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It's good-looking and has great potential. It's a rare good novel among Tomato Elf novels. The descriptions of each character and the participation in various events are handled well. The protagonist has a very distinct personality, dares to love and hate, has clear goals, and has a lot of interactions with the elves, and the interactions are very harmonious, making people feel the beauty of the elf world, unlike ordinary elf literature. The writing style is a bit green, which is more evident in the previous chapters, but I feel that the author is getting smoother as he writes. Good review! It is a very promising article like I Have a Giant Crab.

Without talent levels or dark orientation, Pokémon should be a utopia.

The writing is okay, but there is no command during the battle! Not used to it!

Very nice Pokémon article, five stars for this article. The interactions between the protagonist and Pokémon and the people along the way are vividly written, without the rigidity of a running account copy.

The writing is good, but there is something wrong with the timeline about super evolution. Did Dr. Buratano release any information about super evolution at this time? I can't remember clearly, but I remember that there shouldn't be one, and the protagonist can read information about the super evolutionary stone from the magazine. I don't think Wu Neng, as a stone enthusiast, would know this information

Everything was fine in the beginning, until Vulpix came out, and I couldn't stand this kind of description of Pokémon... Original text: "But the trembling tail of the Six-Tails told Shao Wan that this guy had a mortal heart. Shao Wan gently gathered the tail, slowly twisted it, and then picked it again, until the six tails felt like they were crispy. "

This author has a lot of old memes, hahaha This book is not a good read. Even in the league, it only made it to the top 100 and was eliminated by the future flying king Adusha. However, the interactions with the elves and other people are all vividly depicted. Anyway, I quite like it.

At first glance, it is a very good Pokémon fan work. The character designs in the first fifty or so pictures are very attractive, but the shortcomings are also obvious. The main line is not clear enough, and the characters are not rich enough. It feels like they are written casually and have no theme. I don't know what the main line of this work is? But now there are hundreds of them but still no one cares. Personally, if this is an immature suggestion, I suggest that we advance the main storyline as soon as possible and not be so hypocritical [laughing].

It's a very good book. It's full of ideas and the story is not cliché. It's hard to believe that this is a hands-on work. If I have to say a flaw, it's that the number of words is too few and the author doesn't seem to have any other works.

Very good, very to my liking

Full marks, I love watching this kind of non-conspiracy, funny and good-looking movies

Author, do you plan to let the circle bear evolve into the moon bear? But if you really plan to evolve, the mud inside Chuan'a will be a bit troublesome. I don't know how the He Yue in Beishang Township was transformed. Yes, this is the feeling you want. Pokémon is a fairy tale world. Don't always think about the Dark Flow or leading a team of mythical beasts and then crazily filling cups and starting a harem. Traveling around the world and cultivating bonds is the essence of Pokémon. And to be honest, the fairy-tale world of Pokémon, where human technology and Pokémon power are combined to create extremely developed productivity, is not suitable for the Dark Flow.

Very good story

I think it's pretty good

Okay, it suits my taste

Shuanhuan is very beautiful

It can be seen that the author really likes Pokémon

It's obvious that the author really likes Pokémon

There are some minor issues, but the author has improved them enough to pass the time.

It looks good, but could the author be a little longer?

The author's writing is indeed good. The protagonist is not a deus ex machina, and the characterizations are quite interesting.

To give him a full extension, I voted this point, but I also enjoyed watching it.

It's very well written, I hope you can stick with it

A very comfortable Pokémon novel, and catching Pokémon is easy. It's also at the top of Tomato, but I don't know why no one is watching it.

Unlike Tomato's other Pokémon-type books, the dark flavor is not that strong. Reading the whole book is like watching an interesting road movie.

Although there were some places where I was jumping around, it was really immersive and I could move to Pokémon that was willing to follow me. I really looked forward to it.

I thought the protagonist was Qianshu, but after reading more than ten chapters, I found out that the protagonist was Shao Wan [laughing and crying] I originally thought it was about developing the farming culture of Yuejian Town.