Fast Travel: Stop as the Original Script Says

I love watching this type of drama, Ju Shuang. The female protagonist really loves herself, is selfish but not annoying. On the contrary, she makes the male protagonists feel sorry for her and understand her. I hope that the third marriage can accept all the male protagonists [laughs]

Progress 35-97, haven't seen the first world. The author especially likes to use "afterwords" to spoil the story, and often says "this is the afterword". I don't like spoilers of any kind. All non-male C. Other plots are okay, no big problems

It's good to watch, but the experience of writing about the original protagonist in the first world was too long. I almost didn't finish reading it. I skipped to read the next ones. The latter ones are all very well written. Although the heroine is self-interested but principled, she will not put all her thoughts on men. She is very sober and rational. I like this kind of heroine, but the update is too slow. I am so anxious to wait😣😣😣😣

The title of the book can be changed to "Quick Travel: The Female Protagonist's Meat-eating Journey". As long as the female protagonist takes a little action, high-quality single men ranging from 40 to 18 years old will be the dishes of the female protagonist. It's a bit greasy sometimes, so it's more suitable for POs who aren't so particular about writing.

The heroine has been collecting stamps, and she collects all kinds of beautiful men, which is quite interesting. It's just a bit unacceptable to give birth to a litter of children at every turn. It feels like a tool for childbirth. I hope young and infertile readers will not believe it. After all, in reality, it is difficult to find another child once you have one.

The author is a growth-oriented author. Recently, I have received feedback from many readers. They think that the first small world and the experience of the original owner are too long. I have changed it. Really, I will make the next story more compact so that everyone will not feel uncomfortable reading the book. Really! Please give everyone a chance to look back [smile] This book has already written 450,000 words. Many readers have received mixed reviews after reading it. Especially the first story, many readers found it painful to read. I am deeply sorry for this. I have always wanted to find a time to perfect and revise it, but I found that revising is actually to replace some plots, which is equivalent to rewriting. I also know that many readers gave up on this book because of the first ten chapters, and I'm sorry for that, but I understand. It's the same for me. While I'm writing a book, I'm also a reader. There are so many good books in the bookstore, so there's really no need to stick to a flawed book. But as an author, I still hope that readers can give this book a chance, and I will revise the first story again when it is about to be completed.

It's very interesting. He really loves the heroine, instead of pretending to love her but ends up abusing her. However, there is a caveat: this book is not suitable for those who pursue a wise and moral character. After all, reading a book is good as long as it feels comfortable. Personally, I can still accept it. It is very changeable. Sometimes I can accept it, and sometimes I can't. It may depend on the author's writing skills. If there are no other greater advantages, then more attention will be paid to the logical aspect. If there are other better aspects, it can be ignored intermittently. Overall, I personally think it looks pretty good^ω^. Mainly because I love the heroine

I feel that one world is more beautiful than the other. I really like the third world. It is making great progress and the writing is very exciting. It is rare to see this kind of fast-travel system. It seems that it does not exist. Basically, there are no tasks. Then each world feels like many people are good, which is very touching, and then there is nothing top-notch. The heroine's personality is also very good, she does whatever she wants. It is really fun to read. I like this type of reading.

I like it very much, it's warm and romantic, the heroine's aura is amazing, any man with whom I have a relationship will love him forever, I envy the heroine, I read Sweet

It looks pretty cool. The heroine also handles things neatly and he doesn't take off his clothes. I like the heroine's figure and beauty. In fact, if he can do it, I think he can take them all [face covering] Especially the last one, I think he eats very well, the heroine.

The author's narration method is very unique. He will explain the original plot clearly first, so there will be no uncomfortable feeling. It is not recommended to over-examine the heroine's character design and the heroine's approach. The heroine has good looks and can be said to be a bit of a heartthrob. I don't know how to write book reviews, it's just that it's good-looking and fits my taste. The author loves the heroine very much. The hero hangs around the heroine and won't embarrass the heroine. It makes her look yellow [shy][shy][shy][shy]

My body feels warm when I see it. The protagonist of this article is the one who has a strong sense of deservingness. She is more beautiful than any other heroine. Unlike other novels where the heroine always has various regrets despite her good writing skills, in this novel the male protagonist always misses the heroine who is so good.

There are several worlds that I skipped to watch. I didn't watch the first world, I didn't finish the second world, and the third world was great. The original owner is really powerful and vicious. The part where the heroine got along with her uncle's family made me cry. The uncle was so kind to the original owner. The fourth world made me angry. Yan Yu was so annoying. The fifth world was skipped. The sixth world I think I don't need to write the extra. I fixed the task to follow Li Nanfeng. There are punishments and rewards for getting married and having children. In the main text, Li Zhen died for Li Nanfeng. He definitely couldn't get over that hurdle and couldn't take that step. In the extra story, Li Nanfeng's negative emotions directly fixed Li Zhen to death. Li Zhen died to save the heroine, or Li Nanfeng drove the car, which is even more impossible. In the end, there was a hasty ending and the two of them received the certificate. When I saw the punishment at the beginning of the next world, I couldn't stand it. I think the one about Three Marriages is the best written, the characters are all vivid. The author writes very well and the setting is very interesting. Come on😘

It's very interesting except for the first story. I almost stopped reading it because of it, but the more I read it, the more interesting it becomes and I'm really improving. The author, I want to know if you have written the follow-up to Li Jian and Zhou Qin's version. It's heart-breaking🙋‍♀️

(Contains mild spoilers) Beautiful! It's just that the first world has too many grooves and feels like it can be skipped. There are only 34 chapters in total. As a result, 16 chapters recall the past relationship and the life of the original owner, interspersed with a bit of time travel to the real world and the life of the husband before. I originally thought that the heroine was an aunt who mainly focused on her husband, but I didn't expect that after seeing several worlds, my previous thoughts were overturned. It is completely female-centered. The female protagonist basically focuses on her own requirements and comfort, and will not wrong herself. The further back I read, the more I can feel that the author is getting better and better, and the more he writes, the better. Now I have seen the world of high-ranking officials. Up to this many worlds, the family members every time the heroine has met are very nice, treating her well and thinking about her. Although this is not practical in some environments, readers love to read it. I quite like to see this kind of family affection in fast travel. After all, human beings are not only about love. The world of high-ranking officials also surprised me. There is actually a reincarnation of a man and a renewed relationship with the heroine. I originally thought that the writing of this article was already very good, but the sudden appearance of this plot is really eye-catching. So far, it looks generally good, except for the first world, which is really terrible. Fortunately, I continued reading at that time, otherwise it would be a pity to miss the rest.

Let's give it a good review. It depends on personal preference. It looked okay at first, but after the first world, there were more and more men. It felt like watching harem stories on male videos in the past. It was really a bit shocking to me [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying]

Except for the first story, which is a bit delayed, the rest are very interesting.

The author's writing skills are quite impressive, and the story is written in a simple and real way. The parents' shortcomings, the sophistication of the world, and the love of their children are all described in a sensible and sensible way. The plot is compact and smooth, without any trace of AI polishing, and it can easily arouse the resonance of readers. The setting of a sibling relationship between a girl and a boy is quite rare among period novels, but it is handled just right and does not make people feel uncomfortable. Although the pace of the first story at the beginning is a little slow, the overall flaws are not concealed and do not affect the reading quality of the entire article.

One word is "immortal". She is a heroine who is measured, not weak, treats herself well, and puts herself first. Every time I click on the update, I am so excited. It is so beautiful [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] The author is so classy.

The more you write, the better. Three marriages in the third world are particularly good, and you can catch all the good men in one go [you taste it carefully]

Although many male protagonists and female protagonists have great auras, I still like to watch them. The female protagonist is free and easy and lazy. In order to live a good life and live a good life, she really works hard. Although the target of the efforts is the male protagonists, it is not killing two birds with one stone. When life is good, there is a handsome guy. How great hahaha

The first one written by the original author is longer, but the following ones are very good-looking. I like them so much. They are time-travelling. [Praise]

After watching the plot of the third marriage, it was really interesting. However, after watching the plot of the capitalist at the end, I felt that it was almost the same as the previous one. Can the author write a plot other than a chronicle? For example, fantasy, arena, etc. (Note: The above is my personal understanding, please don't criticize if you don't like it)

Super good-looking, really egoistic, but not ungrateful, very sober, really old, very good-looking, highly recommended

This book is my favorite among the fast-travel novels I have read. The author is really great. The heroine Gao Xin in the story lives up to what I want. I hope the author will continue to write this type of novel. I really like it.

Unlike a novice author, the plot is very relaxed and sophisticated. Only the first plane is a bit awkward and can be jumped over, but the rest are quite nice and enjoyable. It's better than many chronicle novels, but the score is so low! ! ! I want to give you full marks for pulling him up.

It's worth watching. You still need to be married and experienced to time travel. Don't hesitate, just take it. Eat and drink when you should, and enjoy it when you are lucky.

Super good-looking, multiple male protagonists, quick travel, system, space, childbirth, spiritual spring~(˶╹ꇴ╹˶)~Shuangwen

Come on, author! Super pretty! ! ! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

The author can write about the first world of lightning protection in the introduction and write down the reasons clearly, it will be much better [Like]