The Awakening of the Red Mansion

I can't believe I found a Red Mansions fanfic that doesn't distort Baoyu and take the "righteous path" and at the same time doesn't dismantle Baodai! There are some minor flaws in the plot and writing, but it is really a gentle story, so good.

Very pretty. The mentality of raising children is almost the same. The seeds you plant may not bear fruit, but if you don't plant them, everyone will starve to death... Although I was a little confused when I saw the protagonist kill Xue Pan, haha, it took half a year to open a shop, but it only took three days to plot to kill someone [laughing]

This is the best one I have read among Tomato Red Mansion fans so far. The characters are non-OOC and the descriptions of various details are very realistic. If nothing else, the author must have read the original work, especially the chapter about Baochai's awakening. I was very moved.

So far, the three views are very upright, and there is no pedantic and feudal part of my thinking (not to blame, but this point has been criticized by many old sayings!). I fell in love with it because I read the comments that each maid has her own personality. The author's writing style is also very good, please be sure to read more [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]

The rating is too low. I think it should be a 9.9. It's so well written.

Although it is still a seedling, it can already be predicted by looking at the leopard. The overall context of the article is towards warm and daily life, but the spoken language is not fluent. The character's personality is neither suspended above the world of Red Mansions, and over-correction has become a tool to whitewash the face; nor is it too boring, following the plot and following the trend, without innovation; nor does it suffer from the protagonist's disease. For the original characters, those who follow me will prosper and those who go against me will perish. Instead, it retains the aftertaste of Cao Gong and describes each character as objectively as possible. While shifting the subject's perspective, it shows us another possibility of the world of Red Mansions, as if a hand was gently fiddling with the dice. If I had to pick a shortcoming, it would be that the word count is too small. Less than 200,000 words can only be counted as two copies. The protagonist has just integrated into society and started his career, and I saw the sign urging updates.

This is the first time I have read Red Mansions fanfics in so many years. There are almost no cheats, no cracking of Bao Dai CP, and no hacking of anyone. Reading the author's words, I feel that he is a person with a very warm heart, and it is not easy for him to meet everyone. I can understand each character without being OOC. There are several things that shocked me. First of all, Baochai's cold scented pills suppressed her inner enthusiasm. Also, a person with the ambition of "good wind will send me to the blue clouds by force" will never be calm and like a Bodhisattva. Secondly, there was the quarrel between Jia Mu and the heroine Gu Luo after Lin Daiyu rescued people, and the conversation between the two when they met Yuan Chun for the second time, which allowed me to see the tacit understanding and transfer of power between the two pillars of the Jia family. Finally, there is the part where Baoyu and Dai confess their feelings. Baoyu confesses everything, and Daiyu also truthfully expresses her thoughts, "We only need to be worthy of our own hearts." That's what love is all about, don't be afraid to experience it, just do whatever you want. I think Red Mansions fans are actually most annoyed by the authors finding princes, princes, ministers and generals for Daiyu. This makes me feel that Daiyu is just a cover for the author, and those original male protagonists are their ideal types. Obviously in the original work, the two decided to be together because of their spiritual compatibility, but it was given a ridiculous ending in the last forty chapters. But two people who pursue spiritual transcendence wouldn't find someone like this, right?

The most important thing about a fanfic is not to be OOC. This is one of the Red Mansions fanfics I have read that has the most respect for the original character design. Later on, the author will gradually have his own reasonable settings. It is a fan of Red Mansions, but it is another reasonable and exciting story. The supporting characters such as Mrs. Wang and Xiang Ling are slightly OOC, so it's harmless.

Well, the author has pity for the girls in the original novel and does not cheat to help these daughters grow up. What moved me the most was the chapter where Baochai smashed Lengxiang Pills. Baochai's suppressed heat poison was broken by himself.

A very nice story about the setting of the Red Mansion, without the exaggeration of ordinary time travel stories. The heroine also retains the three views of modern people and subtly affects the girls. They are awakening little by little, hoping that they will have a different ending.

It doesn't tear down Bao Dai or maliciously attack the female characters in the book. Almost all the characters have grown up on their own, which is really good.

It's good-looking. It's not the kind of fake and empty writing. It conforms to certain common sense and won't make people laugh.

The best book about Red Mansion fanfiction The layout is much larger. Not only does Shi Sanchai have an independent consciousness, but also the maids have personalities.

I must give it five stars. It is an article that allows all girls to have a happy ending without tearing down Bao Dai and respecting their ideas. Love it! At first glance, the author has read Red Mansions many times and has a deep understanding of it. He is many times better than those conspiracy theorists. He clearly understands the tragedy of Red Mansions. The protagonist's change of thinking from time to time is also very logical. It is a novel that truly fits the times and strives to find a good ending. The portrayal of Bao Dai's love is also very good. Many people can't understand Bao Dai's understanding and cherishment of each other, but this article restores it particularly well. In my opinion, it can be regarded as one of the top Red Mansion fan stories. I hope more people will rate it highly.

It looks good, and this angle is relatively new, and it writes a different kind of thinking from multiple angles.

This is one of the best-structured novels in Red Mansions that I have ever read. I really like these girls. Even if they are attacking, I feel a little sympathy for them. There are many authors and faster updates. I bought a membership specifically for this novel.

It's super good-looking. It's the best-looking Red Mansion fanfic I've ever read on Tomato. Why is the rating so low?

Nice! Who knows the value of thunder at present [crying] Come and take a look ah ah ah ah [sending my heart] [sending my heart]

Seeing that it is over, the girls in the Red Mansion all have their own good endings. Bao Dai finally came together. The front edge of wood and stone has been completed. Although there are some shortcomings, the overall situation is still very good. Come on

It was well written, and it didn't distort any of the girls. They were all good sisters. Although the ending was a bit rushed, it was generally not bad.

It's a very good novel with great potential. The author's writing style is also good. Please keep updating and don't cheat [love][love][love]

The content of this book is very substantial, and the writing style is also good. However, the endings of everyone are not completely written. It feels a little unfinished, and there is a lack of extra chapters, so it cannot meet my expectations. But I never imagined that Daiyu would study medicine.

The writing is really good. This is the first time I feel that Mrs. Wang is just stupid and bad, but not hopeless. She can be saved through time travel.

It's very interesting. The heroine also tried her best to help the women in the red mansion in the feudal society. They have so many ambitions and talents to display. It's female-friendly.

An excellent Dream of Red Mansions fanfic, it's really rare not to tear down Bao Dai! The logic is self-consistent, everyone has grown up, and finally I am no longer a nerd. Come on, author!

You can read it if you are in a book shortage

It can be finished, but don't leave it unfinished. So far, the plot line has not collapsed, nor has the character, so stick to the end.

Not bad. Girls are self-reliant and self-reliant. Even Baoyu has changed a bit.

It's very beautiful, I feel like it's well written.

This is the best-written Red Mansions fanfic I have ever seen. The author must keep writing.