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This book is really good to read, especially when it describes Lu Bu's hundreds of rounds of battle with Sun Wukong for Diao Chan, but Xue Baochai is really too strong. If it weren't for Nuoshou's outer ring + Noxus guillotine, this wave of M4 would have fired six times Must die. In addition, I prefer what Zhuge Liang said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguo Mountain: "Young man is so proud, don't show off in front of your brother Liang." It shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkeys who knocked him to death with three sticks. In short, The plot of this book is interesting, the system is clear, there are many foreshadowings, the fighting scenes are like being there, and the character descriptions are spot-on!

It's very good, but it's a bit short. The author doesn't want you to be short, everyone knows that, right? [Laughing]

It's quite good to watch, and I highly recommend watching it. The protagonist is very strong, and I personally like it in terms of character. But can Laodeng be updated as soon as possible? Not enough [crazy][crazy][crazy]

The author feels stuck [laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly] There are so many plots about the dragon, as well as Kizaru's swordsmanship, so it's clear that it's time to delay Hurry up and update [smile][smile][smile]

Sure enough, I like fan fiction the most, not to mention the humorous and lazy style, which is simply written in the hearts of some of my fellow fishermen. I hope the author will publish more soon! Give it a good push.

This pirate novel attracted me with its unique charm. During the reading process, I was deeply attracted by the author's rich imagination and delicate writing style. The characters in the novel have distinct personalities, and the plot is compact and exciting. Especially in depicting the protagonist's growth process and teamwork spirit, it shows extremely high literary value and profound humanistic care. Overall, this novel is not only highly entertaining, but also has high artistic value and educational significance. I highly recommend it to anyone who loves adventure and exploration.

It's a very good pirate fanfic. There are no major poisonous points. There are not many characters. Probably because the author mentioned physical reasons in the follow-up article and was in a hurry to finish it. The original plot characters (female) are all mentioned briefly or not mentioned, such as the emotional lines of Yamato, Shirahoshi, Uta, Brynn, Dashiki, Nami sisters, Robin, etc. It's a pity (I told you I want to read it)

It's good to watch, but there's no description of fighting. The protagonist is invincible for no apparent reason, and he manages to win over a bunch of younger brothers for no apparent reason. But it's still pretty! The author is great and very good. He came back to fill in the pit after all the hardships. He really made me cry to death [crying]

Apart from anything else, if the author really reads Pirates or follows the manga, this book would not be bad if it were a bit bare. There is no difference in the plot content of fan fiction that discusses logical settings in the article and lists the source of the original work. It is just whether the writing style is immature. This book follows the red military line, is clean and tidy, and is highly recommended.

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There is no doubt that it is a refreshing article. The advantage of a refreshing article is that it is very comfortable to read. The shortcomings are also obvious. It is difficult to get a high score. However, in today's fast-paced life, there is nothing wrong with reading refreshing articles. For me, if it can be used as a reading material to kill time, and it works until it is refreshing, I can already give it full marks.

I have read more than 20 One Piece fan novels. I don't mind if the main character starts out as a pirate or a navy, and all the time is fighting and killing. It's rare to see a novel with such a novel theme. I stayed up late to read it. It's really good.

152 Faster and faster, this is my first novel about Pirates. I have not read the anime or comics of Pirates, but now I am playing the Pirates IP mobile game [laughing and crying][laughing and crying][laughing and crying]

My second favorite One Piece novel, after Manslaughter. The character setting is consistent with the original work, the style is witty and humorous, the plot is flawless, and the writing is clever and refreshing. From the perspective of the navy, carrying out necessary killings can still leave behind less sinful lives, and can unite the vast majority of forces. This is a rare happy ending in naval literature.

The writing is good, the subject matter is quite novel, and it was okay to read more than a dozen chapters. But what I don't like is that there are always those protagonists who like to recruit such villains into their gangs. Just think of Jiluo Neng as one of the famous people in the East China Sea, you can know that this was not a good thing in the past. Sometimes, just because you can live in peace by joining the protagonist, you can write it off. This review is for personal opinion only. Don't spray

Love this style! This is the second pirate book of this style that I have read! People don't just fight and kill! More of a human thing

After reading it, this book is basically finished. Overall, it is a good read. The protagonist likes to enjoy, so in order to avoid people hindering his enjoyment of life, he directly changes the world. There is no problem in reading it.

It's pretty good, although there's a bit of a sudden sense of fragmentation, maybe because the plot moves too fast, but it's still a good book, lighthearted and enjoyable. I wonder if it will continue the plot after overthrowing the world government.

The overall pacing is super fast and the writing is super cool. Although it doesn't feel like there is much wisdom or planning, if you like to read Bon Voyage, it is worth recommending. The system has a relatively low sense of presence, a bit like completing a plot mini-game. Of course, it is still being serialized, but the author also said that it will be completed as soon as possible.

I haven't encountered such a pure and refreshing article in a long time. I have written it up to this point. I have nothing to say, so I can only post it on Tomato. It is more like the author writing out his own fantasy than a novel. You can read it. It is a pure and refreshing article.

The writing is superb! I won't comment so much. I have read all two of the author's One Piece fan works in less than three days. This is already obvious, right? The only drawback is that both works have too few chapters.

The plot is smooth and the characters live a good life. I highly recommend it!

This kind of justice is the most satisfying

The content is quite interesting, and the author will illustrate every character that appears. Everything is in place. Even a half-embarrassed pseudo-Pirates fan like me can remember who it is by looking at the pictures. The author is very careful in this regard [Like]

It is still a good book. Basically, many things are developed in a better direction. That's it, it's just a wish

It's so cool to watch, especially the way to ignore the old navy. I can only say, for the sake of justice and loyalty! West Sea! ! !

I've read so many pirate fanfics, but this one is pretty good, not bad, just okay.

Very good, casual style, addictive to watch, the production team's donkeys are not resting, author, how can you be so slack, please update quickly [laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh]

The writing is very good and the plot is engaging. What is not said is fascinating.

Awesome! ! Although I am a little anxious, I understand that the author is too tired. Keep working hard. I am looking forward to the next book! !