Demon Slayer: Don't Know How to Breathe? I Ask Yuan Yidai to Fight

It's good to read, and the introduction is very attractive (I just saw Wu Mei's new father and Fist Pillar coming in). Overall, it's pretty good, there's nothing bad about it, and the author also has some small interactions. I really like it [blowing kiss]

When you update, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the writing style The youthfulness will be criticized. When you watch twice, a little patience is born, and the plot progress has been paid more attention to. When you are on the third watch, the slightest praise begins to sound, and the dead end The number began to decline. When you update five times, readers' support will spontaneously form and praise you The voice became louder and louder. When you were at the tenth watch, the great Confucian scholars' debates were deafening and tolerant. The attitude is implemented internally and externally. When you are twenty, the bookworm's memories have a place for you. Even in a long life, your name will remain shining Traces of eyes. Updates may not solve all problems, but 90% of them The problems above all come from insufficient updates. So, don't stop, update, update, update

Although there are some places where the characters are OOC and there are some bugs related to the original settings, and there are still some places where two vulgar sentences suddenly pop up, but overall the flaws are not concealed. The final battle part was particularly outstanding, I felt a little bit unsatisfied after watching it, it was well written, it broke the law of rotten tomatoes, and the rhythm of the plot was well grasped.

This novel is really great! The plot is ups and downs, compact and fascinating, and every plot from the beginning to the end is amazing. The writing is exquisite and beautiful, and the reading is so smooth that people can read it in one breath, and can deeply feel the joy of reading. The characters in the book are vivid, and the description that makes people feel like they are personally involved in it made me deeply involved in it. As a senior novel lover, I rarely give such high praise. This is definitely the best book I have read recently. No matter who you are, you must not miss it as long as you like reading novels. What about you, have you ever read such a good novel?

It can be watched with your brain, it is very comfortable, and the plot is coherent. Although there is not much description of the protagonist's family, overall, this is a good novel. At the same time, this is a novel without a female protagonist. The fighting is enjoyable, especially the gag content of this article, which brings fun to the article. The rebellion of the third brother is also particularly satisfying. As for the protagonist, he must be a new generation of non-cannibal ghost king. Overall, I recommend watching it and give it five stars.

This tomato is really (｀Δ´)! I just typed a long comment, and he said there were sensitive words. I looked through them all, but I didn't see any sensitive words. Then, I looked here and there, and deleted a word here and a word there. I don't want to say it anymore →_→ but please update it as soon as possible. I really haven't had anything to eat recently (›´ω`‹)

There are quite a lot of various OOCs, and many details give me the feeling that you are Yunwan. Personally, because of the many OOCs, I want to give you a three-star rating. But the overall writing style is pretty good. To be fair, I give it four stars.

It's not a mindless harem novel. Just for this point, Demon Slayer is already worth five stars.

I quite like this setting, but I feel that the psychic eye cannot see through the illusion, which is a bit unacceptable. The pace afterwards is very fast, and I feel a bit uncomfortable that the male protagonist's psychic ability is not revealed to the public at the end.

The writing is good, but there is one point that even if the male protagonist is handsome and charming, he wouldn't mention it so many times!

Very good, but that's not why the score is so low [face covering]

Okay, it's pretty good-looking

It's so beautiful, but there's no one around 😊

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The Shaman King's ability plus Demon Slayer is a good setting

It's good, but it would be perfect if the main character's image before he met Wuhan and was possessed by Yuanyi was changed to be a little better.

It's acceptable, give the author a quick rating [Chigua]

Sure, very decisive, not timid Anyway, it's very good. If you can do it, don't push too hard.

I've read twenty or thirty fanfics. This one ranks among the top three I've read.

Come on! Looking forward to your next performance

Very nice! A tip: Foreshadowing does not specifically refer to a certain paragraph. As far as this book is concerned, "spirit" can also be used as foreshadowing. For example, Yuanyi in Chapter 6 may correspond to the doll in the swordsmith village of the original work - Yuanyi Zero. The more the better, the more the better [laughter] After reading it, I feel very comfortable. [Praise]

It's super pretty, and the score shouldn't be so low.

The content of the book is very interesting, not boring, and it is not like those old routines about system time travel or the like.

It looks good and feels like it fulfills my fantasy of fan fiction. It's quite consistent with the original work, some changes have been made, but it feels pretty good.

The second part is so cool, I personally like it very much, I still have more to say, it would be great if there is a sequel! Thanks to the author!

The most interesting Demon Slayer fanfic I have ever seen, non-destructive, and well-paced.

Well, there are too many jokes in Xuan Haokan, and there are also our brother's [thoughts]

Not bad, it fills up the regret perfectly.

I would like to ask if there is a female protagonist? @Xuanzhiyouxuan

The author forced me to come here to post a book review