review his novel several times and compare it with other novels on the list to add elements, or use some kMi's AI to help provide suggestions to supplement the content of the novel.
The first book, I am the author, I will give it a five-star rating, hahaha
Okay, okay, I hope the protagonist will have a boy 😏 😏
The novel "Nv Zun" can surpass most novels. There are currently two shortcomings. The boys around the protagonist are always easy to die. The Yuexia brothers they met during the first time travel died after saving the male protagonist's life. Then the second time, Ayu Atu, Atu died, Ayu is not dead yet, and then the author updates too slowly. He only updates one chapter every day, which is not up to the standard.
Yue Xia said that it was really a sin to meet you as a time traveler. You acted blindly every day and got me killed. I was crying just now and I died so miserably. I turned around and became happy 😂
It looks good, mainly because the author also plays Three Kingdoms If you like to watch good things, watch more
Not bad😌😌😌😌😌😌When will the pig's feet be born?
It's okay, but it's too short. The author is too short.
Generally, some coincidences are too obvious
Not bad, not bad, pretty good-looking 👍