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Author, look at me! Suggestions for the author will come later. Evaluation: The character setting is good, the plot design is also relatively sophisticated, and the characters are quite three-dimensional. Just playing the role of black glasses can attract a lot of fans. But there are also some shortcomings, such as the rhythm of the plot is a bit slow, and there are many descriptions that have little to do with the plot in the early stage. Although the language is considered beautiful, if you read too much, it will cause visual fatigue. Those who read the text are fine, but those who listen to the book, like me, will feel a little anxious. Generally speaking, it's not too bad. Although I personally think that the plot so far is a bit bland and does not have much connection with the original work of Pirates. However, the connection between the plot is quite natural, the writing is also good, and there are no other problems except what I said before. My personal suggestion to the author is: it would be better if the protagonist remained a man in the later period but disguised himself as a man without being exposed, or if he changed into a man and did not always mention his previous identity as a woman. Before and after meeting the protagonist group, you can add some of the beautiful, strong and miserable settings that book lovers now love to watch (preferably it should be really strong and fake, and let the protagonist group figure it out on their own, so that book lovers who like to watch sadism can enjoy it, and can also retain book friends with low tears). Then add an identity to her that she doesn't know, and something that has some relationship with the protagonist group. (It would be better to make the protagonist think that she also has amnesia like the younger brother. You can add some cognitive confusion and the like) You can also add some forums and the like (so that the book will not be interrupted when the author has no idea for the plot or wants to be lazy). Furthermore, you must never let others know that the protagonist is not from this world and play the system.

Maybe it's because the heroine was very optimistic and strong at the beginning of the article, so when Shen Moumou appeared later, she was a weak little crybaby and was very disconnected... I hope the heroine can finish the plot of Nine Gates as soon as possible, and then enter the timeline of Tomb Raider Notes and regain her female body. All-orientation or no cp, because the atmosphere between the heroine and the Zhang family is so good ~ Although the heroine has made it clear that she prefers Hei Ye, Hei Ye currently appears just to give the little crybaby heroine a slap 🤯 Zhang Rishan is the first boyfriend recognized by the heroine 😐 Although it is only a short day ꒰>< ꒱

I particularly like books where the character plays a black blind man, but I hope the heroine can grow into a cybernetic. I think it would be very interesting to write according to the copy as before, but if you add the live broadcast, it feels a bit superfluous and not so good to watch. It feels too noisy, and it feels like you are getting along with those favorite characters in The Stealing Pen, and then having a bunch of people watching, it feels very uncomfortable.

It's good to read, but I don't know if I don't resonate with the author. Every time I think he doesn't describe or even mention the important parts, and he puts too much emphasis on the parts that I don't think are important. The whole article is hazy, and there isn't much description of the original plot. If you haven't read the two original works, you may not be able to understand it, but the subject matter is still very interesting. Those who like to read fan fiction and are familiar with the original works should be interested.

The plot is very novel and the descriptions of the characters are also very good. The heroine cosplays with the black blind man which is very interesting. It will be fun to meet him later [laughing] ][Laughing][Laughing][Laughing][Laughing][Laughing][Laughing][Laughing][Laughing][Laughing][Laughing][Laughing][Laughing][Laughing][Laughing][Laughing][Laughing]

It's very good. The plot is novel and well-written. It's very good. I hope it can be more exciting in the future...

Beautiful, highly recommended

It's a bit low. Why did it disappear so quickly?

I like it very much and hope the author will continue writing.

Very nice, come on author

It's okay, but the live broadcast of the voice behind it makes me feel more and more uncomfortable the more I watch it.

To be honest, it's quite beautiful and the language is beautiful.