欲海迷舟【向哨】

Sorry, I want to explain something about the heroine's character. In the beginning, I was set to be a pleaser, gentle and tolerant. But later on, as I was writing, I got off track. Some obedient sentries are okay, but if you encounter an unreasonable mad dog sentry, you will suffer a loss, so we changed it. I feel like I've become a little bit lazy, very good at pretending, pretending to be a soft and boneless little white flower. This may be because I didn't grasp the character's personality well. I'm sorry. Then there are the male supporting characters. I'm afraid you can't tell them apart. I'll give them a brief introduction first. Xie Chen, leader of the special operations team, mental snake (green eyes) Sher Spiritual Fish (Blonde Hair and Brown Eyes) Euan Spiritual Leopard (Red Hair and Golden Eyes) Yan Mubei Spiritual Scorpion (black hair, black eyes) Song Hemian Spiritual Fox (black hair, black eyes) Lore Spiritual Polar Bear (Silver Hair) Jiang Bingxi, mental lizard (black hair, blue eyes) Rock Hill Twins Samoyed Golden Retriever (Golden Curly) Yu Xingxian, spiritual panda (black hair, black eyes) Will Spiritual Honey Badger (Silver Gray Big Back Head) You Luo Spirit Eagle (short red hair) Luke the spiritual parrot (colorful hair) Bai Yin, the spiritual body of Bai Min (silver gray hair and purple eyes) … These are for now, and the rest will be added later.

It's not bad, but the heroine's character is a bit strange and fragmented (I don't mean deliberately pretending, but the real character). I feel that the author may want to portray the heroine's more complex personality, but the writing is a bit fragmented. Emmm, let's not hide the flaws. So far, it's generally good. The description is very tense. Come on, go for it, go for it, go for it.

It's super, super good-looking, super super interesting. Those who are just starting to watch it, please don't think that the heroine has a strange personality. A normal person works as a heroine in a sadistic drama group every day and has her kidneys and heart ripped out. She also has to lick the male protagonist to complete the task. In the end, she has to fight with the male protagonist in the finale. Anyone else would be crazy. This is just a small flaw with the heroine, and it doesn't affect the viewing at all. In fact, I have been watching the latest chapter and I don't think there is anything wrong with the heroine's character. I just saw some comments, so I will say it in the comment area now. I don't think there is any problem. I think it can be fooled. It is really good-looking, but it is a pity that there are too few. I hate that I came early, but I'm afraid that I came too late and didn't discover this treasure

I think the first problem for an author is to decide who his audience is. Reading the short comments in the article, one can clearly distinguish between two groups of readers: the male mothers who start to feel sorry for the male characters when they suffer a little bit, and the lovers of male abuse who unconditionally side with the female characters. The problem of separation of heroines that is commonly reported in book reviews is most likely caused by the author trying to please both sides but not being strong enough in writing. I personally recommend that the author choose the latter type of readers. First, the author's emotional attitude can be seen between the lines of the article. Second, as the times progress, more and more young readers with progressive ideas are flooding into the market as consumers. The feedback they give you is more worth looking forward to than the former type of readers. The first female supporting character to appear is a character like Jin Yue. She reveals the sadness behind the guide's glamorous appearance and establishes an emotional connection with the heroine, reflecting the real situation of women. This is the first highlight of this article in my eyes. It proves that the author has the thinking and ability to write innovative points in works of the same theme. I hope to continue to work hard.

It looks good. I like it. I hope the heroine can continue to train the sentry like a dog and not give any good looks to those disobedient people‧⁺◟( ᵒ̴̶̥́ ·̫ ᵒ̴̶̣̥̀ )

At first, I was attracted by the beautiful cover, so I praised it [and blew a kiss]. If you look carefully at the content, it's very good. The heroine is gentle but powerful, Shirogiri Hei, and the plush ones are also very cute. The dog brigade is ruarua [love]

It feels okay. You must avenge yourself, block anyone who makes her unhappy, and fight back if you want to hurt her. It's a daily routine. Very pitiful heroine of ancient sadistic novels. I hope the system will stop and let the heroine continue to indulge [Blow kiss]

Although the heroine's personality is a bit inconsistent, she still supports being gentle to the end, and then what to do with the emotional line [face covering] [face covering] [face covering], are there multiple male protagonists? Don't just have male partners

Why is the rating so low? The character of the heroine at the beginning is a bit uncomfortable, but the characters in the back are getting better and better. The heroine has a distinct personality, and the male protagonists are also very unique. You must keep reading and improve your scores.

I really like the heroine! ! ! ! But I feel like there are some girls in the comment section who secretly love men and can't hide it. It's a bit funny to watch. This is the heroine Wei Dawen, okay bro. Seeing that there is nothing unreasonable about the heroine now, rewards and punishments are clear. Don't be affected by those people's comments. Anyway, I think the heroine is very, very good (˝ᗢ˝) And if you don't want to be affected, it's best not to read the commentary. Sister Ai Nan made my eyes darken again and again.

Overall it's ok, but the settings are a bit uncomfortable. Because I had a "pleasant" personality when doing tasks before, I was very intelligent and courageous when it came to "bad guys", but I was hesitant when making decisions, which made me feel disconnected.

This book is a bit like my graduation thesis. The ancient sadistic novel is a combination of fast travel + Xiangshao + Zerg. I can feel that the author is working hard to innovate, giving the heroine of the sadistic novel a brand new life and removing the shadow of the "abused" part. The problem is that too much will be confusing, which will test the author's writing skills. If the world view is too large, it will be difficult to integrate. It will also be a greater test for the heroine's character. I can only say that I hope the author's next work will be better.

It's good-looking, but I knew I was in danger, so I went shopping with the sentry. The sentinels started fighting each other, and the bad guys took advantage of the chaos to hurt the heroine. I was completely speechless. It was a bit disturbing, but it still gave me a five-star rating. Cheers to the author~

This subject matter is very suitable for PO, but the author writes it very well and it seems refreshing.

This article should be rated at least 9 points by now, but many Xiangshao articles on Tomato that are rated 9 points or above are not as good as this article. It's strange.

It's pretty good to watch, but the plot doesn't have any ups and downs. It's just a fun story about the heroine. From the middle period, it's all about posting with men, but due to censorship, it can't be stewed well, and the plot doesn't have a particularly clear main line. So I felt a little sleepy after watching it halfway through, so I might not continue watching it. It's good in itself, and so are the characters. Looking forward to the author's next book

Euan, that lizard, is very uncomfortable, and has always brought trouble and danger to the heroine, as well as Sher, who directly leads the heroine to deep link, and the next few are even fighting, but the heroine gradually wakes up and realizes that she is the protagonist and should live for herself. It is quite gratifying to watch. Another point that I find uncomfortable is that the heroine was actually forced by some sentinels in the early stage. If we have to wait until the third volume to rise, that would be too long...

I just watched it and wanted to post something [cover face][cover face][cover face] I would like to advise you, after reading this book for a while, I think it is good, so don't read the paragraph reviews [face covering] I have always loved reading paragraph reviews, and I think this book is good (I just like reading this type of book), but I am going to be persuaded by the paragraph reviews. I feel that what they say is right, but I still like it very much. I have always been the kind of person who has no opinion. I think if I read the paragraph review again, I will be persuaded to leave. So I am posting this to say that I will turn off the paragraph review of this book. I will read it and add more. If it is good, I can recommend it to you [face covering] Of course, I still advise you to read the review. What if you are offended by some of the plots in it? If you think it is good, you can turn it off. I really can't stand it, I hope the author will do more work! I have only read Chapter 1 or 2 now [Thinking] Then I watched it [Like]

Dog training... Dog... Literature?! ! ! It's so fragrant, I ate it so much [crying]

The heroine's life is really exciting, with ups and downs like an electrocardiogram. Love makes people blind, and they can abandon everything to chase the heroine. It's not easy being the heroine, but luckily there is a lunatic who keeps going! The heroine's tribe is also really friendly to her.

The subject matter is very interesting! It's just that the heroine's personality is very fragmented. One second she is abusing the heroine, and the next second she is enjoying the heroine. The change is too fast. The female characters are very good, not all of them except the heroine are brainless and vicious. Unfortunately, I don't like the male protagonists very much. I can't feel the love and sexual tension! No, Flathead Brother is very interesting, and the male protagonists are diverse, which is great!

The heroine is the most powerful dog trainer in Pan Hong Park. She really loves the heroine who is decent in person and can block people behind her back as she pleases. Hehehe, the author's internet speed is very fast.

The Invincible is good to watch, and it has a plot that is not very clear-cut. I stayed up late to finish it. There are many male characters with different personalities, and they are not stereotyped. The heroine has a good personality, a strong identity, and it's so cool. She combines Shao Xiangwen and Zerg novels at the same time. The two chefs are ecstatic. The most important thing is that you can feel the female thoughts conveyed by the author. This aspect is also very good.

It's pretty good, and I support it a lot, but it's a bit sad that it's not finished.

This book gets better and better as I read it. Although it may be a bit awkward to read at the beginning, it does not affect my enjoyment of this book.

Super good-looking, heartthrob with brains! I really like this kind of novel where the heroine has her own thoughts

The heroine belongs to the white-cut-black type. At first, she pretended to be weak to win the sympathy of the sentry. Later, her personality began to change into a strong and retributive character, and she began to be herself. She no longer indulged in the character design of the sadistic heroine who was begged by the male director. She was in a dominant position in the relationship with the sentry, from being passive in the game to taking the initiative by showing off her strength.

I can read the big text, and finally I can eat delicious food. It tastes so good that I want to cry.

Ah, it's so beautiful. I just hope that the follow-up plot will not be bloody, misunderstood, or harmful.

I really think it's the best one in the Xiang Shao Wen I've read! The author's writing is good, and the drama between men is very exciting. The most important thing is that the heroine's growth is also well written. I love reading it! The author must persevere! I will keep chasing!