Female Majesty: I Don't Want to Stay in Your Shabby Mansion!

I would like to give the author some writing advice. I feel that the background of the story is in the Northern and Southern Dynasties. The plot is quite rich, but the dialogue is rather blunt. The dialogue can be written by someone else from a third-party perspective, and more character expressions can be inserted. When writing a book with a similar ancient style, I feel that we should read more about the background of the Tang Dynasty, or an ancient style fictional novel from the Southern and Northern Dynasties, Ming Dynasty, Sui and Tang Dynasties. There are many remarkable writing styles in it that can be adopted. The author can also review his novel several times and compare it with other novels on the list to add elements, or use some kMi's AI to help provide suggestions to supplement the content of the novel.

The first book, I am the author, I will give it a five-star rating, hahaha

Okay, okay, I hope the protagonist will have a boy [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]

The novel "Nv Zun" can surpass most novels. There are currently two shortcomings. The boys around the protagonist are always easy to die. The Yuexia brothers they met during the first time travel died after saving the male protagonist's life. Then the second time, Ayu Atu, Atu died, Ayu is not dead yet, and then the author updates too slowly. He only updates one chapter every day, which is not up to the standard.

Yue Xia said that it was really a sin to meet you as a time traveler. You acted blindly every day and got me killed. I was crying just now and I died so miserably. I turned around and became happy [laughing and crying]

It looks good, mainly because the author also plays Three Kingdoms If you like to watch good things, watch more

Not bad😌😌😌😌😌😌When will the pig's feet be born?

It's okay, but it's too short. The author is too short.

Not bad, not bad, pretty good-looking [like]

Generally, some coincidences are too obvious