Yanyun's Sixteen Tones: Returning to Uncle Jiang When He Was Sixteen

The author writes beautifully! It's funny without losing the ancient charm, it's full of immersion by citing classics, the characters are non-ooc, and the writing is very full! By the way, author, our Miaodonggua is still a junior sister and junior sister. Do you have a name? [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

Immortal products, Hao Chi, female boss, novel themes The most regrettable thing is 1v1 (it should be so far), I want to see all

Why is the rating so low? It's really beautiful. Do you know how difficult it is to find a female host? And the teacher's writing style is also very good. She is very good at writing, okay? The concept is also very good, and I feel that the characters are also very thoughtful, although they are sharp and warm. But I found that I was a little confused about the timeline, maybe because I didn't watch it for a while () but in fact, I didn't understand a lot of the original plot of Yan Yun🌚 I rarely write long reviews, so I couldn't help myself when I saw this book had such a low rating. I haven't read it for a while, but I finished it in the past two days. It's really good-looking. The boss is very round and the writing is very strong. I really cried and laughed sometimes. I couldn't watch it at all. Maybe some of it doesn't match up with Yan Yun's new plot, but I actually prefer this version written by the teacher. When will Uncle Jiang come home? I haven't seen Uncle Jiang in Yan Yun's plot for a long, long time [I'm about to cry] Lord Yan, bg, can you rise up? Still don't understand why the rating is so low. Foreign persimmon, please pay me for the extra story.

Super beautiful😭😭😭Author, if you are tired of writing code words, just write two more chapters and take a rest [Sending my heart] I love you, teacher😭😭Every time I say I'll read two more chapters before I read it, but I can't help but read it every time there's an update🌚

The author's writing style is chivalrous, the plot is smooth, and the heroine's character is very cute. But I have a small question. When the heroine travels back to the original world, how will she get along with Jiang Wulang? Is it an uncle-nephew relationship or a broken screen window😘

I love reading it. The author's writing is very strong, the plot has ups and downs, and the characters are vivid and real. It is truly the best Yanyun Sixteenth Voice fanfic I have ever read. I just always feel that there is a sad atmosphere, and I am afraid that there will be a big sword in the later part.

Ahhhhh! ! ! ! Teacher, please write some extra stories! ! It's so cool to see them getting serious about each other, my God! Thank God for allowing me to see such high-quality Yanyun colleagues. This meal is so delicious! ! I got into it a long time ago, and the more I watched it, the more I enjoyed it. I had endless aftertaste after finishing it in one go, so I saved a while to see the ending. I was really happy! ! The ending is also very satisfying. It's really great to see many characters that were rarely described in Yan Yun. The characters are all very distinct and good, but the whereabouts of some characters are not specified. What happened to Alan after the Khitan invasion? The transformation of the Lord Zhu into a Yin soldier was also very good. I don't know how the Shaodong family felt when they met the Shaodong family after the ghost market. It seems that there are still some characters that are not explained. . I can't remember it, too bad. The overall plot of the story is very good, and the writing is also great. It is like a fairy teacher. The story is sweet and sad. I laughed at my aunt for a while and cried for a while. I generally don't read sadistic stories, but I have to taste such a high-quality story. The teacher also saves the characters of Yanyun when he can. Many pitfalls left by Yanzi have been filled. It is reasonable and just right. Teacher, I beg you to write more extras. I can't stand anyone else's writing without you and me.

Boss, the writing style is so good😭😭The writing is very, very good. I watched it for three days without stopping😭The plot is very coherent and the plot is also very interesting. Boss, you must update 800 chapters a day! ! 😭😭

The plot and writing coexist, and there are occasional redundant words and typos, but they are harmless. It fits the characters very well. When describing the righteousness of the family and the country, it does not forget the warm and cold feelings of the world. The gatherings and separations of relatives and friends in the war are vividly visible. The timeline is also very cleverly set up. The interweaving of the two lines of dream and reality gives people a sense of trance, but it is not complicated. The character's emotional transition was a little stiff in the early stage, but smooth and impressive in the later stage. The interweaving of Tang Xuanzang and Li Yan was also very clever.

The writing is good, the story is novel, it is connected to the main line of Yanyun game, and it is not OOC. This is a very interesting fanfic that I have read. The original story is very touching and not obtrusive. Those who don't play games can also read the recommendations.

It's well written. It's really interesting to see the young man's world and see the misery at the bottom.

It's beautiful,,,, it's so beautiful, it's simply wonderful, the writing is very good, the plot is very successful, the characters are also very successful,,

The writing is in the top three of Tomato. It's so well written. I don't think Jiang Yan ooc, who was doted on by his adoptive father when he was young and had like-minded friends and a beloved girl, should have a youthful spirit [cry] [cry] [cry] The young master's family is also well portrayed, and the logic is completely closed [cry] [cry] [cry]

It's a really good-looking story flow fan, and the entire story is as sophisticated and complex as an original novel. It's so fascinating that I couldn't help but read it in one day. It's precisely because my memory is still clear after reading it in one day, that I can appreciate the subtlety of every foreshadowing and recycling. Although it is a CP fan, except for the emotional line between Uncle Jiang and the girl, the relationship between everyone can withstand careful scrutiny. Even the supporting characters are designed to be very layered. They are not blindly black and white, but more ordinary people who "no one is perfect". Many supporting characters that I subconsciously understood as stereotypes when they first appeared will appear in the second part to break my understanding.

The writing is excellent, the logic is self-consistent, there are many foreshadowings that can be fulfilled, and the plot is also very attractive. The emotional tug between Uncle Jiang and the Controller is very well written. I highly recommend it. I don't know about others, but I'm very impressed. My friends all recommended me to play Yanyun. Now I want to recommend this book to them. It's very, very well written.

This is the best Yanyun fanfic I have seen on Yangshizi. The writing style is super delicate, the plot is rigorous and does not dig holes, and the characters are not OOC at all. They are definitely from fairy tales.

Teacher, your writing is so good. Help. Wuwuwuwuwuwuwuwu. The Daicheng chapter is really good at writing. Teacher, come on, I'm waiting for you. Teacher, your writing is so good. Help. Wow! Wow!

Past and present life, true and false, history is nothing but reincarnations The world of the court is full of turmoil, and a life full of sincerity is unworthy of it. The characters are really three-dimensional! The article is very interesting! Be there! ! ! Worth savoring

Wuwuwuwu Jiang Shujiang Yan Jiang Wulang Jiang Junior General Jiang's sworn brother foster father Wuwuwu [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] So beautiful [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying]

No, no, this book is still so good. I was so happy that I opened Yanyun directly. Please give me a big boost from the author and update it. Readers are optimistic about you [Blow kiss]

Beautiful, beautiful Wandering around and wishing everyone good results My melon [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry] Look at me Wuhu Wuhu Beautiful, beautiful

It's so incomparably good-looking, the author must never stop updating it (›´ω`‹)🤗🥰🥰🥰🥰

The writing is really good, the writing style is also good, and the writing power is also strong, which is rare.

It's really beautiful [crying][crying] It portrays the young Uncle Jiang very well. The boy should be more energetic! !

This is the first time since I played Yanyun that I have seen a long novel that suits my taste. The story description is also very logical. I can't bear to see it end [crying]

Hahaha wooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo you you guys are 16 years old from the beginning of the game?

In one sentence: shocking and delicious! ! ! ! ! ദ്ദി˶•̀֊•́)✧

Why is the rating so low! ? The teacher writes beautifully! [Cry]

The characterization and everything are so cute.

Wuwuwu, my Uncle Jiang, come home quickly. Donggua misses you so much, qaq, my wife is so good at writing! !